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for Number Disconnected

by Deb

person Shinigami02
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bakas! *hits Heero and Duo over the head* How could you fight????? *tears up and bites on a hanky* Anyways, great story!!!!
person darkangel_1210
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What Rez said is a good idea though. I can\'t stop thinking about Zech\'s face when he finds out that Duo and Heero are lovers! There are little scenes going round in my head where this is happening, just wish that it could have happened when Duo met Quatre, Zech\'s could have wandered in as well and known who Duo was. I was sitting on the edge of my seat wondering when Zech\'s was going to come in! I wonder if Quatre ended up telling Zech\'s?
person darkangel_1210
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good story! I was nearly in tears when Heero and Duo had that argument I was that choked up! Very nerve racking as well when Heero went to try and get Duo\'s forgiveness. I couldn\'t stop reading the first one and now there\'s a sequel I can indulge my time in also! Yay!

Keep writing!

darkangel_1210
person Kugatsu
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please! i need to know about zechs and treize!!
*sob*
person Rez
schedule February 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
General, huh? Could that be lil 'ol Treize I wonder? LOL. It would have been priceless if you had Angelwing and Heero's former company do business. That way Zechs could have been present at the meeting between Heero, Duo and the company. Could you just imagine his face when Duo spoke? That would be too funny. And furthermore after seeing the face behind the voice to the most satisfying phone sex he had ever had, wouldn't it be funny to see Zechs witness Heero and Duo kiss? That would have been good. PLus if it finally registered in Zech's mind that Heero had been the one to inform 'Lightning' of the disconnected number? Oh well. What's past is past. In any case, good sequel. Gotta luv those angsty fics with the yaoi-ful happy endings!
person Takaro
schedule February 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic ^_^ I love all of it. I read 'Call Me' too ^_^ Both great
person Serafina
schedule February 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW.. I loved the first fic and this is even better! You've managed to pull off the jelous boyfriend without turrning it into 'Jerry Springer's ~ I hate my lover's sexy job'
So are Heero and Duo gonna go into buisness together now? maybe desighn me some video games to play? ^_-
Anxously awaiting the next lemon ( i still need a cold shower from the last one... )
JA!!

Seraph
person Rez
schedule January 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn. That was great.w yow you just need to keep up with the chapters. I thought "Call me" was great, and I can tell that this one is goping to be good too. Well, good stuff. Write more.
person Kar
schedule December 9, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! The sequel is even better than original piece! *is happy beyond meassure* I really liked all the angstyness you threw in...*cackles*...angstyness is one of my favorite ingredients in a fic! ^_^ I liked how Duo´s and Heero´s new relationship suddenly got all troubled, and I totally understood how Heero must have felt. >_< Jealousy is wicked awful thi.*gr.*growlssnifsniffle* I felt so bad for Duo when Heero got more and more jealous...and to think that Heero actually *believed* what Zechs said?! Baka. >_< Heh, I liked that Quatre was in here too ^_^ He´s so nice! (My fave GW pilot after the almighty Shinigami!) *sighs* Phew...good thing they worked it all out! As much as I crave angstyness, I really prefer a happy ending!


Ja ne, Kari aka The Girl Who´s Reading Way Too Many Fics These Days (Is That Even Possible?)

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