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The who series is good. I want to see Trunks have at least one girl and two boys. I think those kids would drive Goten up the wall, and the poor grandparents should go nuts. Just an idea, oh and can you make more of the frosting chronicle please

\"And, most of the time, it was also devoid of a certain horny, spastic puppy, overly-possessive mates that snuck up on people and somehow managed to convince him that sex was something they should do everywhere.\"

LOL! And so it is, when it comes to these two anyway :-D

\"but the last time he hade soe something his child considered to be obstinate and asshole-like, he had ended up with bright pink hair.\"

LOL! So this is why he got the pink treatment :-) I\'m stunned that no one has ever considered payback.

\"Sighed. Wondered how much work it would take to put another bathroom in the house.\"

Poor Vegeta, can\'t even enjoy a nice relaxing shower.

\"Wondered just how long this little boy was going to live under the mistaken impression that he was more stubborn than him.\"

LOL! I do like Vegeta, looks like he\'s got a battle on his hands with baby brother :-)

\"“I don’t remember being asked to make anything,” he said.\"

Lazy \'Geta, he needs to take lessons from his father. I loved the way Goku fussed over Vegeta when he was pregnant :-)

\"Because it was so much fun to watch them endlessly pushed to the ends of their wits by the rambunctious child. If they knew the secret it would be no fun.\"

LOL! I can\'t wait for both Vegeta and Goten to become parents...payback time :-) Deeply curious as to what the \'secret\' is...

\"...Crossed his arms over his chest, and nodded to himself like he had just fulfilled some sort of motherly duty.\"

ROTFL! Gods Vegeta, sometimes you\'re so bloody useless...LOL!

Okay, Vegeta told Trunks what he needed to hear, I\'m glad that he was able to warn Trunks what to expect, loved this:

\"...Oh, and get over your sense of modesty before you drink it, because Goten’s like his father, they don’t have an ounce of tor dor discretion.”\"

LOL! Another important warning :-) I do miss those early days when Goku kept talking about sex with Vegeta in front of everyone :-D

“Fine. But you need to sleep on the floor in our room because Mommy and I are going to have sex. Its not good for Daddies to go without…”

ROTFL! Gods, I love this guy...You tell \'em Goku. You need sex with their mum...this beats the heck out of all the pink hair treatments :-D

\"Stood there, holding his hands over his father’s mouth until he was sure that nothing more would be said before he backed away,\"

Bardock is so sweet :-)

Yes! Goku and Vegeta have their tails back :-) Loved how the twins manipulated Goku so he didn\'t see the needle coming :-D

Oh wow! Loved the whole tail stroking scene, naked Vegeta, soon equally naked Goku and then synchronised tail stroking, panting and thrusting...steamy :-)

Can never get enough G/V action...and I totally loved Vegetaing ing “Kakarot,” and Goku saying “Mine,” - how I missed this...*sigh*

looking forward to the next chapter :-)

Loved the end dialogue :-)

I love the entire series!! It\'s fucking funny as hell. You should keep going with this!! Right on.

Yes a new story...loved lots...have no time to say more really...paper due in the morning...damned college! Yay! Tails!

Excelent sequel!!!!!!!!!!! I had a feeling a needle would be iled led in restoring the tail. My guess is an injetction of saiyan stem s. Ws. Which can be extracted by the
inner lining of the stomach, at least in humans.
Anyway the \"HANDS OFF ASSHOLE\" shirt on Gina is so fitting. ROFL. Now that she is pregnant her mood swings are really going to heat things up.
And you are right Trunks couldn\'t hold out for long against Goten in the trick department. If however a certain pregnant mood swinging human mate gets involved,
then both the twins will be in a lot of trouble. LOL
Keep up the good work!!!!

Reviewing Chapter 19

Sheesh, I thought I was all caught up on this fic. How did I miss one?

I loved the scene with Pan and Presta. But I cracked up at the point when Goten picked Presta up by her tail, and Pan ended up kickinrselrself in the head. It was hilarious :-D

Gohan showed amazing restraint, he must really look forward to family visit day. ;-)

\"...“Because having sex with you is so very boring.” (Still, one would notice that he had not put the ice cream aside or removed his pants.)\"

LOL! I get the feeling that Goten is getting the, not so good side of a contentedly pregnant mate. :-)

“Don’t even think you’re going to kiss me. I’m eating my ice cream.” He motioned to the lower half of his body. “Everythyou you want is down there.”
\"Goten snorted. “Oh, please,” he said, “Stop the romancing.”\"

LOL! I\'m really loving this \'new improved\' laid back Trunks. Guess his mate is rubbing off on him. :-)

\"Felt his body tremor and thought that he was going to prove to be more important than that damn ice cream eventually.\"
\"(Maybe not today, or tomorrow, or for the next four or five months…but one day



LOL! I really enjoy the way these two are with each other... not as much as Goku and Vegeta, but close. :-)

I love that Presta is teaching Gina how to use her new-found powers. Loved it when Presta asked her what she was going to teach her, and Gina came up with this:

“Lets see,” Gina said. Tapped her finger against her chin. “What would piss your father off?”

Followed by this:

“Hey,” Vegeta said from the side, “Don’t be teaching her anything that will get you in trouble. He’ll think I helped you.”

LOL! Love that Vegeta is afraid of his brother\'s vengeance skills. :-D

“What about…” Presta stopped, shrugged. “I have no idea what you girls do all day. Just don’t teach me anything that will turn me into that little…Pan thing.”

LOL! Good decision!

Enjoyed it when Vegeta got all concerned when Presta told Gina, that it\'s way more fun to fight the men, as a form of attraction, rather than acting all helpless. Cracked up when he told Gina not to listen to her because she\'s mentally unstable. Loved how Bardock defended her:

\"Bardock pushed his way into the conversation. “No she’s not.” Then he tugged on Presta’s arm and perepered—loud enough they all heard—“You’re not unstable are you?”\"

LOL! He\'s so adorable. I think he\'s got a little baby crush on her. :-) Just weirded myself out as I realised that she\'s his niece... even though she is older... Ah, who cares... baby crushes are sweet. :-)

Enjoyed the scene between Vegeta and Goku. It had a wonderfully contented feel to it. :-)

Liked the end dialogue. :-)

\"Honestly, push come to shove, I think Trunks is the only one of the ‘mates’ that would flat out tell his mate to go ‘fix’ himself and leave him the hell alone.\"

Yeah. I can see that as well. :-)

\"And don’t worry about Presta, she’s just naturally that disrespectful. The only one she really respects is the King.\"

Ah, yeah, sort of fits her personality. :-) Love that she respects the King. :-)

\"Okay. *Goes to track the wild ‘Goku’ in his natural horny habitat as he stalks the elusive ‘Vegeta’ * I wonder what I should wear for camouflage?\"

Well, seeing as how they\'re nearly always up against a mountainside, you could go as a rock... or for those special candlelight supermarkcenecenes... you could be one of those ladies handing out free food samples, and can enjoy watching Goku get himself all wound up in knots as he tortures himself over what to do, eat or \'bump uglies\'... then again, he might incorporate the two... :-D