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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... that was great! definitely the best FMA fic on this site! would like to see what else you got in store if you ever feel up to writing again!
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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it, it was soooooooooooo adorable!!!!!!!!!!!!! I\'m not a big fan on Winrey tho...but I absoutly love Ed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was awesome!!!!!!!!!
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD That was great. To me, it\'s pretty rare to find where the female\'s dominant. Tee hee. I love EdxWinry (or WinryxEd) and this was pretty damn good. ^^
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i liked this a lot!!!! bravo to you! and your name is hysterical! have you ever read Tanya Huff\'s Valor series? they do have elves from space there (sex crazed maniacs too. invented cocunut rubbing oil before the wheel. interesting species, those Taykans....fun too!) write more!!
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December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m hoping that thar is going to be another chater to this. Because I\'m realy impressed and that\'s a vary hard thing to do.
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December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"Very good\" save for the fact that the kemon is pretty taken from a douj, isn\'t it?
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November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well done, I give it 10,000,000,000,000 stars and a A++++++++++ rating just exelent, one of my favs for shure lol, need another chapter to this or a sequil, don\'t let us wait any longer, I hate Clifhangers!!!! lol, exelently done and concived, * aplouads and bowes * your a master writer
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November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely in love with this story. I love the way it was written and the way you wrote Winry seems true to her character. Great job!
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
a good read the only thing that bugged me is that if you're labelling it NC-17 why not go ahead and say penis instead of "IT"?
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September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was a good story. the only thing that threw me off alot was the use of the words "it" and "them" to describe ed's body parts. it's pretty obvious what you're talking about so you might as well go on and say penis or balls or whatever terminology you want. it'll make the sentences flow better.