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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* you\'re gonna be gone! *falls to knees crying* NOOO!! Now i have to wait for an update! That\'s insane! *suspicious* i think this is a cruel way to torture all your readers... so cruel...
Anyway, rad chapter. As always. There was some spellling errors but you had a good reason, so busy with packing, but i could tell what you were trying to say. I hope you have fun on your trip and come back with lots of chapters so we can all read them! ^_~
tifutifully written as always!
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Anyway, rad chapter. As always. There was some spellling errors but you had a good reason, so busy with packing, but i could tell what you were trying to say. I hope you have fun on your trip and come back with lots of chapters so we can all read them! ^_~
tifutifully written as always!
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That is so good. I this soo insaitiable Goku! I\'d love to wake him up every morning!!
Please continue!!!!! ~_~
Please continue!!!!! ~_~
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* That was really good....
I can\'t believe your going to be gone for a week...I can\'t live...well I can, but you know...I won\'t be able to live all that great without the luxury of your fics...
Had been attempting to figure out why the hell he was on planet 554whatever.--that sounds just like Vegeta...
Do you have any idea how long it takes to un-piss her off?”--rofl, reminds me of many woman.
Caradoc--I really like that name a lot!
Announcing that poor Prince Vegeta had mysteriously died when there was an explosion in his wing of the Palace. Would you believe that the same day he got that message there was a new entry in the log by the name of Vegeta?--*shakes fist at King Vegeta* That is just plain cruel. I feel so badly for Vegeta. He really, seems out of place.
Nobody offended the royalty or they would strike back at you with the fist of a world full of ignorant morons--rofl, thats a wonderful description.
I did love the part where Kakarott started to rub Vegeta\'s chest...*drools* That was great and Vegeta\'s tail went between them...very nice...
I love this fic!
^.*
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I can\'t believe your going to be gone for a week...I can\'t live...well I can, but you know...I won\'t be able to live all that great without the luxury of your fics...
Had been attempting to figure out why the hell he was on planet 554whatever.--that sounds just like Vegeta...
Do you have any idea how long it takes to un-piss her off?”--rofl, reminds me of many woman.
Caradoc--I really like that name a lot!
Announcing that poor Prince Vegeta had mysteriously died when there was an explosion in his wing of the Palace. Would you believe that the same day he got that message there was a new entry in the log by the name of Vegeta?--*shakes fist at King Vegeta* That is just plain cruel. I feel so badly for Vegeta. He really, seems out of place.
Nobody offended the royalty or they would strike back at you with the fist of a world full of ignorant morons--rofl, thats a wonderful description.
I did love the part where Kakarott started to rub Vegeta\'s chest...*drools* That was great and Vegeta\'s tail went between them...very nice...
I love this fic!
^.*
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was the meanest thing that any one has ever done to me. AHHHHHHHHH!
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I simply love this. No. I love everything you write. EVERYTHING!! Please write more!! *dying from anticipation* ~_~
PrismaKakkerra
PrismaKakkerra
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A really good chapter. I like the way you are portraying the characters in this. Pitting the arrogant Prince against the seedier element of Saiyan society, when all he has known is court intrigue and elite type squabbles. This is proving to be very interesting. I can\'t help but feel so sorry for the snobby Prince who is exceedingly out of his depth and is only just beginning to see the surface of this fact:
\"...Had said it more than once that all of these smelly barbarians hated the Prince. Him. He was hated—which was something he had never considered, since everyone he had ever come in contact with besides his father just gushed about his utter perfection.\"
Quite an eye-opener for the Prince, and it just makes me want to hug him to bits and tell him that everything will be okay.
\"And he was helpless as long as these things were holding him down.\"
This would be very frightening for anyone, I can imagine how terrifying it must be for someone who is used to being very much in control and able to fully take care of himself.
\"Arrogant little pimple...\"
LOL!
\"Hated him and his stupid little face.\"
Quick, a pair of thick lens, prescription glasses for Saima :-D
Can understand Saima\'s angry thoughts towards Vegeta. In fact it\'s pretty natural considering the lifestyle of your third class warriors, up against the way you have portrayed life within the snug walls of the palace.
Can\'t help but feel sorry for the Prince though, he doesn\'t know any different, and also, he has been going through some rough crap himself, not to mention his time with Freiza, and it appears that the third class are just as ignorant of this fact, as Vegeta is, of their treatment by the upper echelons of Saiyan society.
Well, Bardock is certainly nobody\'s fool. He picked up on the coincidence of Prince Vegeta\'s \'death\' and the new recruit immediately :-)
I haven\'t even met him yet, but I hate Caradoc. He is not the Prince! Vegeta is! I want King Vegeta dead!
“No,” Bardock said, “Caradoc is the Prince. But that doesn’t mean Vegeta couldn’t have been the former heir.”
Does Bardock really acknowledge Caradoc as the Prince, even though King Vegeta\'s firstborn is standing right in front of him? Or is he just being smart and keeping his Prince at a low profile for the time being?
“Former my ass!” the little thing yelled, bristled with energy and yelled: “I am the Prince of Saiyans! That fucking inbred moron is not going to take my place on the throne!”
You tell \'em Vegeta!
“Oh, man!” Kakarot said, “Why me?”
LOL!
\"“I demand that you take me back to the Palace!” Vegeta said.\"
Not a wise move, with those ki restraints, sweetheart. :-(
Oooo, Kakarot is starting to get touchy, feely. Things are looking up :-)
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Loved the end dialogue :-)
\"...You know how he doesn’t like to be mothered. *Vegeta is pouting in a corner somewhere. * Poor dear.\"
LOL! Probably almost as much as I don\'t want to mother him...I\'ve got much better fantasies with him in mind :-D
\"GAH1 I don’t think I could even think of Nappa having sex much less write about it. *shudder *\"
ROTFL!
\"...It’s okay. I didn’t really notice about the review. (I say this, but I’m a perfectionist sometimes.)\"
I was convinced that you would notice and just stare at it and wonder what the hell I had been drinking :-D
I know that you are going on your vacation this weekend, so I wish you a safe journey, and lots of fun and relaxation. Will look forward to your return, as I will be salivating for the next chapters well and truly, by then :-)
\"...Had said it more than once that all of these smelly barbarians hated the Prince. Him. He was hated—which was something he had never considered, since everyone he had ever come in contact with besides his father just gushed about his utter perfection.\"
Quite an eye-opener for the Prince, and it just makes me want to hug him to bits and tell him that everything will be okay.
\"And he was helpless as long as these things were holding him down.\"
This would be very frightening for anyone, I can imagine how terrifying it must be for someone who is used to being very much in control and able to fully take care of himself.
\"Arrogant little pimple...\"
LOL!
\"Hated him and his stupid little face.\"
Quick, a pair of thick lens, prescription glasses for Saima :-D
Can understand Saima\'s angry thoughts towards Vegeta. In fact it\'s pretty natural considering the lifestyle of your third class warriors, up against the way you have portrayed life within the snug walls of the palace.
Can\'t help but feel sorry for the Prince though, he doesn\'t know any different, and also, he has been going through some rough crap himself, not to mention his time with Freiza, and it appears that the third class are just as ignorant of this fact, as Vegeta is, of their treatment by the upper echelons of Saiyan society.
Well, Bardock is certainly nobody\'s fool. He picked up on the coincidence of Prince Vegeta\'s \'death\' and the new recruit immediately :-)
I haven\'t even met him yet, but I hate Caradoc. He is not the Prince! Vegeta is! I want King Vegeta dead!
“No,” Bardock said, “Caradoc is the Prince. But that doesn’t mean Vegeta couldn’t have been the former heir.”
Does Bardock really acknowledge Caradoc as the Prince, even though King Vegeta\'s firstborn is standing right in front of him? Or is he just being smart and keeping his Prince at a low profile for the time being?
“Former my ass!” the little thing yelled, bristled with energy and yelled: “I am the Prince of Saiyans! That fucking inbred moron is not going to take my place on the throne!”
You tell \'em Vegeta!
“Oh, man!” Kakarot said, “Why me?”
LOL!
\"“I demand that you take me back to the Palace!” Vegeta said.\"
Not a wise move, with those ki restraints, sweetheart. :-(
Oooo, Kakarot is starting to get touchy, feely. Things are looking up :-)
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Loved the end dialogue :-)
\"...You know how he doesn’t like to be mothered. *Vegeta is pouting in a corner somewhere. * Poor dear.\"
LOL! Probably almost as much as I don\'t want to mother him...I\'ve got much better fantasies with him in mind :-D
\"GAH1 I don’t think I could even think of Nappa having sex much less write about it. *shudder *\"
ROTFL!
\"...It’s okay. I didn’t really notice about the review. (I say this, but I’m a perfectionist sometimes.)\"
I was convinced that you would notice and just stare at it and wonder what the hell I had been drinking :-D
I know that you are going on your vacation this weekend, so I wish you a safe journey, and lots of fun and relaxation. Will look forward to your return, as I will be salivating for the next chapters well and truly, by then :-)
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
X.X I love this fic!
I saw it here earlier but i didn\'t feel up to reading much, but i finally sat down and read it. I love your writing style. Reminds me of Stephen King and that\'s a compliment! The characterization is excellent and the plot it too! I loved it when Kakkarot flipped off Radditz... i found it very funny... @.@ From what i\'ve seen you update everday.. so- no waiting! That\'s so very rad! I\'ll be reading it tomorrow and i know it\'ll be great!
You\'re a very talented writer and i\'m gonna get around to reading your other fics too! Might take a while... but i\'m gono ito it!
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I saw it here earlier but i didn\'t feel up to reading much, but i finally sat down and read it. I love your writing style. Reminds me of Stephen King and that\'s a compliment! The characterization is excellent and the plot it too! I loved it when Kakkarot flipped off Radditz... i found it very funny... @.@ From what i\'ve seen you update everday.. so- no waiting! That\'s so very rad! I\'ll be reading it tomorrow and i know it\'ll be great!
You\'re a very talented writer and i\'m gonna get around to reading your other fics too! Might take a while... but i\'m gono ito it!
Agent -182-
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo I loved this chapter!
I totally love how you write Kakarott, very interesting sex crazed saiyajin...
And poor Radditz...ahh no sex for him.
I am very interested about what is on Vegeta\'s tail...
and I am equally as interested in about reading Saima\'s death for touch Vegeta...*fake laughs* just kidding...*smiles*
I don\'t want anyone to die. ^.~
I like the idea that Goten and Geta created this universe with their mischief, that is so cool!
^.*
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I totally love how you write Kakarott, very interesting sex crazed saiyajin...
And poor Radditz...ahh no sex for him.
I am very interested about what is on Vegeta\'s tail...
and I am equally as interested in about reading Saima\'s death for touch Vegeta...*fake laughs* just kidding...*smiles*
I don\'t want anyone to die. ^.~
I like the idea that Goten and Geta created this universe with their mischief, that is so cool!
^.*
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!!!!
Handsome in a bitchy sort of way.--LoL never heard of that b4, but very funny.
Figuring out why the hell his brother wanted the twerpy midget to join them was the mystery.---*gasp* VEGETA IS NOT A TWERPY MIDGET!!!...I read that line and was like I didn\'t know Krillen was in this fic...hehe
A glitter of light caught his eye and he pulled the tail up, looked at the underside of it, saw the barbell straight through the base of it and winced in pain.---aww, oh no, thats so sad...Poor Geta
“Oi, couldn’t you be more original?” Radditz rolled his eyes.--LoL
There were twelve Vegeta’s in the division, as if naming your kid after royalty (or the planet) was all the rage for those parents that realized their children were never going to make it past the third-class division. --GAH! ROFL!!!!
I would avoid saying you’re the Prince. Nobody out here really likes him.--*sobs* I do!, even though I\'m not there...I feel badly for Vegeta. Having to wear smelly clothes in a smelly place, with ki suppressors, not knowing how any of that happened to him. *shakes fist* My poor Ouji!
Hell, if this guy was the Prince he was in for a hell of a shock.--hehe, I know. If I was Vegeta I would suggest a lake party so everyone can get clean. maybe wash their clothes or something...Just reading the way you described everything made me feel grimy. When that guy ran his finger across Vegeta\'s face...I was like ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
“Alright, asshole, Dad said I have to go kick your ass.” --ROFL!!!! Radditz and his brotherly love! He is just too sweet.
(Vulgarity meant something entirely different to the upper class where saying ‘damn’ in front of a lady was condemnable to social death.)--Aww , Vegeta\'s virgin ears have been cruelly violated! O_O
She moved up next to Vegeta, licked her fingers and wiped his face clean of the dirt with her SALIVA. (He felt so much cleaner.)--rofl! That is really gross. I would have rather just kept the dirt on my face.
getageta: Huh? And for that matter, could we please change me out of the bondage clothes? Did you really have to wrap me up in black straps?--BONDAGE VEGETA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *faints then dies* I think Goku..err Kakarott did have to tie him up in black straps! That is YUM!
I loved this chapter, I thought it was excellent and I can\'t wait for the update...well I can since it will be tomorrow, but you know what I mean. I love this story and I can\'t wait to see what is going to happen. The personalitys are great also!
^.*
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Handsome in a bitchy sort of way.--LoL never heard of that b4, but very funny.
Figuring out why the hell his brother wanted the twerpy midget to join them was the mystery.---*gasp* VEGETA IS NOT A TWERPY MIDGET!!!...I read that line and was like I didn\'t know Krillen was in this fic...hehe
A glitter of light caught his eye and he pulled the tail up, looked at the underside of it, saw the barbell straight through the base of it and winced in pain.---aww, oh no, thats so sad...Poor Geta
“Oi, couldn’t you be more original?” Radditz rolled his eyes.--LoL
There were twelve Vegeta’s in the division, as if naming your kid after royalty (or the planet) was all the rage for those parents that realized their children were never going to make it past the third-class division. --GAH! ROFL!!!!
I would avoid saying you’re the Prince. Nobody out here really likes him.--*sobs* I do!, even though I\'m not there...I feel badly for Vegeta. Having to wear smelly clothes in a smelly place, with ki suppressors, not knowing how any of that happened to him. *shakes fist* My poor Ouji!
Hell, if this guy was the Prince he was in for a hell of a shock.--hehe, I know. If I was Vegeta I would suggest a lake party so everyone can get clean. maybe wash their clothes or something...Just reading the way you described everything made me feel grimy. When that guy ran his finger across Vegeta\'s face...I was like ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
“Alright, asshole, Dad said I have to go kick your ass.” --ROFL!!!! Radditz and his brotherly love! He is just too sweet.
(Vulgarity meant something entirely different to the upper class where saying ‘damn’ in front of a lady was condemnable to social death.)--Aww , Vegeta\'s virgin ears have been cruelly violated! O_O
She moved up next to Vegeta, licked her fingers and wiped his face clean of the dirt with her SALIVA. (He felt so much cleaner.)--rofl! That is really gross. I would have rather just kept the dirt on my face.
getageta: Huh? And for that matter, could we please change me out of the bondage clothes? Did you really have to wrap me up in black straps?--BONDAGE VEGETA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *faints then dies* I think Goku..err Kakarott did have to tie him up in black straps! That is YUM!
I loved this chapter, I thought it was excellent and I can\'t wait for the update...well I can since it will be tomorrow, but you know what I mean. I love this story and I can\'t wait to see what is going to happen. The personalitys are great also!
^.*
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really do love this fic. I must comment on you response to Getarian about Nappa and sex....EWWWW!
Now, on to the fic. Is Saima and Raditz gonna start something soon or do I have to step in? Hmmm? And the end notes were hilarious. Bardock does strike me and and old pervert too. I glad he\'s around though. He seems to be the smartest out of the bunch so far.
Now, on to the fic. Is Saima and Raditz gonna start something soon or do I have to step in? Hmmm? And the end notes were hilarious. Bardock does strike me and and old pervert too. I glad he\'s around though. He seems to be the smartest out of the bunch so far.