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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My, my, my...
they\'re like rabbits...or the Energizer Bunny...they keep goin\' and goin\' and goin\' and don\'t ever stop! someone\'s always getting laid in that little Saiyan house of their\'s!! if only i lived there....!!!
oh, yea...the Twins once again!! they have that little hand thing they do...like when Goten taps his hand(or was it arm) Vegeta feels it and stuff. I thought that was really creative.
it would seem that you\'re creative, b/c as much as i dislike OCs in fanfics, I actually ENVYED these ones!! jeez! great job yet again!! im kinda jealous, i would have never been able to do it...
keep it up!! im all hyped up and into these fics now!!
they\'re like rabbits...or the Energizer Bunny...they keep goin\' and goin\' and goin\' and don\'t ever stop! someone\'s always getting laid in that little Saiyan house of their\'s!! if only i lived there....!!!
oh, yea...the Twins once again!! they have that little hand thing they do...like when Goten taps his hand(or was it arm) Vegeta feels it and stuff. I thought that was really creative.
it would seem that you\'re creative, b/c as much as i dislike OCs in fanfics, I actually ENVYED these ones!! jeez! great job yet again!! im kinda jealous, i would have never been able to do it...
keep it up!! im all hyped up and into these fics now!!
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May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damned trips to visit moms. *Pouts* I got so behind...that was a sweet closer though. On to the next one!
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That wasn\'t the end of story sex. *sits in chair at computer in total denile*
Lil\' Geta\'s reimincing made me nervous. Goten didn\'t send himself a memo, did he?
*still siting, noticing that nothing has changed*
*and again*
Fine, I\'m going to go read the next chapter of the next story.
This was a great story, and I hope that you aren\'t through with the Twins and this A/U, or is it an ATL? (so confusing)
Lil\' Geta\'s reimincing made me nervous. Goten didn\'t send himself a memo, did he?
*still siting, noticing that nothing has changed*
*and again*
Fine, I\'m going to go read the next chapter of the next story.
This was a great story, and I hope that you aren\'t through with the Twins and this A/U, or is it an ATL? (so confusing)
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*rereads what she wrote...* OH!!!! you\'d think after reading your stories i\'d get that. lol anyway, thankies. i\'ll have Goten and Trunks back whenever you write a sequel to this. gotta love Lenora/Goten/Trunks sandwiches.
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok
-_- first of all sorry for not reviewing yesterday...I was super busy and I got a new job that I think I hate...
secondly my com act acting extremely dumb...
Let me just say the whole dress thing had me rofl...I could not breathe.
Those brothers are crazy! And Vegeta seemed quite upset about the dress thing, although if my son was wearing a dress I would be upset too!
Anywho this chapter had me barely breathing!
^.*
-MB-
-_- first of all sorry for not reviewing yesterday...I was super busy and I got a new job that I think I hate...
secondly my com act acting extremely dumb...
Let me just say the whole dress thing had me rofl...I could not breathe.
Those brothers are crazy! And Vegeta seemed quite upset about the dress thing, although if my son was wearing a dress I would be upset too!
Anywho this chapter had me barely breathing!
^.*
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter. I loved the way everyone reacted to Goten\'s dress.
\"It took Goku a few moments but he slowly came to the realization that all of his children were boys, and boys were not supposed to wear dresses, but he looked at Goten, saw the dress, and decided right there that he was not going to ask.\"
LOL! I could just picture the expression on his face, when he saw Goten in the dress. Love that he had no intention of asking what it was all about, but he was curious enough to want to know... this was great...
\"It was safer not to know. BUT, Vegeta (his delicious mate) did not necessarily agree with him about this. So he disappeared, found Vegeta sparring with the other twin, grabbed him and brought him back to the house.\"
LOL! in in doubt... grab Vegeta. Is this one of the reasons why Goku has never been \'pranked\' and Vegeta got the pink hair? Smart Goku... ROTFL!
Love this:
\"His mate was on the verge of screaming at him when he nicely pointed out Goten’s new apparel.\"
\"“WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT?!” Vegeta yelled.\"
LOL! Love that reaction. Loved his whole reaction and Goku\'s thoughts on the matter. Particularly liked how Goten got a big kick out of getting a reaction out of his parents... makes me wonder if he wore the dress more for that reason than anything else, either that, or it was a definite bonus. :-)
\"Goku sort stayed away from Goten (as if he thought this dress-wearing thing was some disease that one could catch like a cold.)\"
LOL!
\"Bardock decided that perhaps Goten wasn’t so terrifying after all atteattempted a few misbehaviors in his presence.\"
Yup! That would do it. :-)
\"Wondered how many more years they had to live, him and Goten. Wondered if the mention of how many years between births was some sort of attempt on his brother’s part to warn him that they did not have as long as they thought.\"
Now this has me deeply worried. I thought that the reduced life expectancy was due to the fact that, twins got separated on the Sayain homeworld. I figured that this made Vegeta and Goten relatively safe. I hate the idea that their life expectancy is still in question. :-(
A pretty nice final chapter. Hope to see them around again soon, \'cause I\'m gonna miss these guys.
No lemon... see, I noticed. :-)
\"It took Goku a few moments but he slowly came to the realization that all of his children were boys, and boys were not supposed to wear dresses, but he looked at Goten, saw the dress, and decided right there that he was not going to ask.\"
LOL! I could just picture the expression on his face, when he saw Goten in the dress. Love that he had no intention of asking what it was all about, but he was curious enough to want to know... this was great...
\"It was safer not to know. BUT, Vegeta (his delicious mate) did not necessarily agree with him about this. So he disappeared, found Vegeta sparring with the other twin, grabbed him and brought him back to the house.\"
LOL! in in doubt... grab Vegeta. Is this one of the reasons why Goku has never been \'pranked\' and Vegeta got the pink hair? Smart Goku... ROTFL!
Love this:
\"His mate was on the verge of screaming at him when he nicely pointed out Goten’s new apparel.\"
\"“WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT?!” Vegeta yelled.\"
LOL! Love that reaction. Loved his whole reaction and Goku\'s thoughts on the matter. Particularly liked how Goten got a big kick out of getting a reaction out of his parents... makes me wonder if he wore the dress more for that reason than anything else, either that, or it was a definite bonus. :-)
\"Goku sort stayed away from Goten (as if he thought this dress-wearing thing was some disease that one could catch like a cold.)\"
LOL!
\"Bardock decided that perhaps Goten wasn’t so terrifying after all atteattempted a few misbehaviors in his presence.\"
Yup! That would do it. :-)
\"Wondered how many more years they had to live, him and Goten. Wondered if the mention of how many years between births was some sort of attempt on his brother’s part to warn him that they did not have as long as they thought.\"
Now this has me deeply worried. I thought that the reduced life expectancy was due to the fact that, twins got separated on the Sayain homeworld. I figured that this made Vegeta and Goten relatively safe. I hate the idea that their life expectancy is still in question. :-(
A pretty nice final chapter. Hope to see them around again soon, \'cause I\'m gonna miss these guys.
No lemon... see, I noticed. :-)
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hummm... I seriouly doubt that wearing a dress would make Me more willing to do the dishes...but as long as he\'s happy...
I now see there are many good reasons to wear a dress - and they all involve easier access to one\'s private parts.
I now see there are many good reasons to wear a dress - and they all involve easier access to one\'s private parts.
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved Gina\'s thoughts at the beginning when she was running from \'Geta, loved how she finally decided that it was time for her to have a chat to mummy about learning to fight. Totally loved this:
\"...she was more than ready for the next phase and the end of the “I run to amuse you” phase.\"
LOL!
\"...(Mummy had told her, in passing, that Goku had the same sort of obsession and that they (meaning Goten) figured it was because...\"
LOL! Hey, Goten had to get his smarts from somewhere. Totally loved this :-D
Wondering how \'Geta is going to convince Goten to wear a dress. :-)
Enjoyed the scene between Goten and Gohan, very relaxed and chatty. I like the idea that Goku may still want more kids. :-)
Loved Vegeta\'s thoughts from when he awoke and up to the time he set about seducing Goku :-D
Very nice seduction scene. :-)
Enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to the next.
Loved the end dialogue. :-D
\"...You said you had to get on a bus and go to the IC and all that.\"
The time factor also plays a big part, but thanks for understanding. :-)
\"...she was more than ready for the next phase and the end of the “I run to amuse you” phase.\"
LOL!
\"...(Mummy had told her, in passing, that Goku had the same sort of obsession and that they (meaning Goten) figured it was because...\"
LOL! Hey, Goten had to get his smarts from somewhere. Totally loved this :-D
Wondering how \'Geta is going to convince Goten to wear a dress. :-)
Enjoyed the scene between Goten and Gohan, very relaxed and chatty. I like the idea that Goku may still want more kids. :-)
Loved Vegeta\'s thoughts from when he awoke and up to the time he set about seducing Goku :-D
Very nice seduction scene. :-)
Enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to the next.
Loved the end dialogue. :-D
\"...You said you had to get on a bus and go to the IC and all that.\"
The time factor also plays a big part, but thanks for understanding. :-)
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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, half lemons, it lets my mind wander to where I want the lemons to lead. *smiles* thanks!
Yeah, a sayian Empire. Is Goten smart enough to terriform Mars? (I like your sayian extended family.)
Yeah, a sayian Empire. Is Goten smart enough to terriform Mars? (I like your sayian extended family.)
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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, a bit too much Presta for me to really say I enjoyed this chapter. Don\'t get me wrong, I like Presta, she\'s a good kid. I\'m just not a huge fan of OC\'s. (except the twins, but as you know, I don\'t think of the twins as OC ;-) ;-)
Loved this:
\"Vegeta realized he was not a patient Saiyan, but if his mate had left him the DAY OF THEIR CHILD’S BIRTH, he would have torn off certain necessary parts and FED THEM to HIM.\"
LOL! Totally agree. :-)
Loved how Gohan and Gina were all confused over how easily Trunks was taking Goten\'s absence. Gotta admit, me too. :-)
Loved that whole scene with Bardock and his parewhenwhen Bardock tried to pass of his unwanted food to his father. So cute. :-)
Enjoyed the end dialogue... I\'m sort of going to miss Gohan when he goes home.
\"(have you noticed there is almost always a lemon at the end of my fics?) then there’s going to be more. A new story. ;) \"
Actually no, but then again you have so many wonderful lemons threaded throughout your fics that I wouldn\'t really notice something like that, but I\'ll probably notice it from now on. :-)
Re: e-mail:
Just to let you know. Sorry I haven\'t been able to make it down to the IC lately, I\'ve just not been able to, and it may still be a few days before I can... just thought I should say something in case you thought I was ignoring you. I\'m not. I\'m dying to get the chance to go down, so I can respond. One of these day'm e'm either going to get this piece of crap fixed or get me another computer.
Loved this:
\"Vegeta realized he was not a patient Saiyan, but if his mate had left him the DAY OF THEIR CHILD’S BIRTH, he would have torn off certain necessary parts and FED THEM to HIM.\"
LOL! Totally agree. :-)
Loved how Gohan and Gina were all confused over how easily Trunks was taking Goten\'s absence. Gotta admit, me too. :-)
Loved that whole scene with Bardock and his parewhenwhen Bardock tried to pass of his unwanted food to his father. So cute. :-)
Enjoyed the end dialogue... I\'m sort of going to miss Gohan when he goes home.
\"(have you noticed there is almost always a lemon at the end of my fics?) then there’s going to be more. A new story. ;) \"
Actually no, but then again you have so many wonderful lemons threaded throughout your fics that I wouldn\'t really notice something like that, but I\'ll probably notice it from now on. :-)
Re: e-mail:
Just to let you know. Sorry I haven\'t been able to make it down to the IC lately, I\'ve just not been able to, and it may still be a few days before I can... just thought I should say something in case you thought I was ignoring you. I\'m not. I\'m dying to get the chance to go down, so I can respond. One of these day'm e'm either going to get this piece of crap fixed or get me another computer.