rate_review Reviews

Whoa....that...was an AWESOME story. The whole Ed/Winry pairing is SEVERELY under represented in the fanfiction world...instead it's full of yaoi fics that are WAY too far from canon. I loved how you wrote both winry and ed. You were really true to the series. The sex in the story was well written too, it wasn't all smut, but it had a good solid story behind it. A very cute and sweet ending. Keep up the good work, I can't wait for more stories from you!

I've read this story a couple of times. I like it for a couple of reasons: M/F and I like how you don't ignore that Ed is a multiple amputee.

I liked it, one of the few winry/ed fics and well done :) and a lemon >_> You going to write 2nd chap or leave it as oneshot?

I LOVED IT!!!!! You must make a sequel where they get married... okie? OKIE! Loved the story and wish there was more!!!

~Chikky

Woo! Not elricest! The fact that it is well written, interesting and funny is merely an added bonus ;). And yeah, Manga!Winry roxors. Course, this is becuase I have been unable to order the Anime, but whatever. Great fic!

I don\'t particularly like yaoi but i tolerate it but its always refreshing to read some thing that doesnt involve guy on guy which there are alot of if I say so myself. :) Keep up the great work cant wait to read some more. ^_^

Hmm, more would be nice... those two are such a cute couple.

wow, that was great. We need more storys as good as this one.

keep writing :D

*bounces* I really enjoyed this - it was humorous, clever, and veddy, veddy hot all in one nicely packaged story. ^__^

I am a hardcore yaoi fangirl. I believe that Winry x Ed would not work well in the long run. And despite all this, I love this fic into itty-bitty-teeny-tiny pieces. The playing with the automail sockets was sexier than it had any right of being. And your Winry is manga!Winry. DUDE. Manga!Winry kicks so many kinds of ass that if she would be able to produce semen, I\'d have her babies! ....er. <.<;;;; Back on track. Wahaha, Winry doesn\'t need a whip or kinky latex clothes to be a dominatrix! X3 And that\'s why I prefer this fic to Brightdreamer\'s (who used anime!Winry in her fic, as opposed to your manga!Winry) Win Winry. Winry would SO top Ed during sex. XD

Again, I\'m a yaoi fangirl who doesn\'t like Winry x Ed. And I LOVE THIS FIC. *worship worship*

Give yourself a pat on the back, girl. You deserve it. ^^