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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O did u know- TRUNKS HAS THE CUTEST ASS IN THE WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORL x_X =)
WOW. i just love ur work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^___________________________^ u are now on the top list of my favorite authors >=) mwhahahahahha O_O -admires Trunks\' hot ass\' x.x heheheheh
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UR MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD @_@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YES YESYESYESYEYSEYESYESYEYSEYYSYESYEYSYESYES OH MIGHTY MASTER!!!!!!! o_o!
Majin Bulma ~
WOW. i just love ur work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^___________________________^ u are now on the top list of my favorite authors >=) mwhahahahahha O_O -admires Trunks\' hot ass\' x.x heheheheh
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UR MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD @_@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YES YESYESYESYEYSEYESYESYEYSEYYSYESYEYSYESYES OH MIGHTY MASTER!!!!!!! o_o!
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter. The following is my favorite: ...had to wonder if Goten had some sort of special training that allowed him to go days without sleep or food
just so as long as he could have sex.
“I want food,” he said, putting a pause on the whole sex thing by clamping down on Goten’s hardness inside of him—discovered that made his mate
stop immediately, also made him give him a look like that was such an astounding ability. He nodded and repeated himself: “I want food.”
“Right,” Goten said, grinned like a lecher, “But first…” his eyes flickered blue and his hair stood straight up as he said this,
and Trunks panted helplessly as he was stretched, “I want sex.” ROFL
Keep up the exccelent updates!
just so as long as he could have sex.
“I want food,” he said, putting a pause on the whole sex thing by clamping down on Goten’s hardness inside of him—discovered that made his mate
stop immediately, also made him give him a look like that was such an astounding ability. He nodded and repeated himself: “I want food.”
“Right,” Goten said, grinned like a lecher, “But first…” his eyes flickered blue and his hair stood straight up as he said this,
and Trunks panted helplessly as he was stretched, “I want sex.” ROFL
Keep up the exccelent updates!
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Insane sex crazied Goku never ceases to be fucking hilarious. The Supermarket of all places...*Sigh* They actually competed to see who could have sex in a grocery store. I don\'t why I am so surprised. It funny how Vegeta was so mad but still able to preform or just stay there and take...which ever you perfer to believe. He He. I kinda figured the younger ones would cause the most destruction. Goku and Vegeta are seasoned veterans at fucking in public.
I\'m always the first to review. Wow? I guess it\'s because I always have to get up so early in the morning for class. I check my email everyday in hopes that class is cancelled and since I\'m already on the computer...
I\'m always the first to review. Wow? I guess it\'s because I always have to get up so early in the morning for class. I check my email everyday in hopes that class is cancelled and since I\'m already on the computer...
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chap!
If they had stripped him naked, spread-eagled him and put up a sign inviting tour to to come and gawk he was fairly certain he would have been more comfortable.--LoL aww. That would be a funny yet strange sight.
When the woman did finally show herself, she was wearing some sort of pale-blue body suit--What!?! LoL
“Okay,” she said through the little metal plate over her mouth,--ROFL!!!!!!!!! Has she lost her mind? Is it really that serious?!?!?
ansannsanely possessive dementia--ROFL!
Bardock ran to the door to make sure he was gone and then turned to his parents and picked up right where he had loff.off. “I HATE BOTH OF YOU.” ---awww he is so cute! I love how he had to run to the door first to see if Goten was gone.
Gk: I think the blue-suit was a step too far, Bulma.--hehe me too, but it was insanely fun...so hannibal-esque!
Hilarious chapter! Loved it!
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If they had stripped him naked, spread-eagled him and put up a sign inviting tour to to come and gawk he was fairly certain he would have been more comfortable.--LoL aww. That would be a funny yet strange sight.
When the woman did finally show herself, she was wearing some sort of pale-blue body suit--What!?! LoL
“Okay,” she said through the little metal plate over her mouth,--ROFL!!!!!!!!! Has she lost her mind? Is it really that serious?!?!?
ansannsanely possessive dementia--ROFL!
Bardock ran to the door to make sure he was gone and then turned to his parents and picked up right where he had loff.off. “I HATE BOTH OF YOU.” ---awww he is so cute! I love how he had to run to the door first to see if Goten was gone.
Gk: I think the blue-suit was a step too far, Bulma.--hehe me too, but it was insanely fun...so hannibal-esque!
Hilarious chapter! Loved it!
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Trunks, f thf the whole hormone therapy thing wasn\'t disturbing enough...Bulma has to deck herself out as if she\'s dealing with a highly contagious virus...and the bit with the tongs... She didn\'t use tongs the first time, just left it on the kitchen counter...either Bulma has come down with a huge case of paranoia, or she\'s playing with him isn\'t she? LOL!
“I think you underestimate the depth of what you just got yourself into,” Vegeta said—smirked like the fucking bastard he was—“
ROTFL!
Loved the scene with Bardock, scrubbing at the mess on the wall :-)
Enjoyed sharing Gina\'s inner thoughts...still crack a smile when she refers to Vegeta as \'mummy\' but it\'s sweet :-)
\",,,curled his little hands into fists and shouted: “I HATE YOU! I HATE BOTH Of…ok, ok, I didn’t mean” He” He dashed across the floor, grabbed the sponge and went back to cleaning immediately.\"
LOL! Cracked up at this. Have to wonder just how the heck Goten does that. :-)
\"“I HATE BOTH OF YOU.” Tossed the rag against the floor a second time and took off.\"
\"Goku and Vegeta (Mummy) played a quick rock-paper-scissors, and Goku lost. “Oh, man,” he said and raised two fingers to his forehead.\"
ROTFL! Loved this! Loved the whole scene :-) Love Vegeta and Goku\'s way of determining who gets to go after Bardock...totally l Gok Goku\'s response when he lost. Can hear it perfectly...it\'s so him...LOL!
Bulma was actually serious...This is even funnier...LOL!
Poor Trunks, it all must be so overwhelming for him. As it must have been for Vegeta, but I was so happy at him and Goku getting together, I sort of forgot to k ofk of this...but the end result has been wonderful for those two, so I know that Trunks\'ll be fine :-)
Really enjoyed this...Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
\"Just imagine what will happen if Goten & Goku start this unspoken rivalry to see who can get away with having sex in a more public place.\"
LOL! Ooh yeahhat hat would be great! Any chance of that happening?
\"...(And you’ll just have to keep reading to find out, won’t ya?)\"
*chuckle* Love this family too much to ever stop reading :-)
“I think you underestimate the depth of what you just got yourself into,” Vegeta said—smirked like the fucking bastard he was—“
ROTFL!
Loved the scene with Bardock, scrubbing at the mess on the wall :-)
Enjoyed sharing Gina\'s inner thoughts...still crack a smile when she refers to Vegeta as \'mummy\' but it\'s sweet :-)
\",,,curled his little hands into fists and shouted: “I HATE YOU! I HATE BOTH Of…ok, ok, I didn’t mean” He” He dashed across the floor, grabbed the sponge and went back to cleaning immediately.\"
LOL! Cracked up at this. Have to wonder just how the heck Goten does that. :-)
\"“I HATE BOTH OF YOU.” Tossed the rag against the floor a second time and took off.\"
\"Goku and Vegeta (Mummy) played a quick rock-paper-scissors, and Goku lost. “Oh, man,” he said and raised two fingers to his forehead.\"
ROTFL! Loved this! Loved the whole scene :-) Love Vegeta and Goku\'s way of determining who gets to go after Bardock...totally l Gok Goku\'s response when he lost. Can hear it perfectly...it\'s so him...LOL!
Bulma was actually serious...This is even funnier...LOL!
Poor Trunks, it all must be so overwhelming for him. As it must have been for Vegeta, but I was so happy at him and Goku getting together, I sort of forgot to k ofk of this...but the end result has been wonderful for those two, so I know that Trunks\'ll be fine :-)
Really enjoyed this...Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
\"Just imagine what will happen if Goten & Goku start this unspoken rivalry to see who can get away with having sex in a more public place.\"
LOL! Ooh yeahhat hat would be great! Any chance of that happening?
\"...(And you’ll just have to keep reading to find out, won’t ya?)\"
*chuckle* Love this family too much to ever stop reading :-)
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor \'Geta...Deeply horny and not getting any, whilst Goten and Trunks are going at it like rabbits. Gotta feel for the guy :-)
\"...So the only solution was to kill his little brother. He’d revive him after he got a little sleep, naturally, but he would kill him and leave him that way until he started to smell.\"
LOL! Sometimes that twin bond can be a real pain :-)
\"It took her two years to get them all put back the right way.\"
LOL! Oh Gods, little bastards :-) Bet she was really regretting her hormone therapy at this point :-)
\"Dropped his brother on his parent’s bed—where they were actually just sleeping for once.\"
LOL! Oh my God! What\'s the matter with Goku? He\'s not sick is he? :-D
\"“Knock me out,” he said,\"
Wow! Goten actually has a limit? :-D
“And give Trunks his tail back.”
Isn\'t that just going to make the horniness worse? Or is this to make him more able to handle it all?
Hope Vegeta manages to catch up on some Zzzzz\'s now. :-)
Loved that scene with Vegeta and his sleeping baby boy. So sweet. Also loved it when he stood watching his twin boys being all peaceful and asleep :-)
\"Goten had probably purposefully sought out his brother so he could give his mate a few hours without the constant ‘sex now’ thing. What a considerate person.\"
Ah, all is right with the world...Goten\'s passionstilstill limitless...he was actually being considerate of Trunks...also sweet :-)
\"...Which meant that Kakarot was going to try to convince him to have sex again. Joy.\"
L! L! And...Ooo, possessive Goku, long time, no see...love it! :-)
\"She backed up a few more feet and looked unsure as to whether or not she should just flee completely.\"
LOL! Oh dear lord, this was funny...poor Bulma :-)
Loved the whole \l stl stroking\' scene which culminated in Bulma\'s abrupt departure. :-D
And everything thereafter...especially when Vegeta (twin) glared at his parents and told them to get a room...now everywhere he looks, everyone is getting some, except for him...gotta feel for the guy. :-D
Poor Trunks...still, I doubt that his mate\'s twin, has any sympathy for him...he seems to be getting \'Geta\'s share of the sex as well as his own at the moment...kinda funny for the onlooker :-D
“Right,” Goten said, grinned like a lecher, “But first…” .... “I want sex.”
LOL! Did Trunks really think that Goten was going to leap up to make a sandwich at this point? :-D
LOL! Loved the end dialogue...poor Bardock...\'my eyes\' maybe he can go to counselling with Yamcha :-D
\"*Getarian, I respond to your review (since you appear to be leavthemthem while I’m trying to respond) either later today or in the next chappie. *\"
No problem. :-) I knew that I was racing against the clock...really cut it fine this time. But see, I\'m really early this time around :-)
\"...So the only solution was to kill his little brother. He’d revive him after he got a little sleep, naturally, but he would kill him and leave him that way until he started to smell.\"
LOL! Sometimes that twin bond can be a real pain :-)
\"It took her two years to get them all put back the right way.\"
LOL! Oh Gods, little bastards :-) Bet she was really regretting her hormone therapy at this point :-)
\"Dropped his brother on his parent’s bed—where they were actually just sleeping for once.\"
LOL! Oh my God! What\'s the matter with Goku? He\'s not sick is he? :-D
\"“Knock me out,” he said,\"
Wow! Goten actually has a limit? :-D
“And give Trunks his tail back.”
Isn\'t that just going to make the horniness worse? Or is this to make him more able to handle it all?
Hope Vegeta manages to catch up on some Zzzzz\'s now. :-)
Loved that scene with Vegeta and his sleeping baby boy. So sweet. Also loved it when he stood watching his twin boys being all peaceful and asleep :-)
\"Goten had probably purposefully sought out his brother so he could give his mate a few hours without the constant ‘sex now’ thing. What a considerate person.\"
Ah, all is right with the world...Goten\'s passionstilstill limitless...he was actually being considerate of Trunks...also sweet :-)
\"...Which meant that Kakarot was going to try to convince him to have sex again. Joy.\"
L! L! And...Ooo, possessive Goku, long time, no see...love it! :-)
\"She backed up a few more feet and looked unsure as to whether or not she should just flee completely.\"
LOL! Oh dear lord, this was funny...poor Bulma :-)
Loved the whole \l stl stroking\' scene which culminated in Bulma\'s abrupt departure. :-D
And everything thereafter...especially when Vegeta (twin) glared at his parents and told them to get a room...now everywhere he looks, everyone is getting some, except for him...gotta feel for the guy. :-D
Poor Trunks...still, I doubt that his mate\'s twin, has any sympathy for him...he seems to be getting \'Geta\'s share of the sex as well as his own at the moment...kinda funny for the onlooker :-D
“Right,” Goten said, grinned like a lecher, “But first…” .... “I want sex.”
LOL! Did Trunks really think that Goten was going to leap up to make a sandwich at this point? :-D
LOL! Loved the end dialogue...poor Bardock...\'my eyes\' maybe he can go to counselling with Yamcha :-D
\"*Getarian, I respond to your review (since you appear to be leavthemthem while I’m trying to respond) either later today or in the next chappie. *\"
No problem. :-) I knew that I was racing against the clock...really cut it fine this time. But see, I\'m really early this time around :-)
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is Trunks\'s tail purple or brown? I know that most people make it purple to match his hair. I do that too. It just seems to me that their tail color should be the same as thier hair color. Hmm... Anyway, I loved this chapter of course. I don\'t think that I have ever read a chapter of yours that I haven\'t liked.
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, now all the action can begin. JOY! I also think that Bulma might have gone a little too far with the blue suit but to each their own.
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great!
(which proclaimed My Ass is Your Ass.) --rofl! hehe what a lovely shirt.
“HANDS OFF ASSHOLE.” --LoL again another wonderful shirt
“Ugh!” Bardock said. Jumped on the back of the couch and ran off in the opposite direction of them. Screaming at the top of his lungs.--rofl! Aww he is so cute. I like little Bardock already.
If they knew the secret it would be no fun.--true, but what is this mysertious secret. One can\'t help but to be very curious
“If you’re not sure than don’t take the fucking hormones. If you do love him, than do.” --rofl! Than you Vegeta for that heart warming conversation. I could really picture him saying that, fl exl expressions and all.
“Fine. But you need to sleep on the floor in our room because Mommy and I are going to have sex. Its not good for Daddies to go without…” --rofl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That is so hilarious! I can\'t believe he was saying that to his son. hehe its\'s not good for daddies to go without! I loved that.
“Oh, Kami,” Vegeta muttered, “Go get a room.” --hehe LoL
And Vegeta was naked.--I did a double take when I read that, for some reason I just wasn\'t expecting that. A neaked Vegeta is a very nice thing...especially w/ a tail.
Gk: I think this story should be all about me and how I get sex.--I agree!!! Well not really I like everyone else in the ficcy! They make me laugh, but Goku sex is a great thing too!
Another wonderful new fic!
Thanks!
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(which proclaimed My Ass is Your Ass.) --rofl! hehe what a lovely shirt.
“HANDS OFF ASSHOLE.” --LoL again another wonderful shirt
“Ugh!” Bardock said. Jumped on the back of the couch and ran off in the opposite direction of them. Screaming at the top of his lungs.--rofl! Aww he is so cute. I like little Bardock already.
If they knew the secret it would be no fun.--true, but what is this mysertious secret. One can\'t help but to be very curious
“If you’re not sure than don’t take the fucking hormones. If you do love him, than do.” --rofl! Than you Vegeta for that heart warming conversation. I could really picture him saying that, fl exl expressions and all.
“Fine. But you need to sleep on the floor in our room because Mommy and I are going to have sex. Its not good for Daddies to go without…” --rofl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That is so hilarious! I can\'t believe he was saying that to his son. hehe its\'s not good for daddies to go without! I loved that.
“Oh, Kami,” Vegeta muttered, “Go get a room.” --hehe LoL
And Vegeta was naked.--I did a double take when I read that, for some reason I just wasn\'t expecting that. A neaked Vegeta is a very nice thing...especially w/ a tail.
Gk: I think this story should be all about me and how I get sex.--I agree!!! Well not really I like everyone else in the ficcy! They make me laugh, but Goku sex is a great thing too!
Another wonderful new fic!
Thanks!
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the part where Goten wiskes in stops and smiles and punces. LOL Now that Goku has his tail back, all that\'s left is for Trunks to get his.
It would not surprise me if Trunks became more frisky with his tail back. Then again, with being turned into a hermaphrodite might compound it.
Hehe.
It would not surprise me if Trunks became more frisky with his tail back. Then again, with being turned into a hermaphrodite might compound it.
Hehe.