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April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whew! What a way to kick off a chapter! A stunning lemon! Very hot!
Vegeta\'s thoughts as he was held by Goku, whilst Goku sucked on Vegeta\'s finger was very well done, the whole scene was very erotic. Vegeta\'s growing need for a more intimate touch was extremely well written, and his (very successful) attempt to get Goku to move along to better things was amazingly written. Your description of the very sexy, highly responsive Prince is exceptionally portrayed.
Really loved this: "..."...Let it rumble out of him, and felt the interest as the hardness pressed against his back. Haha. He had his ways too.\"
LOL! A moment of triumph for his Highness :-)
Gods, Vegeta really does have his ways doesn\'t he? Only you, could write a scene where someone *ahem* plays with themself in a female region and I find it amazingly sexy...I know that it\'s because it\'s Vegeta, but still...very spicy stuff. :-)
Oh Gods, the mirror...oh deary, deary me...*blushes* Verery.ery...lusty! (fans herself) Gods, I sound like a prude...I\'m not, but that was...unexpected...These two men are bloody amazing together, absolutely no fear of their sex life getting dull...Very hot!
Truly wonderful lemon!
Okay, the rest of it...confusing, but I guess that this is how it is meant to be at this point. I\'ve got that Goten (at least) also had ki ski suppressed (I imagine at the same time as his mother) I\'m going to assume at this point, that this happened just after their rescue of Vegeta, from Freiza. This has me thinking that maybe King Vegeta is involved, but as to how he managed to suppress, not only Vegeta, but the Super Saiyan twins, is puzzling...assuming that it was King Vegeta.
Goten, seemed to be affected by the memories of his near rape not long after Gina had her baby, and the fact that he thought of Saima, and mentions just remembering something that he forgot, not only has me confused, as I have no idea what this is all about, but I know that I am more than a little worried...I\'m not a fan of Saima, but I don\'t want her to lose her baby or anything.
Really like the way you are linking this story to \"A Prince Among Men\"
This was one very interesting chapter, a bit of everything...passion, lust, wanton displays :-D intrigue, and suspense...and you had to post this on a saturday...you are truly evil :-D
Looking forward to Monday. :-)
Vegeta\'s thoughts as he was held by Goku, whilst Goku sucked on Vegeta\'s finger was very well done, the whole scene was very erotic. Vegeta\'s growing need for a more intimate touch was extremely well written, and his (very successful) attempt to get Goku to move along to better things was amazingly written. Your description of the very sexy, highly responsive Prince is exceptionally portrayed.
Really loved this: "..."...Let it rumble out of him, and felt the interest as the hardness pressed against his back. Haha. He had his ways too.\"
LOL! A moment of triumph for his Highness :-)
Gods, Vegeta really does have his ways doesn\'t he? Only you, could write a scene where someone *ahem* plays with themself in a female region and I find it amazingly sexy...I know that it\'s because it\'s Vegeta, but still...very spicy stuff. :-)
Oh Gods, the mirror...oh deary, deary me...*blushes* Verery.ery...lusty! (fans herself) Gods, I sound like a prude...I\'m not, but that was...unexpected...These two men are bloody amazing together, absolutely no fear of their sex life getting dull...Very hot!
Truly wonderful lemon!
Okay, the rest of it...confusing, but I guess that this is how it is meant to be at this point. I\'ve got that Goten (at least) also had ki ski suppressed (I imagine at the same time as his mother) I\'m going to assume at this point, that this happened just after their rescue of Vegeta, from Freiza. This has me thinking that maybe King Vegeta is involved, but as to how he managed to suppress, not only Vegeta, but the Super Saiyan twins, is puzzling...assuming that it was King Vegeta.
Goten, seemed to be affected by the memories of his near rape not long after Gina had her baby, and the fact that he thought of Saima, and mentions just remembering something that he forgot, not only has me confused, as I have no idea what this is all about, but I know that I am more than a little worried...I\'m not a fan of Saima, but I don\'t want her to lose her baby or anything.
Really like the way you are linking this story to \"A Prince Among Men\"
This was one very interesting chapter, a bit of everything...passion, lust, wanton displays :-D intrigue, and suspense...and you had to post this on a saturday...you are truly evil :-D
Looking forward to Monday. :-)
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really love the way this family operates. Goku grabbing Trunks like that, telling him to wake Goten up, like he\'s been a part of the family all along...really thi this! No shy, getting to know each other crap :-)
Really loved this:
\"“Gina’s in labor,” Goku said. “I’ve got to take ‘Geta to the hospital” He shivered here and cringed\"
LOL! I see that he still hasn\'t gotten over his needle phobia, I love his reaction to needles...and Vegeta\'s reaction to worms...LOL!
Poor Trunks...He was just getting some much needed rest and all.
Ooo, Goten called Trunks \'the demi\', Trunks seemed so hurt. I wonder if Goten realises what he said?
\"Pulled his shirt on. (No, it’s not a Banana in my Pocket.)\"
ROTFL! Okay, you finally got me on the t-shirt sayings, the others have always made me smile but this one... Loved it! :-D
\"“Oh, go fuck yourself,” Trunks said. Stood up and crossed his arms over his chest.\"
Yeah! You tell him Trunks :-)
Loved the whole waiting room scene with Goku, Vegeta and Bardock. Loved the conversation between Goku and Vegeta, it flowed nicely, and I loved the topic of conversation and inner thoughts, loved it when Bardock asked his mommy what he was thinking and curled up in Vegeta\'s lap...it was very nicely done.
Waiting to see what all this is about...
\"“I’m going to kill you mom,” he said.\"
Curioser and curioser :-)
And welcome to little Masuyo...okay, is this pronounced \'mass-ee-oh\' \'mas-soo-yoh\' or something else entirely?
Loved the scene when Gina was waiting for her baby to be handed back to her, loved how Vegeta had a little hold, loved why Goku declined to hold the baby :-D Really loved it when Goku was getting all annoyed with Vegeta because he refused to have sex in the hospital, and loved how Vegeta stood his ground...really love those two guys together :-)
Looking forwar mor more :-)
If it\'s any consolation...I enjoyed the chapter :-)
Loved the end dialogue :-)
\"Yeah, I love the way Goku’s mind works. Such a beautiful lust-driven thing. *sighs happily* And Of course Vegeta would use Goten as a threat to his youngest. He is the master of battle strategy after all. (Wink. )\"
Yes indeedy :-) But somehow his battle strategy becomes useless when it comes to handling Goku and his \'appetites\'...goes to prove that lust is much stronger than logic :-D
Really loved this:
\"“Gina’s in labor,” Goku said. “I’ve got to take ‘Geta to the hospital” He shivered here and cringed\"
LOL! I see that he still hasn\'t gotten over his needle phobia, I love his reaction to needles...and Vegeta\'s reaction to worms...LOL!
Poor Trunks...He was just getting some much needed rest and all.
Ooo, Goten called Trunks \'the demi\', Trunks seemed so hurt. I wonder if Goten realises what he said?
\"Pulled his shirt on. (No, it’s not a Banana in my Pocket.)\"
ROTFL! Okay, you finally got me on the t-shirt sayings, the others have always made me smile but this one... Loved it! :-D
\"“Oh, go fuck yourself,” Trunks said. Stood up and crossed his arms over his chest.\"
Yeah! You tell him Trunks :-)
Loved the whole waiting room scene with Goku, Vegeta and Bardock. Loved the conversation between Goku and Vegeta, it flowed nicely, and I loved the topic of conversation and inner thoughts, loved it when Bardock asked his mommy what he was thinking and curled up in Vegeta\'s lap...it was very nicely done.
Waiting to see what all this is about...
\"“I’m going to kill you mom,” he said.\"
Curioser and curioser :-)
And welcome to little Masuyo...okay, is this pronounced \'mass-ee-oh\' \'mas-soo-yoh\' or something else entirely?
Loved the scene when Gina was waiting for her baby to be handed back to her, loved how Vegeta had a little hold, loved why Goku declined to hold the baby :-D Really loved it when Goku was getting all annoyed with Vegeta because he refused to have sex in the hospital, and loved how Vegeta stood his ground...really love those two guys together :-)
Looking forwar mor more :-)
If it\'s any consolation...I enjoyed the chapter :-)
Loved the end dialogue :-)
\"Yeah, I love the way Goku’s mind works. Such a beautiful lust-driven thing. *sighs happily* And Of course Vegeta would use Goten as a threat to his youngest. He is the master of battle strategy after all. (Wink. )\"
Yes indeedy :-) But somehow his battle strategy becomes useless when it comes to handling Goku and his \'appetites\'...goes to prove that lust is much stronger than logic :-D
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, that was a little on the confusing side. Far too confusing for my poor tired brain to handle at the moment. Finals are coming up...hope that expl thi things a little.
I really apprieciated your second review for THOK. It made me feel all warm and tingly inside. The next chapter unfortunately is coming along slowly, but I am trying to fit in.
I really apprieciated your second review for THOK. It made me feel all warm and tingly inside. The next chapter unfortunately is coming along slowly, but I am trying to fit in.
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Of course the fact that you update everyday makes up for the fact that you were gone.
Anyway, it is wierd that you didn\'t like this chapter, I thought it was good. But of course there have been chapters that I have written that I absolutely hated...so go figure. Unfortunately now I will probably spend the rest of the day trying to pronounce the new baby\'s name and fail miserbly...Thanks a lot for that...I can just see my roommate looking at me funny already. ;)
Anyway, it is wierd that you didn\'t like this chapter, I thought it was good. But of course there have been chapters that I have written that I absolutely hated...so go figure. Unfortunately now I will probably spend the rest of the day trying to pronounce the new baby\'s name and fail miserbly...Thanks a lot for that...I can just see my roommate looking at me funny already. ;)
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very Funny...
Thought that if he didn’t get to the sex for this he was just going to stop being a nice fellow and have sex anyway. (But he knew as well as Vegeta that this was going to work.) --I thought that would work to, Vegeta can\'t hold out that long, especially when all the good stuff is happeneing to him...
attacked him and kissed him, used his hands to tear at the pants and knocked him right back onto the floor.---aww I love that
“Mine,” he whispered--hehe and you know I always love to hear that.
Licked the claim mark, thought that Vegeta was all his. Absolutely just his and his alone and it was about time that he set about reing ing everyone of this fact. (Especially his mate who thought he could just go about and take away sex.)--@_@ Really...hm? What is Goku planning? One can only wonder...
“I swear that if you so much as think about touching me again for at least FOUR solid hours I will get a butcher knife and CUT IT OFF.” --LoL that is so mean!!!!!! He can\'t cut that off!!!!
AND HIS BROTHER KISSED HER!---ROFL! That would really upset me! Eh, but since it\'s Goten it isn\'t all that bad.
“Yeah, you’re only saying that because Goten did.” She stood up, rubbed her round tummy and smiled AT HIS BROTHER.--LoL Poor Vegeta. I loved how she smiled at Goten...
And he remembered fondly back when he thought he too could control when his child would be born. Those were the days. Cute naïve days.--ROFL!!! that is so very true...hehe and it\'s pretty funy to here Vegeta think this...since he is a man...ahhhh but I love it so much!
OMG!!! What an evil evil cliffy!!!!!
You hurry back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
^.*
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Thought that if he didn’t get to the sex for this he was just going to stop being a nice fellow and have sex anyway. (But he knew as well as Vegeta that this was going to work.) --I thought that would work to, Vegeta can\'t hold out that long, especially when all the good stuff is happeneing to him...
attacked him and kissed him, used his hands to tear at the pants and knocked him right back onto the floor.---aww I love that
“Mine,” he whispered--hehe and you know I always love to hear that.
Licked the claim mark, thought that Vegeta was all his. Absolutely just his and his alone and it was about time that he set about reing ing everyone of this fact. (Especially his mate who thought he could just go about and take away sex.)--@_@ Really...hm? What is Goku planning? One can only wonder...
“I swear that if you so much as think about touching me again for at least FOUR solid hours I will get a butcher knife and CUT IT OFF.” --LoL that is so mean!!!!!! He can\'t cut that off!!!!
AND HIS BROTHER KISSED HER!---ROFL! That would really upset me! Eh, but since it\'s Goten it isn\'t all that bad.
“Yeah, you’re only saying that because Goten did.” She stood up, rubbed her round tummy and smiled AT HIS BROTHER.--LoL Poor Vegeta. I loved how she smiled at Goten...
And he remembered fondly back when he thought he too could control when his child would be born. Those were the days. Cute naïve days.--ROFL!!! that is so very true...hehe and it\'s pretty funy to here Vegeta think this...since he is a man...ahhhh but I love it so much!
OMG!!! What an evil evil cliffy!!!!!
You hurry back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
^.*
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved Goku\'s thoughts at the start. I love how he sounded so put out by the fact that Vegeta had even voiced the threat that he was going to put a stop to the sex :-)
Loved this:
\"(Thanks to his oldest twin son saying: “Still trying to think of ways to suck up to Mom?”) he could just ‘suck up’ to Vegeta and everything would just peachy!\"
LOL! People are really going to have to watch what they say when speaking to Goku :-D
Loved the lemon! ly ely enjoyed Goku\'s manipulation of Vegeta, the sexy Prince is highly responsive to Goku\'s touch and that crafty bugger knows it :-)
Loved this:
\"Vegeta pulled back and gl at at him. “I hate you,” he hissed.\"
LOL! I could feel Vegeta\'s annoyance at himself for his lack of control where his mate is concerned, and acknowledging how easily Goku melted his resolve to never let him touch him again (or at least until he was over his anger), is what makes this line snny.nny...definitely no hate there :-D
Yup! Beautiful lemon :-)
Really enjoyed the scene between Trunks and Goten. I loved the way you had them carrying on a conversation, whilst we were also getting a peek into Trunks\' thoughts. Loved the way he kept calling Goten an asshole :-D
Poor \'Geta. There\'s no way he\'s going to be able to make sense out of Gina\'s mood swings :-D
Loved this:
\"(Wondered why it was that his brother got to be the comforting one and he had to be the asshole for the whole damn pregnancy. Hoped like hell that Trunks gave Goten so much shit while he was pregnant.)\"
LOL! Me too! :-D
Aw, loved the scene with Vegeta and Gina :-)
Also loved this:
\"Vegeta set Bardock on the table, “Stay there or I’ll have Goten deal with you,” he said.\"
Cunning! I never thought of this, but very clever of Vegeta to reason that if he can\'t know Goten\'s secret, he\'ll just use the threat of getting Goten to deal with Bardock...whatever works. :-D
\"“I’m not having this baby without Vegeta.” And he remembered fondly back when he thought he too could control when his child would be born. Those were the days. Cute naïve days.\"
LOL! Loved this.
Really enjoyed this chapter :-)
Looking forward to your return. I miss those updates :-)
Loved this:
\"(Thanks to his oldest twin son saying: “Still trying to think of ways to suck up to Mom?”) he could just ‘suck up’ to Vegeta and everything would just peachy!\"
LOL! People are really going to have to watch what they say when speaking to Goku :-D
Loved the lemon! ly ely enjoyed Goku\'s manipulation of Vegeta, the sexy Prince is highly responsive to Goku\'s touch and that crafty bugger knows it :-)
Loved this:
\"Vegeta pulled back and gl at at him. “I hate you,” he hissed.\"
LOL! I could feel Vegeta\'s annoyance at himself for his lack of control where his mate is concerned, and acknowledging how easily Goku melted his resolve to never let him touch him again (or at least until he was over his anger), is what makes this line snny.nny...definitely no hate there :-D
Yup! Beautiful lemon :-)
Really enjoyed the scene between Trunks and Goten. I loved the way you had them carrying on a conversation, whilst we were also getting a peek into Trunks\' thoughts. Loved the way he kept calling Goten an asshole :-D
Poor \'Geta. There\'s no way he\'s going to be able to make sense out of Gina\'s mood swings :-D
Loved this:
\"(Wondered why it was that his brother got to be the comforting one and he had to be the asshole for the whole damn pregnancy. Hoped like hell that Trunks gave Goten so much shit while he was pregnant.)\"
LOL! Me too! :-D
Aw, loved the scene with Vegeta and Gina :-)
Also loved this:
\"Vegeta set Bardock on the table, “Stay there or I’ll have Goten deal with you,” he said.\"
Cunning! I never thought of this, but very clever of Vegeta to reason that if he can\'t know Goten\'s secret, he\'ll just use the threat of getting Goten to deal with Bardock...whatever works. :-D
\"“I’m not having this baby without Vegeta.” And he remembered fondly back when he thought he too could control when his child would be born. Those were the days. Cute naïve days.\"
LOL! Loved this.
Really enjoyed this chapter :-)
Looking forward to your return. I miss those updates :-)
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter! ^.^
“Except you,” he said to the little clueless one, “No sex for you.”--rofl, well I should hope the little one would not have sex. *shakes head at Goku* He is crazy...
“Or,” Trunks said between bites of food, “Goku fucked him into a complete blackout and now has to wait for him to wake up before he can do it again.”--hm...he seems like he can relate to this.
“I was starting to wonder if he was really Saiyan,” Goku said--Goku was wondering if he was saiyajin...man that must have been bad.
Gina turned to look at her mate. “Uhhh… Did they just go to have sex in public places?”--rofl!!!! I can\'t believe that thre are actually going to go to a store and have sex!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
There were a few very, very high-pitched screams and it sounded suspiciously like some people were fainting.--hehe, that is so funny!
“No, sirs,” that sounded like someone was attempting to talk to them.--rofl! If I worked there I wouldn\'t be trying to stop them I would be egging them on. Besides I would never attempt to try and stop Goku o_O he is very possessive and can be quite scary
, th, that was put to a quick end when Kakarot exploded into Super Saiyan. “MINE!” he growled.--hehe this is exactly what I mean. Although that is very sexy! I love it!
It was on the news. Shots of two supermarkets and their destroyed aisles.--*laughs* I can\'t believe it was on the news that fast. Those poor idiots that were fainting, they must be traumatized for having to see to absolutely sexy saiyajins engaging in sex! yeah, as if...I would be taking pictures!
(Unless you counted the fact that Mom had forbidden their father to ever touch him again and kicked him in the gut for even thinking about having sex in store much less actually doing it.)--ROFL!!!!! Poor Goku...I know he will get sex...Vegeta can resist him that long...
The end notes were hilarious!
I don’t want everyone to forget about me! *sobs *--No way we could never forget about you!
Plus, I won’t be near a computer or have time to write while I be gone. *sobs even louder *--@_@ oh no! That is horrible. I feel so badly for you. *hands you a laptop* There you go. ^.~
I do hope that you have fun on your trip and I am glad you are posting tomorrow..that is really, really nice of you.
Well I will miss you why you are gone...aff won\'t be the same...WHAT WILL WE DO!?!?!?!?!? No one prepared me fro such a moment!!!! *counts to ten* Ok..ok...I will get through this...
Well have fun on your trip!
Can\'t wait until ya get back!
^.*
-MB-
“Except you,” he said to the little clueless one, “No sex for you.”--rofl, well I should hope the little one would not have sex. *shakes head at Goku* He is crazy...
“Or,” Trunks said between bites of food, “Goku fucked him into a complete blackout and now has to wait for him to wake up before he can do it again.”--hm...he seems like he can relate to this.
“I was starting to wonder if he was really Saiyan,” Goku said--Goku was wondering if he was saiyajin...man that must have been bad.
Gina turned to look at her mate. “Uhhh… Did they just go to have sex in public places?”--rofl!!!! I can\'t believe that thre are actually going to go to a store and have sex!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
There were a few very, very high-pitched screams and it sounded suspiciously like some people were fainting.--hehe, that is so funny!
“No, sirs,” that sounded like someone was attempting to talk to them.--rofl! If I worked there I wouldn\'t be trying to stop them I would be egging them on. Besides I would never attempt to try and stop Goku o_O he is very possessive and can be quite scary
, th, that was put to a quick end when Kakarot exploded into Super Saiyan. “MINE!” he growled.--hehe this is exactly what I mean. Although that is very sexy! I love it!
It was on the news. Shots of two supermarkets and their destroyed aisles.--*laughs* I can\'t believe it was on the news that fast. Those poor idiots that were fainting, they must be traumatized for having to see to absolutely sexy saiyajins engaging in sex! yeah, as if...I would be taking pictures!
(Unless you counted the fact that Mom had forbidden their father to ever touch him again and kicked him in the gut for even thinking about having sex in store much less actually doing it.)--ROFL!!!!! Poor Goku...I know he will get sex...Vegeta can resist him that long...
The end notes were hilarious!
I don’t want everyone to forget about me! *sobs *--No way we could never forget about you!
Plus, I won’t be near a computer or have time to write while I be gone. *sobs even louder *--@_@ oh no! That is horrible. I feel so badly for you. *hands you a laptop* There you go. ^.~
I do hope that you have fun on your trip and I am glad you are posting tomorrow..that is really, really nice of you.
Well I will miss you why you are gone...aff won\'t be the same...WHAT WILL WE DO!?!?!?!?!? No one prepared me fro such a moment!!!! *counts to ten* Ok..ok...I will get through this...
Well have fun on your trip!
Can\'t wait until ya get back!
^.*
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So you ARE trying to kill me. *sigh*
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderflu chap...
Vegeta (mother of three rather troublesome children) entered the kitchen the next morning to find his youngest son sleeping next to the sparkling white wall.---aww so Bardock decided to cleam it before his parents woke up. That\'s so sweet. I loved how Vegeta smiled at him.
thought that when they couldn’t make noise or trouble they were still pretty cutaww aww another adorable moment from mommy Vegeta, I love that!
that was his overly-horny mate speaking, standing in the doorway giving Bulma that glaring look that he almost always gave her anymore as if to ask why the hell she thought she was allowed anywhere near his mate.--YAY!!! Goku! I love when he is possessive, it\'s suits him well I think.
He stepped out of the doorway and moved closer to Vegeta, still with the glare at Bulma.--hehe I luv that...*sighs*
“Get a room.” He got off the lawn chair, yawned, stretched and disappeared as well.--rofl! poor Geta having to witness that...although I wouldn\'t mind one bit!
You\'re leaving for 5 days *gasp* what will I do!?!?!?!??!!?
^.*
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Vegeta (mother of three rather troublesome children) entered the kitchen the next morning to find his youngest son sleeping next to the sparkling white wall.---aww so Bardock decided to cleam it before his parents woke up. That\'s so sweet. I loved how Vegeta smiled at him.
thought that when they couldn’t make noise or trouble they were still pretty cutaww aww another adorable moment from mommy Vegeta, I love that!
that was his overly-horny mate speaking, standing in the doorway giving Bulma that glaring look that he almost always gave her anymore as if to ask why the hell she thought she was allowed anywhere near his mate.--YAY!!! Goku! I love when he is possessive, it\'s suits him well I think.
He stepped out of the doorway and moved closer to Vegeta, still with the glare at Bulma.--hehe I luv that...*sighs*
“Get a room.” He got off the lawn chair, yawned, stretched and disappeared as well.--rofl! poor Geta having to witness that...although I wouldn\'t mind one bit!
You\'re leaving for 5 days *gasp* what will I do!?!?!?!??!!?
^.*
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter!
“Oh I thought you guys were dead,”
\"“If only,” Trunks said.\"
“Oh, waaa-waaa,” Vegeta (his twin) said, “Everyone here feels so fucking sorry for you.”
LOL! Do I detect a note of jealousy in our poor deprived \'Geta?
Totally loved Goku\'s response to this! Loved how he pointed to the, one year old Bardock and told him “No sex for you.”
ROTFL!
“Or,” Trunks said between bites of food, “Goku fucked him into a complete blackout and now has to wait for him to wake up before he can do it again.”
LOL! Totally loved this! Finally, Trunks shows his teeth :-) I like the fact that he and Vegeta (mummy) have something in common...not that he did Vegeta (or himself) any favours:
\"Goten grinned. “Well, damn, I bet I could convince him to have sex in the supermarket now.”\"
“No way! I’ve been trying to get ‘Geta to do that for years!”
...And the race is on. Poor Vegeta, no one felt sorry for him, but he was so oblivious to all of this, just trying to catch up on some sleep, and he wakes up in the middle of the canned vegetable aisle being molested by his mate...yes! :-D
\"“No, sirs,” that sounded like someone was attempting to talk to them.\"
Completely hilarious, loved this! :-D
\"Well, that was put to a quick end when Kakarot exploded into Super Saiyan. “MINE!”\"
ROTFL! Always love Goku\'s possessiveness...but this was a crack-up, loved the way that he instantly thought that the grocery mer (er (or whoever) wanted to steal Vegeta from him. :-D
\"“Mine,” Goku repeated.\"
\"Oh. He was so going to kill his mate. And whoever came up with this idiot idea of having sex in the middle of the canned goods aisle.\"
Loved Vegeta\'s reaction. :-D
\"Smirked. Heard the insane little word again, and was pulled up tight against Kakarot’s body as they pulsed and shivered against one another.\"
Good stuff! :-)
\"...which was the exact same shade of lavender as his hair which made him wonder where the hell he got purple hair from anyway.\"
Me too! Genetically speaking, his hair should be black, as should his eyes, considering the fact that Saiyans would not carry the recessive gene. Cartoons... *shrugs*
“Please tell me that this will not become a habit.”
“I thought you didn’t want me to lie.”
LOL! Poor Trunks. At least Goku had the decency to allow Vegeta a rest during the first couple of days, before he started his \'sex every 2hrs\' marathon...ahh, the good ol\' days :-D
\"(Unless you counted the fact that Mom had forbidden their father to ever touch him again and kicked him in the gut for even thinking about having in in store much less actually doing it.)\"
LOL! And this makes it, how many times, that Vegeta has said \'never again\'? :-D
Really enjoyed this chapter and looking forward to the next :-)
Enjoyed the end dialogue :-)
\"Beee Veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwy Quiiiiiiiiiiiiiiet, He’s huuuuunnnnntinnnnng Trunks.\"
LOL!
\"Hee… *sits back in chair and thinks away…*\"
Yeah! More possessive Goku, more G/V sex. Bring it on!
\"And it was fun to sit there and wait for them. *I’m very weird. *\"
LOL! Nah, perfectly normal I\'m afraid :-D
“Oh I thought you guys were dead,”
\"“If only,” Trunks said.\"
“Oh, waaa-waaa,” Vegeta (his twin) said, “Everyone here feels so fucking sorry for you.”
LOL! Do I detect a note of jealousy in our poor deprived \'Geta?
Totally loved Goku\'s response to this! Loved how he pointed to the, one year old Bardock and told him “No sex for you.”
ROTFL!
“Or,” Trunks said between bites of food, “Goku fucked him into a complete blackout and now has to wait for him to wake up before he can do it again.”
LOL! Totally loved this! Finally, Trunks shows his teeth :-) I like the fact that he and Vegeta (mummy) have something in common...not that he did Vegeta (or himself) any favours:
\"Goten grinned. “Well, damn, I bet I could convince him to have sex in the supermarket now.”\"
“No way! I’ve been trying to get ‘Geta to do that for years!”
...And the race is on. Poor Vegeta, no one felt sorry for him, but he was so oblivious to all of this, just trying to catch up on some sleep, and he wakes up in the middle of the canned vegetable aisle being molested by his mate...yes! :-D
\"“No, sirs,” that sounded like someone was attempting to talk to them.\"
Completely hilarious, loved this! :-D
\"Well, that was put to a quick end when Kakarot exploded into Super Saiyan. “MINE!”\"
ROTFL! Always love Goku\'s possessiveness...but this was a crack-up, loved the way that he instantly thought that the grocery mer (er (or whoever) wanted to steal Vegeta from him. :-D
\"“Mine,” Goku repeated.\"
\"Oh. He was so going to kill his mate. And whoever came up with this idiot idea of having sex in the middle of the canned goods aisle.\"
Loved Vegeta\'s reaction. :-D
\"Smirked. Heard the insane little word again, and was pulled up tight against Kakarot’s body as they pulsed and shivered against one another.\"
Good stuff! :-)
\"...which was the exact same shade of lavender as his hair which made him wonder where the hell he got purple hair from anyway.\"
Me too! Genetically speaking, his hair should be black, as should his eyes, considering the fact that Saiyans would not carry the recessive gene. Cartoons... *shrugs*
“Please tell me that this will not become a habit.”
“I thought you didn’t want me to lie.”
LOL! Poor Trunks. At least Goku had the decency to allow Vegeta a rest during the first couple of days, before he started his \'sex every 2hrs\' marathon...ahh, the good ol\' days :-D
\"(Unless you counted the fact that Mom had forbidden their father to ever touch him again and kicked him in the gut for even thinking about having in in store much less actually doing it.)\"
LOL! And this makes it, how many times, that Vegeta has said \'never again\'? :-D
Really enjoyed this chapter and looking forward to the next :-)
Enjoyed the end dialogue :-)
\"Beee Veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwy Quiiiiiiiiiiiiiiet, He’s huuuuunnnnntinnnnng Trunks.\"
LOL!
\"Hee… *sits back in chair and thinks away…*\"
Yeah! More possessive Goku, more G/V sex. Bring it on!
\"And it was fun to sit there and wait for them. *I’m very weird. *\"
LOL! Nah, perfectly normal I\'m afraid :-D