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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just loved this chapter.
Goten is such sneaky bastard... Time traveling message disc and all.
Also I thought of tthe Mother of all pranks that could be pulled on Goten and still get away with it.
LOL
Goten is such sneaky bastard... Time traveling message disc and all.
Also I thought of tthe Mother of all pranks that could be pulled on Goten and still get away with it.
LOL
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uh, Okay, I get it! LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST okay I\'ll stop...
No I guess not..... LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST.
I know up here in Oregon we have things like the Azalia Festival in Florence, and the Pear Blosom ide ide edfoedford, but nothing compairs to a LEMONFEST. Alas, it\'s not warm enough up here to grow lemons, so I am very happy to read about them.
Want to start a paraide? Oh wait, I think you already have! Thank you!
Ah, Presta is a smart girl, running from a pregnant sayian (that nothing else has seemed to of bothered so far), isn\'t she. Of course it would have been smarter not to do anything to have pissed Trunks off though. I thought that Trunks handled the situation quiet well.
STEAK, muahahahaha, I\'ll steel it. *notices that it can\'t be removed from the fic.* I should have known that wouldn\'t work.
That was really nice of Goten to let Gohan of the hook so easily.
No I guess not..... LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST LEMONFEST.
I know up here in Oregon we have things like the Azalia Festival in Florence, and the Pear Blosom ide ide edfoedford, but nothing compairs to a LEMONFEST. Alas, it\'s not warm enough up here to grow lemons, so I am very happy to read about them.
Want to start a paraide? Oh wait, I think you already have! Thank you!
Ah, Presta is a smart girl, running from a pregnant sayian (that nothing else has seemed to of bothered so far), isn\'t she. Of course it would have been smarter not to do anything to have pissed Trunks off though. I thought that Trunks handled the situation quiet well.
STEAK, muahahahaha, I\'ll steel it. *notices that it can\'t be removed from the fic.* I should have known that wouldn\'t work.
That was really nice of Goten to let Gohan of the hook so easily.
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ll review here then review later because i wanted to put my opinion down.
GT: No, it’s not a Banana in my Pocket
MT: Been there, fucked that.
MT: Guaranteed Orgasm
those three are my favorite. *hugs the twins back* yeah it was counterproductive wasn\'t it? heehee. can\'t wait to read the rest. :)
GT: No, it’s not a Banana in my Pocket
MT: Been there, fucked that.
MT: Guaranteed Orgasm
those three are my favorite. *hugs the twins back* yeah it was counterproductive wasn\'t it? heehee. can\'t wait to read the rest. :)
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious chapter,
“Gee, nobody has managed to pull a prank on Goten yet.” --you know I never even thought about that, and now I really want to see if they can pull it off. ^.^ I have a feeling they might not...bu ya never know.
Hoped that his brother’s revenge on them would be reversible.--LoL, me too. hehe messing with Goten spells trouble if ya ask me.
“Why is everyone STARING AT ME?!” Presta demanded--lmao, poor child...hehe. That was good.
(Her forehead read “Champion Kicker”)--rofl..oh gods I was nearly dead when I got to this line. These poor multi-cod kid kids.
“Thanks, Goten. How long before it washes off.” Pointed at his own forehead (Loser.) “And my hair grows back?” He was also bald. --lmao...I loved that he said thanks. oh gosh finding it hard to breathe ...hehe
Goten laughed. “Just wait until she goes Super Saiyan. Should be like neon lights.”--lol, very intresting. It would be fun to see them at night then...and scary at the same time.
“So,” Kakaraid—aid—having finally given up on getting Vegeta to move and IT’ed past him into the kitchen—“Who’s making breakfast?”--lmao!!!!!!! Gosh, this chapter was too hilarious why did he have to it past Vegeta...!?!?! Funny! And always worried about food isn\'t he?
^.*
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“Gee, nobody has managed to pull a prank on Goten yet.” --you know I never even thought about that, and now I really want to see if they can pull it off. ^.^ I have a feeling they might not...bu ya never know.
Hoped that his brother’s revenge on them would be reversible.--LoL, me too. hehe messing with Goten spells trouble if ya ask me.
“Why is everyone STARING AT ME?!” Presta demanded--lmao, poor child...hehe. That was good.
(Her forehead read “Champion Kicker”)--rofl..oh gods I was nearly dead when I got to this line. These poor multi-cod kid kids.
“Thanks, Goten. How long before it washes off.” Pointed at his own forehead (Loser.) “And my hair grows back?” He was also bald. --lmao...I loved that he said thanks. oh gosh finding it hard to breathe ...hehe
Goten laughed. “Just wait until she goes Super Saiyan. Should be like neon lights.”--lol, very intresting. It would be fun to see them at night then...and scary at the same time.
“So,” Kakaraid—aid—having finally given up on getting Vegeta to move and IT’ed past him into the kitchen—“Who’s making breakfast?”--lmao!!!!!!! Gosh, this chapter was too hilarious why did he have to it past Vegeta...!?!?! Funny! And always worried about food isn\'t he?
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed this chapter. :-D
Loved how Vegeta totally respected his brother\'periperior skill the the prank department. Bothselfself and their father seem to be in awe of him. Loved this:
\"...And his Dad summed it up in one sentence: “They’re going to get their asses kicked, aren’t they?”\"
LOL! A fatalist. :-)
\"He spent time with Trunks—as an absolute ‘See, I had nothing to do with it, I’ve been here with him all the time’ sort of insurance against his brother deciding it was high time that his older twin received some of his revenge schemes.\"
LOL! Absolutely love this wardwardly\' attitude of Vegeta\'s when it comes to his cunning twin. :
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“Ink ink its more a melon shape.”
\"And this made Vegeta hate his brother.\"
LOL! \'Geta can\'t understand Trunks\' attitude either... this is so funny. :-D
Absolutely loved Goten\'s pre-emptive prank. I loved them all. Felt a teensy bit bad for Gohan getting his head shaved, but it\'ll grow back, and everyone\'s reactions to each other, and then themselves was hilarious. Totally lost it when I cctedcted all this with why Goku and Vegeta started to shower at Bulma\'s place... LOL! Smart parents. Been there, done that. :-D
Loved Goku\'s reaction:
“Oh, man, guys!” he said, “You all look ridiculous!”
LOL! That wasn\'t comforting at all. :-D
\"So when Bardock came over to him and climbed up on to his back and whimpered: “Aren’t you going to yell at him?”\"
Ah, Bardock, I really love this little guy... I think hs hos hoping that his \'mum\' would read that nasty Goten the riot act... :-D
\"Vegeta just shook his head. “Why? He ’t h’t hurt any of you.”\"
“He hurt my eardrums,” Gohan said. “Mom and Videl screamed for an hour when they found Pan. Then they told me not to come back until she was normal again.”
LOL! So they have new houseguests, this could be fun. :-)
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Liked the end dialogue. :-)
Loved how Vegeta totally respected his brother\'periperior skill the the prank department. Bothselfself and their father seem to be in awe of him. Loved this:
\"...And his Dad summed it up in one sentence: “They’re going to get their asses kicked, aren’t they?”\"
LOL! A fatalist. :-)
\"He spent time with Trunks—as an absolute ‘See, I had nothing to do with it, I’ve been here with him all the time’ sort of insurance against his brother deciding it was high time that his older twin received some of his revenge schemes.\"
LOL! Absolutely love this wardwardly\' attitude of Vegeta\'s when it comes to his cunning twin. :
“I
“Ink ink its more a melon shape.”
\"And this made Vegeta hate his brother.\"
LOL! \'Geta can\'t understand Trunks\' attitude either... this is so funny. :-D
Absolutely loved Goten\'s pre-emptive prank. I loved them all. Felt a teensy bit bad for Gohan getting his head shaved, but it\'ll grow back, and everyone\'s reactions to each other, and then themselves was hilarious. Totally lost it when I cctedcted all this with why Goku and Vegeta started to shower at Bulma\'s place... LOL! Smart parents. Been there, done that. :-D
Loved Goku\'s reaction:
“Oh, man, guys!” he said, “You all look ridiculous!”
LOL! That wasn\'t comforting at all. :-D
\"So when Bardock came over to him and climbed up on to his back and whimpered: “Aren’t you going to yell at him?”\"
Ah, Bardock, I really love this little guy... I think hs hos hoping that his \'mum\' would read that nasty Goten the riot act... :-D
\"Vegeta just shook his head. “Why? He ’t h’t hurt any of you.”\"
“He hurt my eardrums,” Gohan said. “Mom and Videl screamed for an hour when they found Pan. Then they told me not to come back until she was normal again.”
LOL! So they have new houseguests, this could be fun. :-)
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Liked the end dialogue. :-)
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah..another great chappie.
Nobody got hurt—except Gohan’s hair, and his hair was stupid anyway. --Yeah it was, wasn\'t it. Aww but your Gohan really isn\'t that bad in this fic...now The Meaning of Pride...I hate that Gohan. But this one is very likeable.
(Because fixing broken bones and houses he could do, but dealing with her every little problem was starting to drive him INSANE.)--aww, now he is getting a taste of every aspect of parenthood, how wonderful is that.
Pan copying Presta was so funny and very cute. I remember the days when I used to do that to people or when people did that to me...how annoying.
In fact, he even managed to mention that his son was not Spoon nor Kettle but Analu.--Ah, that is very good to know, hehe..and videl is pregnant again! This fic is exploding with kids!
(Like the Orgasmic Bunny; I Just Keep Coming and Coming…) --*falls over* lmao!!!!! that is just sick...the place where he gets these shirts should be making a profit off of Goten alone. ^.^
Naw,” he countered, “Dad does. He got a man pregnant twice.”--Yep and considering that is was Vegeta like Gohan said he deserves lots and lots of awards..lemon awards...^.~
I loved the explanation of the different types of Vegeta Goten and Gohan know. Even though Gohan knew the crueler Vegeta..the one that tried to murder his father at one point I am very glad he isn\'t being an ass or stuck up about it. But he seems very mild mannered.
“Maybe I just want you to say it out loud. What am I thinking about?”--^.^ oh very coy, I like that question.
“I’VE HAD ENOUGH OF YOU TWO!” Then he slammed the door and disappeared outside where there were screaming little girls heard. --o_o Trunks!!! I can\'t believe he just yelled!
Woo!!! Go Trunks dishing out punishment!!!! I\'m so proud.
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Nobody got hurt—except Gohan’s hair, and his hair was stupid anyway. --Yeah it was, wasn\'t it. Aww but your Gohan really isn\'t that bad in this fic...now The Meaning of Pride...I hate that Gohan. But this one is very likeable.
(Because fixing broken bones and houses he could do, but dealing with her every little problem was starting to drive him INSANE.)--aww, now he is getting a taste of every aspect of parenthood, how wonderful is that.
Pan copying Presta was so funny and very cute. I remember the days when I used to do that to people or when people did that to me...how annoying.
In fact, he even managed to mention that his son was not Spoon nor Kettle but Analu.--Ah, that is very good to know, hehe..and videl is pregnant again! This fic is exploding with kids!
(Like the Orgasmic Bunny; I Just Keep Coming and Coming…) --*falls over* lmao!!!!! that is just sick...the place where he gets these shirts should be making a profit off of Goten alone. ^.^
Naw,” he countered, “Dad does. He got a man pregnant twice.”--Yep and considering that is was Vegeta like Gohan said he deserves lots and lots of awards..lemon awards...^.~
I loved the explanation of the different types of Vegeta Goten and Gohan know. Even though Gohan knew the crueler Vegeta..the one that tried to murder his father at one point I am very glad he isn\'t being an ass or stuck up about it. But he seems very mild mannered.
“Maybe I just want you to say it out loud. What am I thinking about?”--^.^ oh very coy, I like that question.
“I’VE HAD ENOUGH OF YOU TWO!” Then he slammed the door and disappeared outside where there were screaming little girls heard. --o_o Trunks!!! I can\'t believe he just yelled!
Woo!!! Go Trunks dishing out punishment!!!! I\'m so proud.
^.*
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pan is actually sort of likable in this fic. Oh god the world is coming to an end. I hated Pan in GT. Anyway, youhan han is turning out nicely. gotta go...one more final for today and I get go write. :)
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
chapter 13 in reference to the lil Vegeta and Gina situation, I like happy, horny, humping sayains. *huge smile*
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read all your stories! And I love them all I am truley sorry I do not review to all of them... oh my favorite t-shirt is... GT: Why YES You can Blow Me lol it is great keep up the good work (plz)
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay the voting thing. 1) No, that\'s not a banana in myket.ket. 2) Been there, fucked that
Now on to the rest of a review.
Spent a lot of time reading this story. I noticed that there is A LOT of lemoney goodness. (Happy, horny, humping sayains:))
I see neon people. (okay. that was bad, but what you wrote was Funny) , and Chi Chi with Green hair, LOL. And the \'Once upon a time...\' harpy story, that was a good one.
Presta is a very interesting person. I wonder who\'s theroy about her power level will turn out to be the correct one.
I am surprised that useing the dragonballs to wish humans into sayians hasn\'t been used more often. I think that it is a valid use of dragonballs. Of course, if I had had Bulma or Chi Chi as a mate, I wouldn\'t have ever suggested that the balls be used in this way. Can you imagine what Goku\'s life would have been like if Chi Chi was able to fly. OMG, that would\'ve sucked! (This is only the second story that I have read that\'s had that senario in it, and the first one was a while ago.)
And now that you have all of these sayians and demis together, what are you going to do with them other than lemons? If this is just a story about lemona I\' I\'m okay with that.
Now on to the rest of a review.
Spent a lot of time reading this story. I noticed that there is A LOT of lemoney goodness. (Happy, horny, humping sayains:))
I see neon people. (okay. that was bad, but what you wrote was Funny) , and Chi Chi with Green hair, LOL. And the \'Once upon a time...\' harpy story, that was a good one.
Presta is a very interesting person. I wonder who\'s theroy about her power level will turn out to be the correct one.
I am surprised that useing the dragonballs to wish humans into sayians hasn\'t been used more often. I think that it is a valid use of dragonballs. Of course, if I had had Bulma or Chi Chi as a mate, I wouldn\'t have ever suggested that the balls be used in this way. Can you imagine what Goku\'s life would have been like if Chi Chi was able to fly. OMG, that would\'ve sucked! (This is only the second story that I have read that\'s had that senario in it, and the first one was a while ago.)
And now that you have all of these sayians and demis together, what are you going to do with them other than lemons? If this is just a story about lemona I\' I\'m okay with that.