rate_review Reviews

It\'s a cool story, but I suggest a beta reader. There are some grammatical errors as well as other stuff that need to be fixed.

All i can say is WOW WOW WOW that was soooooo grreat when is the next chippy coming out i just can\'t wait to see what happen next :)

This is a very interesting AU story. Please by all means continue.

now why would quatre pass out? is it because he is afraid of what may happen if those two see each other naked, or the fact that heero may hurt duo? also, having a mute duo seems a little weird. do u plan on having him get his voice back any time soon? overall, i\'ve always loved reading master and slave fics since so much can happen. i can\'t wait to see your next update.

This is a very good story. I am hoping that you will update more like today or tomarrow. Really good.