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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love this.
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Actually some people do read the authors notes occasionally. Don\'t worry, you are not wierd, I get into tickle fests that turn into wrestling matches and giggle frequently, much to my husbands dismay (I won\'t mention the embarrassing things I did to a boyfriend back when I was twenty. Needless to say I discovered there were things that the masculine pride just couldn\'t take during certain interludes, no matter how light-hearted ^_^. LOL). Anyway, you did a great job with the lemons and don\'t worry if Vegeta is a little OOC, this is AU after all. Make him the way you want him (so far I think you are doing an excellent job with him! Very sexy!) ^__^
Thank you.
Thank you.
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHOA very awesome story so far...i think ur doing great w/ vejitas character..*sigh* hes so sexy..ok anyways update A.S.A.P b/c i cant WAIT to read more of it!!! P.S. Keep up the good work!!! *huggles* o.o um eh ok ill stop now.
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just started on this fic: Reviewing chapters 1 - 3
I love the idea that Vejiita came to the earth due to injuries, rathern thn the fact of coming to battle Goku.
I don\'t care that Vejiita is slightly OOC, that\'s the beauty of AU, you can take the characters beyond the boundaries set by the show.
I love that Vejiita is only allowing contact from Bulma and I like the way she is dealing with him.
Really enjoyed the scene where Vegeta discovered that he had his tail wrapped around Bulma\'s waist and spent the time she was talking to Goku, glaring at his tail as if it was a naughty child. So cute :-)
Like the way Goku and Vejiita are interacting at the moment. Vejiita is realistically distant from him and scornful of the fact that he doesn\'t appear to exhibit any Saiya-jin tendencies, whilst Goku is assertive yet respul. ul. I like to think that maybe they will form a friendship much sooner than they did in the show.
Oh damn, that was an exceedingly seductive lemon. I loved every word, every movement, every soft breath of the Saiya-jin Prince as he held Bulma in his strong arms...I don\'t blame Bulma for not saying no :-)
Oh Gods! and what a way to wake up! Lucky Bulma :-)
\"He snorted. \"n\'tn\'t you paying attention earlier when I was telling you this?\"\"
\"She shook her head. \"Not really, I was distracted.\"\"
LOL! Loved this!
Vejiita\'s reaction when Goku interrupted his moment with Bulma was wonderful, I loved that he kept right on thrusting, and just told Bulma:
\"Better tell you\'re friend you\'re okay, otherwise I won\'t get to finish and I\'ll be very angry.\"
LOL! Good stuff :-)
I love the way you are portraying ChiChi in this :-)
I really liked the scene with Kami and Vejiita\'s telepathy with Bulma. Vejiita\'s outrage was quite understandable when he thought that Kami was going to discuss his lindernder Frieza\'s rule. but I really loved his indignant denial of mating with Bulma being his destiny, when he considers his only destiny to be that of attaining Super Saiya-jin status :-)
I love that Vejiita-sei is still in existence and I hope that Kami\'s prophecies come true :-)
I can\'t catch up all at once, as I have things to do now, but when I read more, I will continue my reviews...love this!
I love the idea that Vejiita came to the earth due to injuries, rathern thn the fact of coming to battle Goku.
I don\'t care that Vejiita is slightly OOC, that\'s the beauty of AU, you can take the characters beyond the boundaries set by the show.
I love that Vejiita is only allowing contact from Bulma and I like the way she is dealing with him.
Really enjoyed the scene where Vegeta discovered that he had his tail wrapped around Bulma\'s waist and spent the time she was talking to Goku, glaring at his tail as if it was a naughty child. So cute :-)
Like the way Goku and Vejiita are interacting at the moment. Vejiita is realistically distant from him and scornful of the fact that he doesn\'t appear to exhibit any Saiya-jin tendencies, whilst Goku is assertive yet respul. ul. I like to think that maybe they will form a friendship much sooner than they did in the show.
Oh damn, that was an exceedingly seductive lemon. I loved every word, every movement, every soft breath of the Saiya-jin Prince as he held Bulma in his strong arms...I don\'t blame Bulma for not saying no :-)
Oh Gods! and what a way to wake up! Lucky Bulma :-)
\"He snorted. \"n\'tn\'t you paying attention earlier when I was telling you this?\"\"
\"She shook her head. \"Not really, I was distracted.\"\"
LOL! Loved this!
Vejiita\'s reaction when Goku interrupted his moment with Bulma was wonderful, I loved that he kept right on thrusting, and just told Bulma:
\"Better tell you\'re friend you\'re okay, otherwise I won\'t get to finish and I\'ll be very angry.\"
LOL! Good stuff :-)
I love the way you are portraying ChiChi in this :-)
I really liked the scene with Kami and Vejiita\'s telepathy with Bulma. Vejiita\'s outrage was quite understandable when he thought that Kami was going to discuss his lindernder Frieza\'s rule. but I really loved his indignant denial of mating with Bulma being his destiny, when he considers his only destiny to be that of attaining Super Saiya-jin status :-)
I love that Vejiita-sei is still in existence and I hope that Kami\'s prophecies come true :-)
I can\'t catch up all at once, as I have things to do now, but when I read more, I will continue my reviews...love this!