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January 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story!!!
Is Bardock's mate Turles?
The powers that Vegeta Ouji has, is it Telekinesis?
Do you know when you will update this? Or is this on Hiatus?
Is Bardock's mate Turles?
The powers that Vegeta Ouji has, is it Telekinesis?
Do you know when you will update this? Or is this on Hiatus?
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June 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story. it should have bee finished.
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad they got their revenge on the Bateau.
Worried Vegeta is still weak, especially with Frieza around and Zarbon having his eye on him. Somehow I don't think Zarbon will be put off by Vegeta being mated.
Ohhh, who is the father? Very intriguing. Turles? Hmm, doesn't seem powerful enough. I'm thinking Brolli as it's AU and you can change the time sequence. If he is it may explain Kakarot being SS.
Worried Vegeta is still weak, especially with Frieza around and Zarbon having his eye on him. Somehow I don't think Zarbon will be put off by Vegeta being mated.
Ohhh, who is the father? Very intriguing. Turles? Hmm, doesn't seem powerful enough. I'm thinking Brolli as it's AU and you can change the time sequence. If he is it may explain Kakarot being SS.
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BARDOCK HAS A MATE?!?!?!?!?! OMG! i can't WAIT to find out who it is, please update again soon and tell us all! XD
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooh...telikenetic powers...ooooh, aahhh
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January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for answering my questions, you're a star.
What an exciting chapter! I shudder to think what they wanted with Kakarot. About Vegeta, I think the act of protecting his mate, which he seemed to do automatically, over-stretched Vegeta's mind and body when it hadn't been prepared or trained for it, so he's suffering a kind of burn-out. How long will he take to recover as it looks like time is running out, can he be trained in time, and can he and Kakarot stand up to Frieza yet?
As for the teaser for the next chapter that really has me intriqued. Has Vegeta gone bad or has someone else got their grubby little mitts on Kakarot?
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What an exciting chapter! I shudder to think what they wanted with Kakarot. About Vegeta, I think the act of protecting his mate, which he seemed to do automatically, over-stretched Vegeta's mind and body when it hadn't been prepared or trained for it, so he's suffering a kind of burn-out. How long will he take to recover as it looks like time is running out, can he be trained in time, and can he and Kakarot stand up to Frieza yet?
As for the teaser for the next chapter that really has me intriqued. Has Vegeta gone bad or has someone else got their grubby little mitts on Kakarot?
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
<3
J-chan
J-chan
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December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
how can i not have read this story before? its fab! keep it up =]
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Interesting that you are portraying the Androids and Humans as Saiyans.
I had a little tear in my eye when they lost the baby. So sad, especially when they didn't know Kakarot was pregnant.
Loads of questions.....How did Seventeen escape, I thought they arrested him at the tournament? What special training does Vegeta need to do? Who wants Kararot and who are the people of Bateau? Will the Nameks make an appearance? Will Frieza try to destroy the planet?
Looking forward to the next chapter.
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I had a little tear in my eye when they lost the baby. So sad, especially when they didn't know Kakarot was pregnant.
Loads of questions.....How did Seventeen escape, I thought they arrested him at the tournament? What special training does Vegeta need to do? Who wants Kararot and who are the people of Bateau? Will the Nameks make an appearance? Will Frieza try to destroy the planet?
Looking forward to the next chapter.
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg...*cries* That was horrible..that guy should gets what coming to him...Lol you ddi well i love it please make another chapter!!