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for Thin Lines

by SelenityJade

person rychefan
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love it just love it hope you will update again sometime
person Sunburst
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha, he was a tad too soft, but I enjoyed this nevertheless
person Sunburst
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this chapter. This is definitely the man he would show Bulma.
person Sunburst
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Before I even forget, didn't finish the chapter yet, but I don't think Bulma would be that psychotic and mean...I hated her in this chapter.
person Sunburst
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I might even hate her for the rest of the store *glares* Hmm...
person Sunburst
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, all was forgiven by the time I finished the chapter. It was pretty sweet *embarrassed smile*
person Sunburst
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*rolls eyes* I hope Bulma isn't always going to be such a wimp in the bedroom. Poor Veggie. Or perhaps I'm just a ruffian.
person Sunburst
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I headed the OOC warning but *raises eyebrow* Anyway, I guess a little sweetness never hurt nobody :)
person Sunburst
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bulma at times can be entirely too whiny in this, but I guess this is all before Trunks and she grows up a bit *cringe*
person Sunburst
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice wrap-up nevertheless, I stayed up to read all of this despite being sick, and for now I will consider this my ending (which wouldn't be so bad). Ja ne!

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