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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That thing you told Getarian about having one line it writing a whole chapter never happens to me. I always end up writing like fourths of a chapter at a time. Like right now I have to a half of chapter 13 and half of chapter 14. It\'s taking me so long to finish them that I am going to have to post them at the same time as to not piss people off. *Sigh*
Anyway, enought about me. I loved this fic. Everything is as it should be. You know I didn\'t even notice the Goku thing...hmm...
Anyway, enought about me. I loved this fic. Everything is as it should be. You know I didn\'t even notice the Goku thing...hmm...
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A dark chapter. Horrified that those bastards would rape an eight year old girl, and so very glad that the twins went back further in time and prevented it from ever happening. Really touched by this:
\"Knew they were going back to the Time Machine, knew they could stop this before it happened, and still hated that he was being pulled away.\"
Can completely symapathize with Goten\'s desire to stay with his broken child, even though he knew they were going back to make sure that this version of his daughter, never existed, but it must have been so heartbreaking for him to leave her when she so obviously needed him. He must have felt as if he was abandoning her. Such a tragic moment. :-(
Actually felt quite sad to find that Saima was still dead when they went back further in time, was sort of thinking that she had died at the same time as her daughter was raped. Still, wasn\'t overly surprised, bcause I knew that Presta came home with her father, but yeah, still a little sad.
Totally loved the twins revenge! Bastards. Yeah, can\'t see Bardock or Red allowing them to be cut away from the trees...let them rot!
Loved that Goten decked his grandfather, definitely deserved it for not keeping an eye on his great granddaughter, but liked the fact that Goten took time out to make sure that no-one else was around to see...do love that respect factor :-)
Love that Goten told Presta that she had no say in the fact that she is returning with him, knew he would make a good father :-)
Hoping that Trunks will be okay with this. I think he will, but it\'s still going to be fun watching his initial reaction...I think ;-)
Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
Enjoyed the end dialogue. :-)
\"I always say things of that vein and people look at me like I’m nuts and say: “Uh…couldn’t you just be normal?”\"
LOL! Exactly! Who wants to be normal anyway? Sooo ng. ng. :-)
About the twins, yeah, \'responsible\' does seem like such an alien word when coupled with themt tht that\'s mainly Goten\'s fault :-D Still, we\'re seeing a new side to him lately, and I have to admit, I like it :-)
\"Knew they were going back to the Time Machine, knew they could stop this before it happened, and still hated that he was being pulled away.\"
Can completely symapathize with Goten\'s desire to stay with his broken child, even though he knew they were going back to make sure that this version of his daughter, never existed, but it must have been so heartbreaking for him to leave her when she so obviously needed him. He must have felt as if he was abandoning her. Such a tragic moment. :-(
Actually felt quite sad to find that Saima was still dead when they went back further in time, was sort of thinking that she had died at the same time as her daughter was raped. Still, wasn\'t overly surprised, bcause I knew that Presta came home with her father, but yeah, still a little sad.
Totally loved the twins revenge! Bastards. Yeah, can\'t see Bardock or Red allowing them to be cut away from the trees...let them rot!
Loved that Goten decked his grandfather, definitely deserved it for not keeping an eye on his great granddaughter, but liked the fact that Goten took time out to make sure that no-one else was around to see...do love that respect factor :-)
Love that Goten told Presta that she had no say in the fact that she is returning with him, knew he would make a good father :-)
Hoping that Trunks will be okay with this. I think he will, but it\'s still going to be fun watching his initial reaction...I think ;-)
Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
Enjoyed the end dialogue. :-)
\"I always say things of that vein and people look at me like I’m nuts and say: “Uh…couldn’t you just be normal?”\"
LOL! Exactly! Who wants to be normal anyway? Sooo ng. ng. :-)
About the twins, yeah, \'responsible\' does seem like such an alien word when coupled with themt tht that\'s mainly Goten\'s fault :-D Still, we\'re seeing a new side to him lately, and I have to admit, I like it :-)
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...I don\'t know if I would be as upset as Trunks is in this situation...but of course and unfortunately I am not a Saiyan. *Pouts and looks generally sadt tht there was banging at the end! :)
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about yesterday\'s review. My brain was tired and complete mush. It\'s congealing nicely today. I loved this chapter. It was dark, but I am a fan of dark. Me liked bunches. Goten is not so carefree and happy is he? At least I think so anyway.
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful....
I really, really, love Goten as a father.
I was like O_O when I read that part about those four jerk wads raping Presta. I am so glad that it didn\'t happen. How did Saima die?
She was borsupesuper saiyajin? Rad. Goten really moved me, the guy who never seems to feel anything, felt a lot in this chapter and it made me sad, but happy. He is a wonderful dad, and I say that b/c he left Vegeta\'s side so fast that his brother didn\'t have time to IT with him....loved that.
I listen to music when I read fics because I dunno makes me feel like I am watching a movie or video or something, but I was listening to Nickelback\'s, Chad Kroeger\'s Hero...and I was like awww I\'m gonna cry b/c Goten is so rad. I loved the cruel treatement those 4 guys got I think they deserve every bit of the pain and torment they will recieve. If they were going to rape a 8 yr old...*shakes head* They deserve to die, but death is the easy way out so yeah torture is best.
Anyway this was a very touching chapter...*wipes eyes*
Oh yeah I laughed slightly when Goten knocked Bardock to floor, and also chuckled at how Presta found out Goten was her dad. I like Presta! ^.~
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I really, really, love Goten as a father.
I was like O_O when I read that part about those four jerk wads raping Presta. I am so glad that it didn\'t happen. How did Saima die?
She was borsupesuper saiyajin? Rad. Goten really moved me, the guy who never seems to feel anything, felt a lot in this chapter and it made me sad, but happy. He is a wonderful dad, and I say that b/c he left Vegeta\'s side so fast that his brother didn\'t have time to IT with him....loved that.
I listen to music when I read fics because I dunno makes me feel like I am watching a movie or video or something, but I was listening to Nickelback\'s, Chad Kroeger\'s Hero...and I was like awww I\'m gonna cry b/c Goten is so rad. I loved the cruel treatement those 4 guys got I think they deserve every bit of the pain and torment they will recieve. If they were going to rape a 8 yr old...*shakes head* They deserve to die, but death is the easy way out so yeah torture is best.
Anyway this was a very touching chapter...*wipes eyes*
Oh yeah I laughed slightly when Goten knocked Bardock to floor, and also chuckled at how Presta found out Goten was her dad. I like Presta! ^.~
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter...
I can hardly wait to see what happens when they go see Trunks. What will happen!?!?!
I can not believe that Goten is a father...it seems so strange but so normal at the same time. Its adorable really. I could just picture Goku\'s face when he says \"Dad?\" and looks at Goten ... hehe
Asshole, Bardock thought, how dare he just sit there and laugh---ROFL!!!! I was laughing for sog whg when I read this. I love Bardock he is so cute and soooo smart! jeez he is amazing. When Goten kept laughing I was like he is so psycho but very funny. I don\'t think I was confused I pr muc much understood the chap. Thought it was very good.
And gosh sorry for this crappy review * is truly ashamed* but I am soooooo beyond tired. I feel zombified. I am going to sleep all day tomorrow and enjoy dreaming.
And I wouldn\'t have thought it mean if you asked where I was. I don\'t get embarressed or offended easily at all.
Anyway thanks for the rad chappie
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I can hardly wait to see what happens when they go see Trunks. What will happen!?!?!
I can not believe that Goten is a father...it seems so strange but so normal at the same time. Its adorable really. I could just picture Goku\'s face when he says \"Dad?\" and looks at Goten ... hehe
Asshole, Bardock thought, how dare he just sit there and laugh---ROFL!!!! I was laughing for sog whg when I read this. I love Bardock he is so cute and soooo smart! jeez he is amazing. When Goten kept laughing I was like he is so psycho but very funny. I don\'t think I was confused I pr muc much understood the chap. Thought it was very good.
And gosh sorry for this crappy review * is truly ashamed* but I am soooooo beyond tired. I feel zombified. I am going to sleep all day tomorrow and enjoy dreaming.
And I wouldn\'t have thought it mean if you asked where I was. I don\'t get embarressed or offended easily at all.
Anyway thanks for the rad chappie
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Felt really sorry for Gina, she seems to be feeling a little lost and out of place. It would be nice if twinswins could at least find a way to sleep in separate rooms, so she could have an area to call her own. Felt bad that she couldn\'t connect, via the claiming bite, with Vegeta, in the same way that Trunks could with Goten. She should definitely say yes to going Saiyan :-)
\"Because Goten did not get angry. He got revenge and he tormented and harassed and destroyed things, but he did not get angry.\"
This sums up Goten pretty well. He has always kept his emotions pretty well in check, and I imagine his revenge is something a person does not want to be a recipient off, and whilst usually, cold, clinical revenge is a lot more frightening than red-faced anger... in Goten\'s case, I\'ve not seen anything or or clinical in his revenge, he\'s always used an impish precision in everything he does, so...his anger would, I imagine, be a frightening thing indeed.
\"Looked at Vegeta again. Reached his arm out and let Bardock crawl from his mother onto his father. Felt his son wrap his arms around his neck and hold onto him.\"
Loved the imagery this presented to my mind. So close, all of them...love it! :-)
\"He had threatened his Mother’s life because his Mom had said he wished Goten would have all girls.\"
Ah, so that\'s what it was allut. ut. :-D
Good to see Bulma poke her head out of the door. :-)
Loved the way Bardock reacted when Goten returned, wonderful image of him climbing up on his mother\'s shoulders...Loved this:
\"Which did not make Bardock happy because he was the little one here, and his father damn-well better remember that.\"
Ah, poor Bardock is feeling left out with the new arrival. *chuckle* Gotta love the little guy :-)
Wondering why Goten\'s daughter has to wear the ki earrings until Trunks falls pregnant.
Interestihapthapter and looking forward to the next one. :-)
\"Anyone desperately confused?\"
Oh hell yeah, :-D Hoping that the next chapter will bring some enlightenment. Wondering where Saima is and why Goten has returned with his daughter?
\"And I was worried that I would hopelessly confuse people and they would just be like ‘forget this’ and leave my story all alone and then I would have to sob brokenly for many months.\"
*chuckle* Can\'t see me ever being so conf tha that I would not wao reo read your stories, and judging by everyone else\'s reactions, the same would go for them I imagine :-) Besides, a little confusion, in the short term, is good anyway, makes people think, scratch their heads and wonder what the hell you\'ve got up your sleeve...way better than being predictable ;-)
\"Ahhh…You have gleaned that Goten *will* replace his mother’s Ki rings, but he had not *yet* done that in A Prince Among Men. So, you’re gleaning is correct,\"
ROTFL! Okay, this so reminds me of my son...I remember when I bought a packet of Ritz crackers in the shopping, and when I got home, I found that the inside packet was open...so I took it back and told the manager that \'the packet had been compromised\' when I went to get a replacement packet, my son asked me \'why I couldn\'t just say that it was open, like a normal person would\' I pointed out that is was patently obvious that it was open, what they didn\'t know was that I had not opened it myself...my son just shook his head, walked away from me (still looking embarrassed) and pretended that he didn\'t know the strange woman with the compromised crackers...
Sorry for that...I just cracked up so much when I read what you wrote and it reminded me of that time with the crackers. :-D
\"(It’s still weird when everyone is comforted by the Twins arrival as opposed to worried what ruckus they are going to cause.)\"
Yeah, scary stuff...but they are an amazingly comfor pre presence in this story. Must be one crazy universe, if the twins are the sober, responsible ones. :-)
\"Because Goten did not get angry. He got revenge and he tormented and harassed and destroyed things, but he did not get angry.\"
This sums up Goten pretty well. He has always kept his emotions pretty well in check, and I imagine his revenge is something a person does not want to be a recipient off, and whilst usually, cold, clinical revenge is a lot more frightening than red-faced anger... in Goten\'s case, I\'ve not seen anything or or clinical in his revenge, he\'s always used an impish precision in everything he does, so...his anger would, I imagine, be a frightening thing indeed.
\"Looked at Vegeta again. Reached his arm out and let Bardock crawl from his mother onto his father. Felt his son wrap his arms around his neck and hold onto him.\"
Loved the imagery this presented to my mind. So close, all of them...love it! :-)
\"He had threatened his Mother’s life because his Mom had said he wished Goten would have all girls.\"
Ah, so that\'s what it was allut. ut. :-D
Good to see Bulma poke her head out of the door. :-)
Loved the way Bardock reacted when Goten returned, wonderful image of him climbing up on his mother\'s shoulders...Loved this:
\"Which did not make Bardock happy because he was the little one here, and his father damn-well better remember that.\"
Ah, poor Bardock is feeling left out with the new arrival. *chuckle* Gotta love the little guy :-)
Wondering why Goten\'s daughter has to wear the ki earrings until Trunks falls pregnant.
Interestihapthapter and looking forward to the next one. :-)
\"Anyone desperately confused?\"
Oh hell yeah, :-D Hoping that the next chapter will bring some enlightenment. Wondering where Saima is and why Goten has returned with his daughter?
\"And I was worried that I would hopelessly confuse people and they would just be like ‘forget this’ and leave my story all alone and then I would have to sob brokenly for many months.\"
*chuckle* Can\'t see me ever being so conf tha that I would not wao reo read your stories, and judging by everyone else\'s reactions, the same would go for them I imagine :-) Besides, a little confusion, in the short term, is good anyway, makes people think, scratch their heads and wonder what the hell you\'ve got up your sleeve...way better than being predictable ;-)
\"Ahhh…You have gleaned that Goten *will* replace his mother’s Ki rings, but he had not *yet* done that in A Prince Among Men. So, you’re gleaning is correct,\"
ROTFL! Okay, this so reminds me of my son...I remember when I bought a packet of Ritz crackers in the shopping, and when I got home, I found that the inside packet was open...so I took it back and told the manager that \'the packet had been compromised\' when I went to get a replacement packet, my son asked me \'why I couldn\'t just say that it was open, like a normal person would\' I pointed out that is was patently obvious that it was open, what they didn\'t know was that I had not opened it myself...my son just shook his head, walked away from me (still looking embarrassed) and pretended that he didn\'t know the strange woman with the compromised crackers...
Sorry for that...I just cracked up so much when I read what you wrote and it reminded me of that time with the crackers. :-D
\"(It’s still weird when everyone is comforted by the Twins arrival as opposed to worried what ruckus they are going to cause.)\"
Yeah, scary stuff...but they are an amazingly comfor pre presence in this story. Must be one crazy universe, if the twins are the sober, responsible ones. :-)
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Owww...that was soo good. I wasn\'t confused at all. I love it when you get all complicated on me. Cool. I can not believe that Goten is a dad though. Wow. I can\'t wait for more. Time Travel is so fun isn\'t it. I\'m gonna have time travel in my fic too. So there! :)
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok wow!
I feel like I have been gone for months or something...
*sobs* I haven\'t...butm oum out of town was supposed to be back home already...but we had flight troubles...my schedule is jacked!!!!!!!!!!! -_- But I have found time to get back on my cousins computer!!! yay!!!! I am using it wisely...by reading your lovely fics!!!!!
Chapter 6
“ALRIGHT ASSHOLE!” that was Vegeta, appearing in a haze of yellow light. “I got it. I’m up. Leave me alone while I have my kid, okay?” ---rofl! Gotta love these brothers, and I do.
“If I want to have sex in a hospital” he shuddered at this point “Then I don’t see why you wouldn’t want to! Sex is great everywhere!”--hehe I like that. Like that Goku is acting on his former idea of reminding Vegeta whoo the dominant one is in the relationship...very nice.
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, more than willing to admit to Goku that he was the master of all things sex, that yes, every single inch of Vegeta’s body did in fact belong to the baka, --hehe awww I luvs that! Go Goku!!!!
panted even more to know that he was watching himself.--ok I am going to have to say that this lemon was one of the hottest lemons I have read in the history of lemons
“We’ll tell them that its been too many months since you got laid and we’re going back in time to get you some before you have a cow and we have to raise it and milk it and shit like that. --rofl
The twins were gone and Trunks was standing next to Vegeta blinking as the tips of their hair fizzled a bit.--rofl! yes I wonder where they could have gone? hm...hehe
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Geta—who looked like he had stuck his face into a fire because of the spiking of ki burning his skin around the repressors pierced into his mouth. ---rofl...that is kinda sad but it is also funny
So he used his mouth. (And ‘Geta let him know that was never going to happen again by beating the crap out of him for it.) --LoL *cheers* woo yay!!! aww too bad it will never happen again...it was good while it lasted...
(Ew, ew, ew. By the way, that was his mother and he had to pin the Prince to a cot and suck on his chest until the stupid ass things came off.---rofl!!!!
His mind drifted away from that thought as clouds covered the sun, and he sighed, closed his eyes, thought of Saima. Pregnant. With his child.--O_O omg what? she is preggo!! Ran Ran his slimy—literally slimy—hands over Goten’s stomach.---ugh! That is soooo gross!!! I really hate those guys!
Because if his pants slipped even another centimeter lower he was going to start puking on them.---LoL
This was a excellent chap and very emotional. Loved the way it was written and I also love the protectiveness of Vegeta for his brother, I just love their relationship in general. I think it is very cool how you seem to link all of your stories together! That is awesome!
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I feel like I have been gone for months or something...
*sobs* I haven\'t...butm oum out of town was supposed to be back home already...but we had flight troubles...my schedule is jacked!!!!!!!!!!! -_- But I have found time to get back on my cousins computer!!! yay!!!! I am using it wisely...by reading your lovely fics!!!!!
Chapter 6
“ALRIGHT ASSHOLE!” that was Vegeta, appearing in a haze of yellow light. “I got it. I’m up. Leave me alone while I have my kid, okay?” ---rofl! Gotta love these brothers, and I do.
“If I want to have sex in a hospital” he shuddered at this point “Then I don’t see why you wouldn’t want to! Sex is great everywhere!”--hehe I like that. Like that Goku is acting on his former idea of reminding Vegeta whoo the dominant one is in the relationship...very nice.
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, more than willing to admit to Goku that he was the master of all things sex, that yes, every single inch of Vegeta’s body did in fact belong to the baka, --hehe awww I luvs that! Go Goku!!!!
panted even more to know that he was watching himself.--ok I am going to have to say that this lemon was one of the hottest lemons I have read in the history of lemons
“We’ll tell them that its been too many months since you got laid and we’re going back in time to get you some before you have a cow and we have to raise it and milk it and shit like that. --rofl
The twins were gone and Trunks was standing next to Vegeta blinking as the tips of their hair fizzled a bit.--rofl! yes I wonder where they could have gone? hm...hehe
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Geta—who looked like he had stuck his face into a fire because of the spiking of ki burning his skin around the repressors pierced into his mouth. ---rofl...that is kinda sad but it is also funny
So he used his mouth. (And ‘Geta let him know that was never going to happen again by beating the crap out of him for it.) --LoL *cheers* woo yay!!! aww too bad it will never happen again...it was good while it lasted...
(Ew, ew, ew. By the way, that was his mother and he had to pin the Prince to a cot and suck on his chest until the stupid ass things came off.---rofl!!!!
His mind drifted away from that thought as clouds covered the sun, and he sighed, closed his eyes, thought of Saima. Pregnant. With his child.--O_O omg what? she is preggo!! Ran Ran his slimy—literally slimy—hands over Goten’s stomach.---ugh! That is soooo gross!!! I really hate those guys!
Because if his pants slipped even another centimeter lower he was going to start puking on them.---LoL
This was a excellent chap and very emotional. Loved the way it was written and I also love the protectiveness of Vegeta for his brother, I just love their relationship in general. I think it is very cool how you seem to link all of your stories together! That is awesome!
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Reviewing Interlude \'The Memory\'
Very interested in Goten\'s thoughts in regards to his first real taste of the more primal side of the Saiyan, and yes, I can well imagine that it must indeed be a real eye-opener for him, only ever having known his Earth raised father and (for want of a better definition) his somewhat enigmatic mother.
I did enjoy this:
\"Warriors and warriors did not sit around at home and wait for something interesting to come on TV.\"
LOL! No, and it would be a very dangerous medium for them to possess...I can just imagine the pandemonium that would occur if a Saiyans favourite character was ever killed off :-D
Loved Goten\'s thoughts about his relatives, particularly Radditz\'s hair. :-D
Now the w ki ki repressor rings are still a bit of a mystery to me, don\'t know if it\'s because I\'m still not thinking with a clear head or what, but if what I have managed to glean from this interlude is correct, then Goten has removed the ki suppres frs from his mother and replaced them with similar looking ones that actually help him to concentate his ki?
If this is so, I am wondering two things...
(1) Does Vegeta know about this? and (2) When was this done?
Hopefully, all this will be clarified during the course of the story \'A Prince Among Men\', so I\'m not necessarily asking for immediate answers...just letting you wha what\'s going through my mind as I read this. :-)
Interesting to note that Goten is not particularly impressed with his father in this dimension, makes me wonder, if things are going to work out between Kakarot and Vegeta.
\"(And ‘Geta let him know that was never going to happen again by beating the crap out of him for it.)\"
LOL! Poor Goten, he was just trying to help :-D
\"(Ew, ew, ew. By the way, that was his mother and he had to pin the Prince to a cot and suck on his chest until the stupid ass things came off.\"
ROTFL! Can I second that Ew? Still, nice to know he loves his mum enough to go through this :-)
\"Replaced them with his version of the technology that would power the Prince up quickly eff efficiently, and it allowed him to fight the jerks of the camp that made his Mother’s life hell. (Namely, Kakarot.)\"
Ah, I love this kid! Knew there was a reason I felt comforted at the twins arrival :-)
\"He (privately) called them Bo, Do, So and Memphis.\"
LOL! Love the \'Memphis\' addition :-D
Poor Goten, I can only imagine how terrifying the attempted rape must have been for him, was deeply glad that \'Geta got to him in time and really loved \'Geta\'vengvenge. The choice he gave those bastards had a poetic quality to it. :-)
Bardock and Red definitely seem pissed, I\'m guessing this is where Red\'s revenge is going to show?
“Figure out how the hell we’re going to get back to our own time. This world fucking sucks.”
“Yeah,” Goten said, “It really does sometimes.”
Love this. It really shows how deeply disturbed thins ins are feeling about this world, particularly Goten, who normally possesses a really laid-back, risk-taking personality. I understand Vegeta\'s deep desire to return home, back in \'Cross-eyed\' a lot more now.
Thanks for writing this interlude. It has cleared up some questions, created a couple more and was a good read :-)
Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
Very interested in Goten\'s thoughts in regards to his first real taste of the more primal side of the Saiyan, and yes, I can well imagine that it must indeed be a real eye-opener for him, only ever having known his Earth raised father and (for want of a better definition) his somewhat enigmatic mother.
I did enjoy this:
\"Warriors and warriors did not sit around at home and wait for something interesting to come on TV.\"
LOL! No, and it would be a very dangerous medium for them to possess...I can just imagine the pandemonium that would occur if a Saiyans favourite character was ever killed off :-D
Loved Goten\'s thoughts about his relatives, particularly Radditz\'s hair. :-D
Now the w ki ki repressor rings are still a bit of a mystery to me, don\'t know if it\'s because I\'m still not thinking with a clear head or what, but if what I have managed to glean from this interlude is correct, then Goten has removed the ki suppres frs from his mother and replaced them with similar looking ones that actually help him to concentate his ki?
If this is so, I am wondering two things...
(1) Does Vegeta know about this? and (2) When was this done?
Hopefully, all this will be clarified during the course of the story \'A Prince Among Men\', so I\'m not necessarily asking for immediate answers...just letting you wha what\'s going through my mind as I read this. :-)
Interesting to note that Goten is not particularly impressed with his father in this dimension, makes me wonder, if things are going to work out between Kakarot and Vegeta.
\"(And ‘Geta let him know that was never going to happen again by beating the crap out of him for it.)\"
LOL! Poor Goten, he was just trying to help :-D
\"(Ew, ew, ew. By the way, that was his mother and he had to pin the Prince to a cot and suck on his chest until the stupid ass things came off.\"
ROTFL! Can I second that Ew? Still, nice to know he loves his mum enough to go through this :-)
\"Replaced them with his version of the technology that would power the Prince up quickly eff efficiently, and it allowed him to fight the jerks of the camp that made his Mother’s life hell. (Namely, Kakarot.)\"
Ah, I love this kid! Knew there was a reason I felt comforted at the twins arrival :-)
\"He (privately) called them Bo, Do, So and Memphis.\"
LOL! Love the \'Memphis\' addition :-D
Poor Goten, I can only imagine how terrifying the attempted rape must have been for him, was deeply glad that \'Geta got to him in time and really loved \'Geta\'vengvenge. The choice he gave those bastards had a poetic quality to it. :-)
Bardock and Red definitely seem pissed, I\'m guessing this is where Red\'s revenge is going to show?
“Figure out how the hell we’re going to get back to our own time. This world fucking sucks.”
“Yeah,” Goten said, “It really does sometimes.”
Love this. It really shows how deeply disturbed thins ins are feeling about this world, particularly Goten, who normally possesses a really laid-back, risk-taking personality. I understand Vegeta\'s deep desire to return home, back in \'Cross-eyed\' a lot more now.
Thanks for writing this interlude. It has cleared up some questions, created a couple more and was a good read :-)
Looking forward to the next chapter :-)