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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Review for: Chapter 15.
Can\'t help but feel sympathy for Gina\'s loss of boob size, a small reduction be be shrugged off, but a significant one is definitely something that would need coming to terms with. Still, as a wonderful counter, she does have a tail. Cool :-)
Love the counter views between Goku and Vegeta the following morning. Goku\'s openly grinning demeanour, heralding the fact that he had mind numbing sex is so Goku. However; I never realised that Vegeta held that sort of expression back when his kids were around. Love that! Definitely the \'mother\' in him :-)
Ah, Goten is so going to be tingting dad. I could be wrong, but something tells me that he\'s going to be a different sort of father to Presta than he is to the child he has with Trunks. Now don\'t get me wrong, I certainly believe that there will be no difference in the strength of his love between his children, I think that\'ll be the same. But Presta is a born Super Saiyan, and a full blood, and she is from a different world, so yeah, I see him dealiith ith her in a more Saiyan fashion, whereas I can honestly seeing him being a bit like Vegeta is with Bardock, with the child he is going to have with Trunks. \'Course, I could be totally wrong... but that\'s what I got out of the way he was thinking about Trunks and how he was reacting to the fact that his mate was carrying his child. Really sweet :-)
Loved the argument between Goten and Presta, about when she is allowed to have sex. Can even see Goten upping the age limit oshe she reaches fifteen :-D The chastity belt comment was hilarious :-D
Loved this:
\"He nodded. “Sure.” Smiled like a dork, and saw that she could smile just as dorkily. (Thought that was a comfort, because his twins both grinned like their mother.)\"
Just the way he accepted that he smiled in a dorky fashion, and was pleased to see that Presta was equalorkyorky, just cracked me up. I liked the \"Who cares\" attitude. :-)
“Trunks, when it comes to you, breathing is sexy.”
Man, this has to be the most rtic tic thing ever said on the face of the Earth. Either that,or I have been severely gypped in the romance department.
“Lets go tell your Mom that we’re leaving for a little while. Presta is training, so Goku can’t get too pissed we’re making his mate busy.”
LOL! Love the way everyone understands that Vegeta is to be left available for Goku\'s attentions :-D
Totally loved the hug that Goten gave his \'mum\', loved that there ere both surprised by it, but completely comfortable about it. I\'m wondering what it\'s all about, (not that I\'m complaining, I love it) sort of figure that it could have something to do with the fact that Goten\'s relating more to his mother, now that he\'s a parent himself :-)
Loved this chapter...on to the next. :-)
Can\'t help but feel sympathy for Gina\'s loss of boob size, a small reduction be be shrugged off, but a significant one is definitely something that would need coming to terms with. Still, as a wonderful counter, she does have a tail. Cool :-)
Love the counter views between Goku and Vegeta the following morning. Goku\'s openly grinning demeanour, heralding the fact that he had mind numbing sex is so Goku. However; I never realised that Vegeta held that sort of expression back when his kids were around. Love that! Definitely the \'mother\' in him :-)
Ah, Goten is so going to be tingting dad. I could be wrong, but something tells me that he\'s going to be a different sort of father to Presta than he is to the child he has with Trunks. Now don\'t get me wrong, I certainly believe that there will be no difference in the strength of his love between his children, I think that\'ll be the same. But Presta is a born Super Saiyan, and a full blood, and she is from a different world, so yeah, I see him dealiith ith her in a more Saiyan fashion, whereas I can honestly seeing him being a bit like Vegeta is with Bardock, with the child he is going to have with Trunks. \'Course, I could be totally wrong... but that\'s what I got out of the way he was thinking about Trunks and how he was reacting to the fact that his mate was carrying his child. Really sweet :-)
Loved the argument between Goten and Presta, about when she is allowed to have sex. Can even see Goten upping the age limit oshe she reaches fifteen :-D The chastity belt comment was hilarious :-D
Loved this:
\"He nodded. “Sure.” Smiled like a dork, and saw that she could smile just as dorkily. (Thought that was a comfort, because his twins both grinned like their mother.)\"
Just the way he accepted that he smiled in a dorky fashion, and was pleased to see that Presta was equalorkyorky, just cracked me up. I liked the \"Who cares\" attitude. :-)
“Trunks, when it comes to you, breathing is sexy.”
Man, this has to be the most rtic tic thing ever said on the face of the Earth. Either that,or I have been severely gypped in the romance department.
“Lets go tell your Mom that we’re leaving for a little while. Presta is training, so Goku can’t get too pissed we’re making his mate busy.”
LOL! Love the way everyone understands that Vegeta is to be left available for Goku\'s attentions :-D
Totally loved the hug that Goten gave his \'mum\', loved that there ere both surprised by it, but completely comfortable about it. I\'m wondering what it\'s all about, (not that I\'m complaining, I love it) sort of figure that it could have something to do with the fact that Goten\'s relating more to his mother, now that he\'s a parent himself :-)
Loved this chapter...on to the next. :-)
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Review for: Chapter 16
Really liked this:
\"(That happened to him a lot since he became a ‘mother’ and it never ceased to make him wonder just what the hell had happened to the Vegeta of the past that wanted nothing more than to defeat Kakarot and reclaim his rightful place ae rue ruler of the pack.)\"
I agree that motherhood definitely mellowed Vegeta, and it definitely goes hand in hand with the more positive emotions that his time with Goku would have brought about.
Vegeta has never in his life been a part of anything even remotely loving or caring, (I am going somewhere with this...) Not even his own father gave a rat\'s arse what happened to him. All he was ever subjected to were the negative emotions, basically his lifs ths the pitts. His time with Freiza was more than likely, nearly soul destroying (and I don\'t mean that I believe the somewhat common belief that Freiza or the others abused him in a sexual manner, because frankly, I don\'t.) But I imagine that his pride; in himself, his race, and his heritage, was subjected to alot of torment and testing, for one thing...probably other shit as well...taunts about him being weak for one... anyway, before I wander any further off track...(here\'s where I was heading)...
I believe that being mated to Goku and having a family with him, forming a friendship bond with Bulma, all of these would have given him a different reason for wanting to fight and stay strong, other than that of needing to be the strongest, for survival purposes, and a natural Saiyan need to be the best... not to mention his need as the Prince. He would have found that his pride in himself, and his heritage, had found a home with his family, and Ie the that he can sit back and reflect on this and not experience any regret for this change in him, that he can look back on his past self and wonder what the hell happened to that Vegeta... that he can wonder at thazinazing change his life has taken, and be totally content with that. Love is definitely an amazing emotion. I love that you incorporate these things into your story, it\'s things like this that give it that realistic feel. :-)
Totally love the scene where Vegeta felt that he wasn\'t getting enough of Goku\'s attention, and decided to show his mate, just what he wanted. Loved Goku\'s knowing \'innocent\' question, when he asked Vegeta, what was up. Completely loved the way they interacted with each other, Vegeta\'s teasing moves, his smile, as he realised how he was affecting his mate, and Goku\'s completely distracted order to the kids to “Stay out of trouble.” Extremely well done, loved the entire atmosphere of seduction, playfulness and lust. ;-)
Another wonderful lemon... juicy ;-)
Wondering where Goten is heading, when he asked Trunks if he ever wanted to have sex with a female... curiouser and curiouser.
Love the Tru Trunks and Gina, have that little support thing going with each other... it\'s sweet. :-)
Enjoyed the end dialogue :-)
Well, all caught up on this story... onto the next... have things to do though... so I\'ll catch up on another, a little later tonight. :-)
Really liked this:
\"(That happened to him a lot since he became a ‘mother’ and it never ceased to make him wonder just what the hell had happened to the Vegeta of the past that wanted nothing more than to defeat Kakarot and reclaim his rightful place ae rue ruler of the pack.)\"
I agree that motherhood definitely mellowed Vegeta, and it definitely goes hand in hand with the more positive emotions that his time with Goku would have brought about.
Vegeta has never in his life been a part of anything even remotely loving or caring, (I am going somewhere with this...) Not even his own father gave a rat\'s arse what happened to him. All he was ever subjected to were the negative emotions, basically his lifs ths the pitts. His time with Freiza was more than likely, nearly soul destroying (and I don\'t mean that I believe the somewhat common belief that Freiza or the others abused him in a sexual manner, because frankly, I don\'t.) But I imagine that his pride; in himself, his race, and his heritage, was subjected to alot of torment and testing, for one thing...probably other shit as well...taunts about him being weak for one... anyway, before I wander any further off track...(here\'s where I was heading)...
I believe that being mated to Goku and having a family with him, forming a friendship bond with Bulma, all of these would have given him a different reason for wanting to fight and stay strong, other than that of needing to be the strongest, for survival purposes, and a natural Saiyan need to be the best... not to mention his need as the Prince. He would have found that his pride in himself, and his heritage, had found a home with his family, and Ie the that he can sit back and reflect on this and not experience any regret for this change in him, that he can look back on his past self and wonder what the hell happened to that Vegeta... that he can wonder at thazinazing change his life has taken, and be totally content with that. Love is definitely an amazing emotion. I love that you incorporate these things into your story, it\'s things like this that give it that realistic feel. :-)
Totally love the scene where Vegeta felt that he wasn\'t getting enough of Goku\'s attention, and decided to show his mate, just what he wanted. Loved Goku\'s knowing \'innocent\' question, when he asked Vegeta, what was up. Completely loved the way they interacted with each other, Vegeta\'s teasing moves, his smile, as he realised how he was affecting his mate, and Goku\'s completely distracted order to the kids to “Stay out of trouble.” Extremely well done, loved the entire atmosphere of seduction, playfulness and lust. ;-)
Another wonderful lemon... juicy ;-)
Wondering where Goten is heading, when he asked Trunks if he ever wanted to have sex with a female... curiouser and curiouser.
Love the Tru Trunks and Gina, have that little support thing going with each other... it\'s sweet. :-)
Enjoyed the end dialogue :-)
Well, all caught up on this story... onto the next... have things to do though... so I\'ll catch up on another, a little later tonight. :-)
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
@_@ !!!!!!! A special suprise for me to read at the end of this fic! *dances*
It was wrapped around her elbow and it was more than obvious she wasn’t used to controlling it.--LoL, she\'s learning. I like how she is sitting at the table...hehe
“Different because people don’t stick things inside…SHUT UP VEGETA!” --ok by the time I got here...air was not an option I was simply reading off of adrenaline I was laughing so hard. Presta and Goten\'s conversation!!! Looks like Goten definately has his hands full...
“Goten making chastity belts…that would be a hoot.”--ROFL!!! yes that would be a hoot... Hey,Hey,” ‘Geta said, “It would be funny. Just who would you test it out on anyway?”--be careful what you say Geta or before you know Gina will have one of those things slapped on her...
He nodded. “Sure.” Smiled like a dork, and saw that she could smile just as dorkily. --this is the cutest of exchange of looks...hehe I love this family!
“I guess we can keep training now. I want to finish this crap so Dad will stop telling me to ‘have patience.’ Whatever.”--LoL oh the patience of a child, isn\'t it wonderful? I don\'t think Presta will ever have pace..ce...at least not a lot.
“Why, Trunks, are you asking me out on a date?”--How cute! and Trunks response even cuter!
And the part with Vegeta teaching Bardock his letters...I nearly died. That was so adorable...and AH! I loved it. Vegeta teaching his little one how to sound out letters..patiently...
(My, my, thoughts are rising…what a coincidence other things are RISING too!)--rofl *dies* awww they are too perfect for each other.
And another wonderfully hilarious chappie. Can\'t believe Presta dropped her power so low it bordered almost being black.
The end notes were hilarious..
yeah you are right legend says every 1000 yrs a super saiyajin is born. In the Brolly movie, Brolly was just born with black hair...but a very high power level I think 10,000. Anywho I like your version...like that she was actually born a super saiyajin, blonde hair and all.
AHHHHH! *gasp* what is this I see...The twins...something I have been dying to read about...
Goten made a strange humming noise, shifted, lifted himself up and sat on Vegeta’s lap. --you are trying to kill me...I know it, or else that would have never been written. ^.^
But he moved it, like he was stroking, and that made the drooling idiots drool all the hard-*is-*is one of the drooling idiots*
Oh gods...how I loved that...cherished every word. *hugs you* Thank you SO much!!! I didn\'t want it to end...seriosuly I got to the end and I was like :(
I can never thank you enough! It was all just so freaking hot! and yeah I am a hentai freak...because I freaking loved that so much...my dreams are going to be soooo nice...
That just rox my sox...*is ever so happy*
And Loved how Goten ended it all with that flashy dare...hehe
Thanks again....*drools*
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It was wrapped around her elbow and it was more than obvious she wasn’t used to controlling it.--LoL, she\'s learning. I like how she is sitting at the table...hehe
“Different because people don’t stick things inside…SHUT UP VEGETA!” --ok by the time I got here...air was not an option I was simply reading off of adrenaline I was laughing so hard. Presta and Goten\'s conversation!!! Looks like Goten definately has his hands full...
“Goten making chastity belts…that would be a hoot.”--ROFL!!! yes that would be a hoot... Hey,Hey,” ‘Geta said, “It would be funny. Just who would you test it out on anyway?”--be careful what you say Geta or before you know Gina will have one of those things slapped on her...
He nodded. “Sure.” Smiled like a dork, and saw that she could smile just as dorkily. --this is the cutest of exchange of looks...hehe I love this family!
“I guess we can keep training now. I want to finish this crap so Dad will stop telling me to ‘have patience.’ Whatever.”--LoL oh the patience of a child, isn\'t it wonderful? I don\'t think Presta will ever have pace..ce...at least not a lot.
“Why, Trunks, are you asking me out on a date?”--How cute! and Trunks response even cuter!
And the part with Vegeta teaching Bardock his letters...I nearly died. That was so adorable...and AH! I loved it. Vegeta teaching his little one how to sound out letters..patiently...
(My, my, thoughts are rising…what a coincidence other things are RISING too!)--rofl *dies* awww they are too perfect for each other.
And another wonderfully hilarious chappie. Can\'t believe Presta dropped her power so low it bordered almost being black.
The end notes were hilarious..
yeah you are right legend says every 1000 yrs a super saiyajin is born. In the Brolly movie, Brolly was just born with black hair...but a very high power level I think 10,000. Anywho I like your version...like that she was actually born a super saiyajin, blonde hair and all.
AHHHHH! *gasp* what is this I see...The twins...something I have been dying to read about...
Goten made a strange humming noise, shifted, lifted himself up and sat on Vegeta’s lap. --you are trying to kill me...I know it, or else that would have never been written. ^.^
But he moved it, like he was stroking, and that made the drooling idiots drool all the hard-*is-*is one of the drooling idiots*
Oh gods...how I loved that...cherished every word. *hugs you* Thank you SO much!!! I didn\'t want it to end...seriosuly I got to the end and I was like :(
I can never thank you enough! It was all just so freaking hot! and yeah I am a hentai freak...because I freaking loved that so much...my dreams are going to be soooo nice...
That just rox my sox...*is ever so happy*
And Loved how Goten ended it all with that flashy dare...hehe
Thanks again....*drools*
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic should soo be a TV show. It is hilarious...and slightly pornographic...but hey, you could put in HBO or something. You could give Queer as Folk a run for its money.
Okay is Trunk\'s ass really that nice, because I never really got a good view of it?
Okay is Trunk\'s ass really that nice, because I never really got a good view of it?
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story does have a point...to make me laugh! HA! Okay so it wasn\'t clever. I\'m tired okay. I love the warm Saiyan family that you have going here. He He. I love it! I can\'t wait for more babies! :)
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just incase no one\'s said anythinga bout Trunks\' purple hair, I will.
*coughs*
He gets it from his grandfather. Hop outta kin sorta thing. Yes, I have done extensive research on this matter. Why yes, I AM an expert when it comes to demi-Saiyajins.
Why is everyone looking at me like that...
*coughs*
He gets it from his grandfather. Hop outta kin sorta thing. Yes, I have done extensive research on this matter. Why yes, I AM an expert when it comes to demi-Saiyajins.
Why is everyone looking at me like that...
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Anther ecelent chapter!!
Now all Goten has to do is build someting (Headband with flexible ciruitry? (Has to be comfy. I think anyway.))
to extend the range of the bond, so they dont\'t have to sleep with their backs against the cold hard wall.
I know I wouldn\'t like that.
Goten better keep on his toes. Presta might give him an intersting challenge.
Btw, I am working on chapter three of the story. I didn\'t get to the word count I wanted in the second chapter.
The third one will be longer.
Now all Goten has to do is build someting (Headband with flexible ciruitry? (Has to be comfy. I think anyway.))
to extend the range of the bond, so they dont\'t have to sleep with their backs against the cold hard wall.
I know I wouldn\'t like that.
Goten better keep on his toes. Presta might give him an intersting challenge.
Btw, I am working on chapter three of the story. I didn\'t get to the word count I wanted in the second chapter.
The third one will be longer.
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HA! loved it!!! Thought you should know that i have all of the Therapy series on my laptop at home and i\'m getting ready to put the more of us ss ons on there too. i have a nice little folder named CardDragonBall in my My Documents folder. Your stories are the only dbz stories i have on my computer, minus mine which i havent even typed up yet. I loved the twin\'s side story and their forays into your stories were great. though i will say this, i will not read the bulma/veggie story. nothing against her, i just dont like reading about a straight veggie.
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HA! I thought that it was hilarious when Gina asked about her boobs. I agree...I just don\'t think Saiyan women went around fighting while sporting DD\'s. My Saiyan girl, Kalika didn\'t have to go throught the truama though, she was born with small ones. *looks down at her boobs and sighs* I understand Gina\'s pain though...I don\'t know what I would do if I ever lost them.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great!
Besides, since Goku really wanted to be able to get back to his mate and sex, it was just added incentive for him to hurry up and find all of the damn balls --*coughs* That\'s just too easy...hehe you know my hentai mind..at work again...
Which is why he hated all of them. Which was why he was flying around in rain storm trying to find the damn dragon balls. --LoL aww he is flying around in a rainstorm...thats very nice of him to continue to search for them in such weather.
(Yes, she paid him for his brilliance, and he spent that money on nothing except to gloat about how he had money.) --rofl! How wonderful that must be, I wish I could do that.
“Yes I was.” Look at THAT, his mate was listening. --yes he was, and he shot that back very quickly he must have been listening intently...LoL that was so cute how he was pretending not to listen, even through the attack of lima beans...hehe
I LOVE the interaction between Presta and Goten, I was rofl...during their little conversation. Presryinrying to find something that Goten had no anser to and of course Goten having all the answers...and I liked that he said she will certainly be the last to know...very funny.
Aww I loved the interaction of Vegeta and Bardock...I thought he would hear his sons crys. So cute when he curled into Vegeta...^.^
Presta huffed. “You guys are boring.” --ROFL she just wants to fight,doesn\'t she?
He had to sleep with his back against the wall—I found that very interesting and very touching that both the twins have to sleep like that. I am glad that they are able to fall asleep though.
So Gina is going to become a saiyajin? I can\'t wait to see this...it\'s been building up for a while. Now the time has arrived. She already reminds of saiyajin, she definately has the attitude of one! ^.~
Gk: *takes Masuyo and hands him to Goten * I DO NOT THINK SO.--hehe that\'s right Goku, you tell him!
Wonderful chappy as always!!!!
Thank you!
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Besides, since Goku really wanted to be able to get back to his mate and sex, it was just added incentive for him to hurry up and find all of the damn balls --*coughs* That\'s just too easy...hehe you know my hentai mind..at work again...
Which is why he hated all of them. Which was why he was flying around in rain storm trying to find the damn dragon balls. --LoL aww he is flying around in a rainstorm...thats very nice of him to continue to search for them in such weather.
(Yes, she paid him for his brilliance, and he spent that money on nothing except to gloat about how he had money.) --rofl! How wonderful that must be, I wish I could do that.
“Yes I was.” Look at THAT, his mate was listening. --yes he was, and he shot that back very quickly he must have been listening intently...LoL that was so cute how he was pretending not to listen, even through the attack of lima beans...hehe
I LOVE the interaction between Presta and Goten, I was rofl...during their little conversation. Presryinrying to find something that Goten had no anser to and of course Goten having all the answers...and I liked that he said she will certainly be the last to know...very funny.
Aww I loved the interaction of Vegeta and Bardock...I thought he would hear his sons crys. So cute when he curled into Vegeta...^.^
Presta huffed. “You guys are boring.” --ROFL she just wants to fight,doesn\'t she?
He had to sleep with his back against the wall—I found that very interesting and very touching that both the twins have to sleep like that. I am glad that they are able to fall asleep though.
So Gina is going to become a saiyajin? I can\'t wait to see this...it\'s been building up for a while. Now the time has arrived. She already reminds of saiyajin, she definately has the attitude of one! ^.~
Gk: *takes Masuyo and hands him to Goten * I DO NOT THINK SO.--hehe that\'s right Goku, you tell him!
Wonderful chappy as always!!!!
Thank you!
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