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October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was quite a surprise! The wings are gone?! I'm quite curious - can't wait for next chapter! Keep writing and good luck!
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay...this is indeed odd. I like the stories with the guys having wings, this one is just...odd. It's the only word I can think of that's adequate. I have to say that it's readily apparent English isn't your first language, but it has gotten better over the chapters. I think a beta would do you a world of good. Other than that, I think if the chapters were longer, they would be much more satisfying.
Good job so far.
^_^,,
Good job so far.
^_^,,
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story you have here is pretty intresting. There's so much mystery and questions. I hope you update soon because this is a good story and I don't want to miss anything.
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey interesting story hope you keep it up, as well as some of your other stories as well. plz update soon ...hugs
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow he has wings!
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh please don't stop there!more please
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more, hope you update again soon!!! =)
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhhh this has to be the best story i've read in a looong long time!! please please update soon!!!!! I want to know what happens! Will Duo want revenge on the doctor? Will Heero's -secret- feelings for duop surface!? lol please update asap i mean it this rocks.
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy to hear that you're going to continue this story! I had read this story back when you first posted it and began to think I would never get to read what happens next!!! =)
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please, please, please, do continue with this story! I'm so glad to hear you're going to be back soon with more! I very much enjoy your stories, the plots are unique and always told from a fresh perspective. So, thank you for what you've shared so far, and I can't wait for more!