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person jaygoose
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know I don\'t actually feel gipped. Those half lemons were sufficient. I might still be half sleep though. The Vegeta/Goku one came equipted with hilaritiy too, so that was a plus.

*Sigh* Going to visit me Mum for Mum\'s Day...won\'t be back til Tues. or Wed. *Cries* I\'m going to be so behind on the ficies!
person Getarian
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I only just noticed... you passed the century on this fic... 109 reviews... soon to be 110! Congratulations Card! Yeah! :-)

I really liked the beginning with Goku and Gohan trying to keep the kiddies away from the house. Love how Goku thought of Vegeta as his dear mate... so sweet. :-)

Totally loved all the squirming kids, but the best part was with Bardock... I really do love this kid. :-)

“No faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiirrrrr!” Bardock howled, curled himself up and sank his teeth into Goku’s arm. Ah. The biting stage.\"

LOL! Such an adorable image, although I doubt that Gthinthinks so, but I love his calm reaction to the bite. :-)

Also love this:
\"...moved over and picked his son up, held him so he could sniffle and sob into his chest.\"

So sweet, I love this image of Goku comforting his baby son... I mean I love it with Vegeta, he\'s the mother and it\'s more natural, but it\'s good to see it with the father occassionally. :-)

Loved Presta\'s reaction to the newborn...

\"...This was what she was waiting to see? Wow. Spectacular.\"
\"Not.\"

LOL! This is a good reaction... I definitely don\'t see her playing \'little mother\' :-)

Love the interaction between Presta and Trunks, her jealousy was understandable where her dad was crnedrned, but I\'m glad that she has decided on the role of protector of her new baby sister... it\'s pretty sweet... but don\'t tell Presta that I said that. :-D

Loved this:
\"... they decided (all three of the new family) that they should shower and promptly confiscatee bae bathroom. Although nobody could figure out why, Presta declined to join in the family grooming. (One could only wonder why she wouldn’t want to.)\"

LOL! It\'s got me beat why she wouldn\'t want to join in on that... sounds fun... not. :-D

Have I overlooked something? Why is \'Geta annoyed? Sounds pretty bad if Goten feels that maybe Goku should go with him when he spars with Presta.

LOL! Loved the end dialogue. Really loved the \'blinkathon\' with Goku and Vegeta. :-)

\"Gah! For hark, I see an ending. *looks out over the story *\"

Noooooo, I love this universe, don\'t take it away from me. :-(


\"I thought it was pretty calm too. Of course, when faced with disasters and emergencies I get very calm. Weird.\"

No, that\'s a good thing... much better than running around in circles in a blind panic. :-)

\"Yes he is a genius.\"
\"Yeah she’s born.\"
\"I really liked the abbreviated entsents here.\"

LOL! Thanks... I loved your responses to my abbreviated comments. :-D


Re: Poll:

Best sex? G/V of course. No question for me. Goku\'s imagination and stamina are absolutely amazing, and Vegeta\'s extremely tactile body is an incredible writhing mass of pure sex appeal... together they are explosive. :-)
person jaygoose
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He...he...about those reviews...I told you I hated the internet...well my internet connection anyway.

I love this little family, does it really have to end? *pouts*
person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^

That was when her dear Grandpa Goku dusted her off, sat her (she was buried head first in the ground) on her butt --Lmao

But he still wasn’t better than Bardock.--Oh of course not. ^_^ I like the fact that she will always have this other set of ppl to remember, and how she holds them to such high standards.

Her grandfather finally dug his way back out of the ground, walked over to her and sat down. Put his chin on his hand. “Now we’ll never get to eat.”--ROFL!!! Well gee, I guess that is the first thing we all worry about after we have been hammered into the ground. I love how him and Presta were knocked into the ground and they are both just normal, not hurt at all. Oh to be a saiyajin...

Fighting with the sort of smooth, strange perion ion that only two people with one soul could really attain.--That is interesting and amazing all the same.

And half the sky went black again when the twins blacked out. Goku grinned happily, toted one twin under each arm and said. “We can go eat now.”--He sure waited long enough to do that.

And Bardock was pouting so he was STILL eating; it always took longer when you pouted.)--rofl!!!

The change this made in Presta’s attitude toward her sister was nearly visible in the air, like a neon sign above her that suddenly flicked on and went ‘Awwwww, isn’t that cute?’ --I love that. Trunks is really calm and I like that he asked Presta if she wanted to hold Aya. That was so sweet.

Trunks: I want a T-shirt that says “No, I am not drugged.”--rofl!!!!!

GASP. You didn’t give an answer to the poll! *sobs * --damn it!!!! I knew I forgot something! Well you know I would have voted G/V anyway.

^.*
-MB-
person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
“Well, until she comes out there’s really nothing to see,” Pan said--LoL

Wow. Exciting. It was a little pink thing wrapped up in a light blue blanket. This was what she was waiting to see? Wow. Spectacular.
Not.--lmao, I felt like that to when I saw my sibling for the first time. I love Presta, she israblrable and tough!

I also loved the interaction between her and Trunks. Trunks getting annoyed b/c she is always calling Aya \'it\'.

And little Presta is jealous...it\'s understandable though, especially since the baby is a girl. I loved seeing her reaction to the baby and this whole situation especially when they talked about what she shouldn\'t do to the baby like kicking her through walls and etc...lol

One for each of the bright-colored ones. He handed them around. “Drink these.” --I am glad they will all retuo tho their natural state of color, Gina should be very happy. It seems like it affected her the most.

“If you’re waiting for someone to miss you…” Presta said with a grin, “Keep waiting.”--rofl, she is mean but that\'s what makes her so wonderful.

lmao at the end notes, loved the blinking!!!!








person cueball2
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Trunks does need that t-shirt.

Your stories are very entertainting.

And yes, I will tell you that prank that I thought of.

I will email it to you, just in case you want to use it. (And so there aren\'t any sneak peeks at the review section.)
person macha
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, well I guess that makes it okay then.

I have no idea what lil\' geta was all pissed off about, but it certainly was a long fight. I agree with Vegeta, if Kakarott hadn\'t let the fight go on so long, he could have had his food way before then.

Hey, I think that Trunks should have a shirt that says, \"No, I am not drugged.\" Possibly one for everyday of the week, in different colors.So, So, if Bardock was picking at his food, did that mean that it wasn\'t good, or was he just being a brat? I can\'t imagine a sayian NOT eating.

I am glad that Presta got over the jealousy stage that quickly.

Pan watching the baby? Is it really safe?
person Ginia
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yep, the birth name was Virginia... but I guess I think of myself as Gina witbiggbigger ego - hence the extra I.

Another lovely chapter. Were you expecting some other comment? *snort* Ya know another form of therapy is Family Therapy - think you might eventually write enough sequels to use that title?
person Lenora
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okieday. Let\'s forget Lil\'Geta and just make it a Goten/Trunks/Lenora sandwich. Either way it works for me...

Yeah forget my blonde question...i forgot which story Much Like Sufficating was when i read The Twins go A Travelling. Only having net for three days a week can do that. lol so i read the Lil\'Geta/Trunks thing and i was like o.O and i wanted to know. hehehehe silly me.
person Lenora
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GOHAN!!!!!!! *falls over* okai dii didn\'t see that one coming. but i definatly think that Vegeta and Goku have the best sex. hehehehe *kidnaps Goten and Trunks for a couple hours.* I\'ll have them back not permenantly scarred later. *giggles until she sees Presta standing there all glowy* or not...*drops the saiyans and runs*

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