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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please up date this story i would love to see what happens next, there is something that intrigues me about this story. I also want to know more abotu these religions thankyou for your wonderful writings
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you suck uyou left me wanting to reed the reast of the story hurry up and finish
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting piece...please by all means...continue!!! started reading this on another site [SHA] and am very glad you decided to finishish it....definitely glad! defiantly so!!! Looking foward to the next chapters!!! Don\'t believe in organised religion myself, but i did go to catholic school and am a confirmed baptist by choice: baptist born, baptist bread, and when i die: i\'ll be a baptist dead!!! ;)
Ya doin\' great kid!!! {Don\'t get me wrong: the creator does exhist! man just got perverted along the way and twisted a few things!} Wonderful idea...btw!
Ya doin\' great kid!!! {Don\'t get me wrong: the creator does exhist! man just got perverted along the way and twisted a few things!} Wonderful idea...btw!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Krillen?! that was krillen and 18?! I wonder what the Saiyan Prince and his Princess are gonna do? This is very exciting!!! It challenges the mind and the imagination!!
[took a religion in america course and am just disappointed you didn\'t use a voodo ceremony...or a Native american one...or since this is about aliens...the railean one...but this is great!!! and gutsy!!!]
I really do love your writings...and this took guts...you definitely have my attention!! Many blessings on your creativity!!!
[took a religion in america course and am just disappointed you didn\'t use a voodo ceremony...or a Native american one...or since this is about aliens...the railean one...but this is great!!! and gutsy!!!]
I really do love your writings...and this took guts...you definitely have my attention!! Many blessings on your creativity!!!
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good to see you\'ve finally decided to continue this story, its great. I definitely enjoyed the last chapter however shocking it was...hope you post the next chapter soon.
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now on to part 3
Now on to part 3
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for part four. This story is great! Keep up the good work.
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Kinda freaky but then... so am I lol Waiting on next chap!
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GrEaT!
yamcha thing was odd but im hoping the next chappie will hav lots of Veggie, lol
yamcha thing was odd but im hoping the next chappie will hav lots of Veggie, lol
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! where is all the reviews for this masterpiece!!! this story was so damn educational, i really was literally ignorant to every theme in the story! this is one of the best things i\'ve ever read! C\'mon makota! you\'ve got to finish this story or i will surely die!