rate_review Reviews

when are you going to write more to the story so we can as your fan get into the story more i mean you left the story at cliffhanger

hey get some more chapters up please !

This is a good A/U so far. I don\'t have any critisim, construtive or otherwise. I also don\'t have any ideas to contribute.

I am, however, looking forward to your next update!

As you may have already known. I love this fic. This happens to be amoungst my favorite ones! well, i do perfer te one with Cooler better. (he\'s my fave bad guy) I really enjoy this fic. I think the plot is unique and you\'re a great writer! I\'ve noticed many of your plots are very unique and i love that! You\'re such a great writer and i want to bathe you in compliments! I love this fic and i love your writing.. and be sure to update... *grins* oh and also thank you sooo much for reviewing abhor! It means a lot! ^ ^ i can\'tt tot to read more of all your fics!

Agent 182

Great start! You must love writting cliffhangers! Is this going to be a more adult version of the one you have posted on the other site?
I have read the nine chapters of the incomplete story there a while ago, and it is very good!

Wah! I want more. *cries like a small baby and bangs hands on table*

I want to know what shocked King Vegeta. I want to know what the night shift saw!

*pout*

I\'ll be waiting.

*pout*

Whhaaaaa!!!! Talk about a cliffhanger--- how could you leave it off at just that?!?!?! More, I say! More, more!