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AHAHAHA! I LOVE THIS! TOO MUCH FUNNY IN HERE:

"She had provided for him, and her mother had doted on him, much to his annoyance. That Onna's mother is a complete moron. I am surprised she lived long enough to birth a child, let alone one as intelligent as the Onna."

"He groaned. Damn fantasies. He glared as he reacted and attempted to think about Kakarotto and his harpy of a mate, Furiza destroying his planet, Zarbon's ugly transformation, and felt himself calm."

"He supposed it was ironic. He wanted the damn weak Onna. He wanted to talk with her and yell at her, protect her and hate her, caress her and kill her. Damn her!"

Lol I didn't mind this chapter in the least. You have a great writing style!

I think you've struck one of the best balances in Vegeta's personality I've seen. This seems way more canon. So many make him way too harsh. This is more true to the Japanese Vegeta.

this is the first story i have read with this type of story line . . . and i really like it. Honestly i have like ALL of your stories i have read so far.

please, please, update, this has been my favorite story for the longest time. I really like the way you potray the character b/c the perfectly accurate!!!

please new chapter soon...PLEASE!!

Wonderful! I hope the story doesn\'t really end there. I suppose it could but it\'s just begging for another chapter or four ;0)
I love your work. :0)

plz plz plz update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-)

Hey I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed your story. I hope you update soon. Because I want to read more!! Well, please keep writing. And if you are going to update, please update soon.

I think if I was in bed with Vegita I would be the one purring...