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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please keep on writing. I really want to know what will happen next.
Thanks.
Thanks.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY... An update! I am glad Kakarott pulled the win off, I was affraid he wasn't going to for a moment. Stupdi Juunana, I hope Vegeta does get his head on a platter.
I wish this tournament hadn't been necessary. Then K & V would still have their baby. Stupid old farts!
Update soon please!
I wish this tournament hadn't been necessary. Then K & V would still have their baby. Stupid old farts!
Update soon please!
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad to hear this story hasn't been left at the way side. :) Just know I'll be waiting for an update.
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please sent more conquered archnemesis please.........wow i can\'t i begged an author as much as i have begged you !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry the story just that good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your ideas are interesting. I\'m a little confused by a couple of things, but perhaps they\'ll come clear in future chapters. You really need a beta reader, though, both for grammar and consistency.
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'m lovin\' the story keep it coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know i am lovin\' it can\'t wait to get to the creamy lemon........pause while wiping saliva from mouth with the back of my hand
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this story! ui think it\'s unique that vegeta is a psychic and thats the reason he wears gloves. update soon!! i canm\'t wait to see what happens!
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
girl when are going to finish conquered on adultfanfiction because i have read all that you have on the stroy onfanfiction which sucks becauses, they want let you write you lemons and i love you lemons so please,please,please write to the lemon on tsoonsoon... hides in the corner while tears of angst pour down her face
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
when ,when ,are you going,to write more on conquered i been patient so if you want me to beg so here i go please,please, pleassse, please write more a mere lemon perhaps. kinhoshi