rate_review Reviews

I really do like this story. I liked the honest answer that Goku gave. It didn\'t necessarily aleaviate (spelling?)Bulma\'s fears, but at least she knows that he is on the up and up.

Update soon please.

What a loverly surprise...and you were right, it was needed. Believe me, I know how important a filler chapter is.

I love how you described the relationship between Bulma and Goku. And the discription of my poor beaten down prince was simple but perfect. I liked this chapter a lot. And Bra...I can just imagine how cute she is. I really liked this chappie you should really give yourself more credit.

Slow is good - I like slow. Take your time and develop and build up all the little things...it makes a nice picture when it is done. I can\'t wait to find out why Vegeta is torturing himself (it has to be love, right? *g* Lucky you - capturing Card...

Aww, Goku buying present for Vegeta! Isn\'t it cute? I really like your story! It\'s very good! And sweet! ^^ Please continue soon!

I\'m really liking what I see so far :-)

I really liked the opening scenes when Goku had obviously asked Vegeta something along the lines of travelling out in space and Vegeta\'s reponse whilst still delivering punches and kicks was simplndernderful:

\"~‘what would be the point Kakarot, there’s nothing out there for me. Besides I’d probably have to drag you along with me, I don’t think I’ll find another one like you out there.’~\"

I was a little sad for Goku when his pleasure at these words were quickly doused by this:

“Kakarot, not that I’m planning to travel the universe anytime soon, but I don’t think a sparring session with Bulma would be quite as effective as one with you.”

At this point I have no idea whether Vegeta\'s earlier comment was a subconscious release of a deeper emotion or whether he was simply talking about a sparring partner, but it\'s obvious that the sparring partner choice is what hit Goku at Vegeta\'s second comment, and my heart sort of dropped a little with his. However, Vegeta\'s somewhat abrupt departure after that flash of hurt, shows that maybe it was a subconscious release after all. Oh, the angst.

Oh Godse tee teddy bear scene was hilarious. Goku\'s reaction was a sheer joy :-D

\"He just beamed proudly puffing out his chest, “I do Chi-chi, I saved up, from all that money Bulma gave me from helping her out with remoulding her lab!”\"

Damn, you just make me want to seriously hug this guy :-)

I love that Goku is looking for a present for Vegeta, I really hope that Vegeta gets him one as well.

Really looking forward to the next chapter :-)

\"A/n- The ‘teddy bear’ is undoubtedly real…It looked so cute then I was like ‘Ahhh my eyes!’-\"

LOL! Love the \"my eyes\" comment. It alwayscks cks me up when I see this :-D

Gahhh, A teddy bear with an erection...that\'s just not right.

AHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! My eyes! That tebearbear is a killer. *hides. Throws away all the formerly cute teddy bears. (fearing they might change clothes one day and sport *cough, cough*) *

Aw. I loved it when Vegeta cut Goku off and he was like \'whatever.\' So mean. Very \'Geta like. Oh, and I liked that Vegeta said he would take Goku with him. Think of all that time in space. THey could spar and have lots and lots of sex. Oh, and see other planets and stuff like that.

More. Go now and write more.

~Card

YEAH!!! This was very good!

I loved it, I am such a sucker for Goku/Vegeta get together fics...aww there always so interesting. Then again I\'m a sucker for all your fics too! You are an excellent writer!
I can hardly wait for your next update!

I love that song Kiss from a Rose, it\'s so good.
As for that teddy bear rofl...I can\'t believe that is real! hehe

Besides I’d probably have to drag you along with me, I don’t think I’ll find another one like you out there.’--I loved that line. Aww the Ouji, he doesn\'t even know what I\'m thinking when he says that...^.~

~‘Oh Bulma they’ll probably sneak out anyway, let them go play’~--hehe yes let them play indeed!

Anywho if you still need a beta I would be more than happy to beta for you!
I hope you update soon!

^.*
-MB-

Very sweet start. Chichi is the wife, but not the extreme psycho bitch - which is the usual cliche. I can\'t wait to see what Goku finally gets his prince - and what it takes to get them together.

Loved it as usual. The teddy bear scene was hilarious. Poor Goku.

-“I was ere… well I wanted to buy presents, for Christmas.”
Chi-chi smiled sweetly at him then narrowed her eyes, “You don’t have any money.” He just beamed proudly puffing out his chest, “I do Chi-chi, I saved up, from all that money Bulma gave me from helping her out with remoulding her lab!”-

That scene was so cute too. I could just see Goku doing that. I really liked this fic.

And as always...I would like to beta this fic...I have no life you see...just kidding...but I do have ridiculous amounts of spare time...*sigh*

This is good so far. Keep going.

As far as the beta thing goes, I suck at spelling and grammar, so I think that I will decline. But, if absolutely no one voluteers their abilities, I will give it a shot.