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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter.
\"...and made lewd comments about their father’s predilection for having sex with his sons. As if.\"
LOL! I am fully aware that this is absolutely no laughing matter, but it\'s your fault (stated humorously) for putting in the \"As if.\" :-D Cracked up at the image of Kakarot, (in my mind anyway) sneering, and expelling a pfft! as he thought this...LOL!
Liked Kakarot\'s attituden itn it came to dealing with those bastards who taunted him :-)
Ah, Radditz is a good brother :-)
\"But he was good, he didn’t turn around and blast them all to hell,\"
Probably shouldn\'t I guess ...but he should kick their pathetic arses all around the campsite :-)
Ah, poor Bardock, I\'m assuming because of his visions?
“Yeah,” the tall idiot said, “And he looks like the asshole Prince.”
LOL! Now, now Vegeta and Kakarot, is that any way for either of you to be thinking and talking about the love of your life. :-D
\"“Maybe we should strip search him,” the woman—Saima?—said.\"
Hentai! Hands off my...err, Kakarot\'s Prince :-)
\"“Oh, found it,” the tall man said. He was holding Vegeta’s shirt up in the front and looking at his chest.\"
Ooh, very sensual...how could he not jump him at this point? :-)
\"Toyed with his nipple like he was some trollop.\"
LOL! I love outraged, indignant, Vegeta :-)
\"“Wondf thf there are more,” she said, ran her hands down his sides,...\"
*chuckle* Yeah, I bet you do. I\'m not sure if I could have stopped where she did though, which is why she gets to live and I would be a pile of ash :-)
\"“Whoever made these was really adept. I haven’t seen anything like this before.” Sounded impressed.\"
Hmm, deeply mystified as to who would have done this to Vegeta. My immediate thought was that the twins had dropped \'mum\' off in the general vicinit dad dad, but then I figured that they wouldn\'t do something like that to their mum (who was obviously out of it at the time) and then I really brushed them off my list when it was mentioned that Vegeta\'s power was low (although I wouldn\'t put it past Goten to come up with the nipple piercing...LOL!) but I\'m assuming that they are responsible for the lowered ki? Then, I thought that maybe it was all part of the King\'s plot to get rid of his son, but then figured, why didn\'t they just kill him? So, at this point...the plot thickens and I\'m completely clueless :-)
“Can’t leave me unsupervised with a new ass. Never know what I’ll do to it.”
LOL! This is a side that his alternate self, definitely passed on to Goten :-)
“Yeah,” she said, “Ow. Couldn’t you just you know… Cut it off?”
Yowsers! Is this woman crazy? You don\'t cut off a Saiyans tail! I wonder what it is that they were looking at, it sounds nasty.
This is really starting to heat up...can\'t wait for the next chapter!
LOL! Loved all of the end dialogue, but really cracked up at this:
\"Radditz: Hey, do I get sex?\"
\"Card: Hush, you.\"
Poor Radditz...so near, yet so far...it\'s a cruel, cruel world. Hey, if Kakarot gets another round with Saima, then can Radditz and Vegeta just have a quickie? No? Okay, sorry Radditz...I tried...Sigh... :-D
\"*has no idea how this information is helpful but shares it anyway. *\"
*chuckle* This bit made me laugh...that\'s helpful :-)
\"*Radditz pouts because he won’t get any sex with Vegeta. *\"
Ahh...Gently takes Radditz by the hand, and shows him my world of fanfiction...coughing, as I quickly lead him past a couple of G/V fics and places him next to his Prince in my R/V fic...He is suitably unimpressed as he notices that I haven\'t even got to the sex scenes yet...Sheesh, there\'s no pleasing some people...you\'ve hugged, what more do you want man?...he\'s only 16 at this point.
Radditsu: I want you to get past the boring shit, hurry up and age the boy, and get me some sex!
Getarian: *sigh* Me too!
\"...and made lewd comments about their father’s predilection for having sex with his sons. As if.\"
LOL! I am fully aware that this is absolutely no laughing matter, but it\'s your fault (stated humorously) for putting in the \"As if.\" :-D Cracked up at the image of Kakarot, (in my mind anyway) sneering, and expelling a pfft! as he thought this...LOL!
Liked Kakarot\'s attituden itn it came to dealing with those bastards who taunted him :-)
Ah, Radditz is a good brother :-)
\"But he was good, he didn’t turn around and blast them all to hell,\"
Probably shouldn\'t I guess ...but he should kick their pathetic arses all around the campsite :-)
Ah, poor Bardock, I\'m assuming because of his visions?
“Yeah,” the tall idiot said, “And he looks like the asshole Prince.”
LOL! Now, now Vegeta and Kakarot, is that any way for either of you to be thinking and talking about the love of your life. :-D
\"“Maybe we should strip search him,” the woman—Saima?—said.\"
Hentai! Hands off my...err, Kakarot\'s Prince :-)
\"“Oh, found it,” the tall man said. He was holding Vegeta’s shirt up in the front and looking at his chest.\"
Ooh, very sensual...how could he not jump him at this point? :-)
\"Toyed with his nipple like he was some trollop.\"
LOL! I love outraged, indignant, Vegeta :-)
\"“Wondf thf there are more,” she said, ran her hands down his sides,...\"
*chuckle* Yeah, I bet you do. I\'m not sure if I could have stopped where she did though, which is why she gets to live and I would be a pile of ash :-)
\"“Whoever made these was really adept. I haven’t seen anything like this before.” Sounded impressed.\"
Hmm, deeply mystified as to who would have done this to Vegeta. My immediate thought was that the twins had dropped \'mum\' off in the general vicinit dad dad, but then I figured that they wouldn\'t do something like that to their mum (who was obviously out of it at the time) and then I really brushed them off my list when it was mentioned that Vegeta\'s power was low (although I wouldn\'t put it past Goten to come up with the nipple piercing...LOL!) but I\'m assuming that they are responsible for the lowered ki? Then, I thought that maybe it was all part of the King\'s plot to get rid of his son, but then figured, why didn\'t they just kill him? So, at this point...the plot thickens and I\'m completely clueless :-)
“Can’t leave me unsupervised with a new ass. Never know what I’ll do to it.”
LOL! This is a side that his alternate self, definitely passed on to Goten :-)
“Yeah,” she said, “Ow. Couldn’t you just you know… Cut it off?”
Yowsers! Is this woman crazy? You don\'t cut off a Saiyans tail! I wonder what it is that they were looking at, it sounds nasty.
This is really starting to heat up...can\'t wait for the next chapter!
LOL! Loved all of the end dialogue, but really cracked up at this:
\"Radditz: Hey, do I get sex?\"
\"Card: Hush, you.\"
Poor Radditz...so near, yet so far...it\'s a cruel, cruel world. Hey, if Kakarot gets another round with Saima, then can Radditz and Vegeta just have a quickie? No? Okay, sorry Radditz...I tried...Sigh... :-D
\"*has no idea how this information is helpful but shares it anyway. *\"
*chuckle* This bit made me laugh...that\'s helpful :-)
\"*Radditz pouts because he won’t get any sex with Vegeta. *\"
Ahh...Gently takes Radditz by the hand, and shows him my world of fanfiction...coughing, as I quickly lead him past a couple of G/V fics and places him next to his Prince in my R/V fic...He is suitably unimpressed as he notices that I haven\'t even got to the sex scenes yet...Sheesh, there\'s no pleasing some people...you\'ve hugged, what more do you want man?...he\'s only 16 at this point.
Radditsu: I want you to get past the boring shit, hurry up and age the boy, and get me some sex!
Getarian: *sigh* Me too!
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So if his father can\'t kill him he\'ll just pierce him with ki restraints and toss him to the edges of the universe? Hmmm interesting choice. I hope he and Kakarot find at the very least friendship together. Vegeta will have more fun with the misfits anyways, they are more tolerant usually.
As for the lemon cookie....well I\'ll donate it to Vegeta and Goku so they can get extra sex when it is time for them to have sex together. Much more fun for me that way.
As for the lemon cookie....well I\'ll donate it to Vegeta and Goku so they can get extra sex when it is time for them to have sex together. Much more fun for me that way.
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the way Vegeta keeps rubbing his chest when he gets angry, I’m guessing its because of the ki suppressers. ^_^
And who would dare touch Vegeta’s tail, blasphemy I tell you! (Trying to get back into Vegeta’s good books… I still love you!!!) ^-^
‘wiped his face clean of the dirt with her SALIVA. (He felt so much cleaner.)’ – I think I’ll stick to showers. O_o
Looking forward to the next chap!…
And who would dare touch Vegeta’s tail, blasphemy I tell you! (Trying to get back into Vegeta’s good books… I still love you!!!) ^-^
‘wiped his face clean of the dirt with her SALIVA. (He felt so much cleaner.)’ – I think I’ll stick to showers. O_o
Looking forward to the next chap!…
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you have the third class soldiers as pretty much feral outcasts, Bardock and his boys, and so far, Saima, as a class above them, but still able to muck in with them, and the Prince as all refined and dead out of his depths amongst the rabble...with the added burden of ki restraints...a recipe for disaster and hopefully, ultimately, a protective Kakarot... I think I\'m going to enjoy this.
\"...saw the barbell straight through the base of it and winced in pain.\"
Oh, painful. My poor Vegeta :-(
My poor Vegeta is so, in over his head, at the moment, that all my mothering instincts are kicking in...that\'s not a good thing...I much prefer it when my hormones kick in where Vegeta is concerned. :-)
“What is that fucking horrendous smell?”
LOL! Poor baby. How is it possible to feel sofor for him and crack up at the same time? :-)
“I am not his boyfriend!” Vegeta snapped, “How dare you say that about me.”
deardear, and he has still yet to meet the actual scum of the troops...I\'ve got a bad feeling about all of this...in a, this is a great idea, sort of way :-)
Poor Vegeta (I have a feeling, I\'m going to be saying this alot) Those nipple ring things must be driving him crazy...sounds so uncomfortable.
\"“I am fully capable of taking care of myself,” Vegeta said.\"
Arrrgh! I hate it when he does this! Ki restraints Vegeta...remember? Keep close to Kakarot at all times ;-)
I am so glad that Kakarot asked Saima to watch over Vegeta, and pleased that Saima actually did so. Vegeta really doesn\'t seem to know what sort of people he\'s dealing with and I\'m a little scared for him.
Loved his thoughts when the others got all vulgar around him :-)
\"She moved up next to Vegeta, licked her fingers and wiped his face clean of the dirt with her SALIVA. (He felt so much cleaner.)\"
LOL! Gods, I loved this :-D
\"“Are you all barbarians?” he asked.\"
*chuckle* Silly Vegeta, don\'t be pushing away the few people who are willing to help you through this mess.
This is a very interesting story and I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter :-)
\"Darn! Everyone thinks the Twins had something to do with where Vegeta is.\"
Yeah, When I read my review...I not tha that I made a mistake, where I wrote:
\"but I\'m assuming that they are responsible for the lowered ki? \"
I actually meant to write \'aren\'t\' *sigh* That\'s what comes of rushing...didn\'t proof-read.
Although, it did seem to be the logical first choice, which is why I thought so, but yeah, as I , by, by the end of the chapter, no...definitely not. They wouldn\'t do that to their \'mum\'. Still trying to figure out who the hell could have done it...
\"Yes! Now that we see what Goku would have been we all understand why Goten is. Isn’t that great?!\"
*chuckle* It is actually :-)
\"(I have decided about Radditz sex life. Depends on how he well he behaves.)\"
Oooo, interesting...If he behaves, please tell me it\'s with Vegeta and not Nappa...LOL!
but I\'m assuming that they are responsible for the lowered ki?
\"...saw the barbell straight through the base of it and winced in pain.\"
Oh, painful. My poor Vegeta :-(
My poor Vegeta is so, in over his head, at the moment, that all my mothering instincts are kicking in...that\'s not a good thing...I much prefer it when my hormones kick in where Vegeta is concerned. :-)
“What is that fucking horrendous smell?”
LOL! Poor baby. How is it possible to feel sofor for him and crack up at the same time? :-)
“I am not his boyfriend!” Vegeta snapped, “How dare you say that about me.”
deardear, and he has still yet to meet the actual scum of the troops...I\'ve got a bad feeling about all of this...in a, this is a great idea, sort of way :-)
Poor Vegeta (I have a feeling, I\'m going to be saying this alot) Those nipple ring things must be driving him crazy...sounds so uncomfortable.
\"“I am fully capable of taking care of myself,” Vegeta said.\"
Arrrgh! I hate it when he does this! Ki restraints Vegeta...remember? Keep close to Kakarot at all times ;-)
I am so glad that Kakarot asked Saima to watch over Vegeta, and pleased that Saima actually did so. Vegeta really doesn\'t seem to know what sort of people he\'s dealing with and I\'m a little scared for him.
Loved his thoughts when the others got all vulgar around him :-)
\"She moved up next to Vegeta, licked her fingers and wiped his face clean of the dirt with her SALIVA. (He felt so much cleaner.)\"
LOL! Gods, I loved this :-D
\"“Are you all barbarians?” he asked.\"
*chuckle* Silly Vegeta, don\'t be pushing away the few people who are willing to help you through this mess.
This is a very interesting story and I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter :-)
\"Darn! Everyone thinks the Twins had something to do with where Vegeta is.\"
Yeah, When I read my review...I not tha that I made a mistake, where I wrote:
\"but I\'m assuming that they are responsible for the lowered ki? \"
I actually meant to write \'aren\'t\' *sigh* That\'s what comes of rushing...didn\'t proof-read.
Although, it did seem to be the logical first choice, which is why I thought so, but yeah, as I , by, by the end of the chapter, no...definitely not. They wouldn\'t do that to their \'mum\'. Still trying to figure out who the hell could have done it...
\"Yes! Now that we see what Goku would have been we all understand why Goten is. Isn’t that great?!\"
*chuckle* It is actually :-)
\"(I have decided about Radditz sex life. Depends on how he well he behaves.)\"
Oooo, interesting...If he behaves, please tell me it\'s with Vegeta and not Nappa...LOL!
but I\'m assuming that they are responsible for the lowered ki?
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh good God! What a day I\'m having. Please ignore this idiotic bit at the end of my review:
\"but I\'m assuming that they are responsible for the lowered ki?\"I juI just cut it fry pry previous review, when I noticed the error, and plonked it in the review space, before cutting and pasting my actual review...(I always review on wordpad, since I once reviewed in the early days and the damn review didn\'t go through and I had to rewrite the whole thing, which really annoyed me...it\'s now a safeguard sort of thing) Anyhoo...where was I?
Oh yeah, I cut the silly thing again. because I\'m incredibly lazy, pasted it in the right place and then conveniently ft tht the stupid thing was still sitting at the bottom of the review page.
I\'ve just noticed that this explanation is waaay longer than if I had just typed out the stupid sentence instead of cutting and pasting.
Maybe I should have just said. Please ignore. I fucked up :-D
\"but I\'m assuming that they are responsible for the lowered ki?\"I juI just cut it fry pry previous review, when I noticed the error, and plonked it in the review space, before cutting and pasting my actual review...(I always review on wordpad, since I once reviewed in the early days and the damn review didn\'t go through and I had to rewrite the whole thing, which really annoyed me...it\'s now a safeguard sort of thing) Anyhoo...where was I?
Oh yeah, I cut the silly thing again. because I\'m incredibly lazy, pasted it in the right place and then conveniently ft tht the stupid thing was still sitting at the bottom of the review page.
I\'ve just noticed that this explanation is waaay longer than if I had just typed out the stupid sentence instead of cutting and pasting.
Maybe I should have just said. Please ignore. I fucked up :-D
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chappie. I don\'t even feel bad about not getting the lemon cookie anymore. I like the lewd language by the way...my family are royalty when ites tes to offensive language...I am sure that\'s were I get it from. Every other word that comes out of my mouth is vulgar or at least that\'s what everyone says.
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You personify Kakarott very well!! I would expect hi be be more \'rough around the edges\' when raised on his home planet.
This story definately piques my curiosity.
I thnk that the twins IT\'d the prince to the edges of the empire to save him from the king.
For all I know they put the ki dameners on.
I will definately wait to find out!
Keep up the good work.
Also is it easier to read when I put in whitespace?
This story definately piques my curiosity.
I thnk that the twins IT\'d the prince to the edges of the empire to save him from the king.
For all I know they put the ki dameners on.
I will definately wait to find out!
Keep up the good work.
Also is it easier to read when I put in whitespace?
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I was wrong. It was one of those things where you answer and as soon as it leaves your mouth you know its wrong and want to dig a hole and jump in it in shame. Oh well, at least I didn\'t actually think that I was right. He He. The twins of course...when you say it, it makes so much sense...Duh!
Yeah, piercings...Hmm...anyway. I love that Kakarot is the perv in this one. And Radditz is here too. Yes! Bardock too...I love Bardock! This is fabulous!
Yeah, piercings...Hmm...anyway. I love that Kakarot is the perv in this one. And Radditz is here too. Yes! Bardock too...I love Bardock! This is fabulous!
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woot!
Great chappie!
Love the start of this story and it is very interesting indeed.
Two insanely bright lights, eh? I think its the Twins Geta and Goten. Because there is a scar...hm... yeah I think I am going to stick with that answer, even though I am thinking other things too.
I think this was very good and I can not wait to read more!
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Great chappie!
Love the start of this story and it is very interesting indeed.
Two insanely bright lights, eh? I think its the Twins Geta and Goten. Because there is a scar...hm... yeah I think I am going to stick with that answer, even though I am thinking other things too.
I think this was very good and I can not wait to read more!
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it already! ^_^
I wouldn\'t have guessed that the twins came to save him, but then again I do remember it was mentioned.
I love the characters, especially Kakarot\'s... (Shock! Horror! I\'m suppose to be a Vegeta fan!) ^_^
Oh yeah and I\'m a total fan of Vegeta-sei based fics! ^_^
Looking forward to the next chap!!! ^-^
I wouldn\'t have guessed that the twins came to save him, but then again I do remember it was mentioned.
I love the characters, especially Kakarot\'s... (Shock! Horror! I\'m suppose to be a Vegeta fan!) ^_^
Oh yeah and I\'m a total fan of Vegeta-sei based fics! ^_^
Looking forward to the next chap!!! ^-^