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for Jail Birds

by Toby7

person yui
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it
person Martin from LA
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I stumbled uon this website, interested in lesbian prison strories. I searched \"jail\", and found this. I didn\'t actually read it, but I still think that you have the whole \"prison gang\" idea all wrong. For example, here is \"La Eme\" or, the \"Mexican Mafia\" in California prisons.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mexican_Mafia

They are among the alrgest racial gangs, alongside the Aryan Brotherhood, and others.

Also, I recommend the film Bound by Honor {AKA \"Blood in, Blood out\"} which is a fascinating film, actual shot in San Quentin. Only La Eme is replaced with the fictionalised \"La Onda\", and the Aryan Brotherhood is replaced with the \"Aryan Canguard\". And tye created an all-Black gang, called the \"B.G.A\"

This is not a review of your story, which I take no interest in. This is just a recommendation for the author.
person Gin
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update soon? Please? *big anime style teary eyes* Pwease?
person Gin
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gin: I really like ho wthis is going but-
Jin: Please update!
White Wolf: Yeah! We've been checking back every few weeks and we haven't seen any updates!
Risika: I'm new to this story so I'll say this - love the story, love the pairings, love the bitch's reaction, just love it! The only thing I can say otherwise is UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! Sorry, I've been hanging around a sugar-high Jin too much. I mean the orange haired wind demon, not Gin's nutty sister.
Jin: I'm not nutty!
White Wolf: She's right Risika. She's not nutty, she's insane.
Gin: *nods*
Jin: Thanks I - HEY!
*as they're running away*
Gin: Bye!
Risika: And update soon!
White Wolf: Happy writings!
Jin: *chasing them with a flame thrower*
person Jessjess
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
C\'mon chapter 5 wasn\'t all that bad I just don\'t see Heerotingting quite that mushy! Are you going to tell us why they are in jail? No more complaints from me, promise! Otherwise I loved it!
person Gin
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gin: I really liked this, even if Heero w lit little OOC.
Jin: Who cares? The story was good, and really funny!
White Wolf: I really have to agree with Jin on this one, Gin.
Gin: Oh, thanks White Wolf. That was really encouraging.
White Wolf: No problem.
Jin: She was being sarcastic.
White Wolf: I know.
Gin: Anyway, nice fic. I really liked Relena\'s reaction, and I don\'t tink I\'ve ever seen a Solo/Wufei pairing before. It\'s cool!
White Wolf: Yup!
Gin: Was that a bark?
White Wolf: No.
Jin: We hope you update soon.
White Wolf: Yeah! And if you don\'t, we\'ll send some of our muses after you! Muhahahahahahahahahahahahaha!
Jin: O_O\'
Gin: -_-\' I think White Wolf had too much sugar again.
person Caska (to lazy to sign in)
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whee this fun :D finally somethin new instead of the same old story\'s so their all in jail fun fun. anyway i wish i could write a better review but that will have to wait till next time cause i need to get back to the stage -_-

Love
Caska

p.s. good story
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah! How could you just leave it THHHHHEEEEERRRRREEEEEEE!??????? more More More MORE! Damn you!
person Anon
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good fic but it is a little short. SO plz update soon!
person Taran
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! Thtorytory is a lot of fun, as are the characters. Looking forward to lots more! :D I\'d offer to beta for you, but my grammer is probably worse than yours. lol Hope your beta is able to keep up with you. Have fun!

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