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Oww...you know that was a perfect place to stop. And I don't care how long it takes for the next part as long as s ass as decriptive and amazing as the rest of the story so far. Humm...I am very interested in where this is leading. Learning is fun. Heh heh.

I was absolutely estactic (pardon my spelling please) when I saw this posted here on AFF. I had read the first three chapters on sayianhideaway. I have to say, I love this story. I guess I am just a hentai freak, huh?

I am glad for all the warnings you have put up concerning this story. It makes it a whole lot easier to not have to worry that you will get discouraged by flamers. I would hate to see you not complete it because someone wasn't warned about the contents. Now that they are warned, if they read and flame, it's their own damned fault.

I am looking forward to your next installment.

Wow, I\'mI\'m SERIOUSLY impressed... of course, I\'m easily amused by just about any fanfiction that takes that extra leap and goes into the oh-so-taboo subject of religion. I mean come on... we HAMMER the ideal of sex, gore, hatred, battle, blood, guts and ass penetration... but a little religion? Something that can, in a sense, alter our entire life\'s course? We barely mention it, yet it plays a vital role in our lives as humans, as I\'m certain belief or curiosity regarding a force greater than ourselves is instilled in every human creature.

Regardless of all that, this is written extremely well, it sounds remarkably original and interesting, the characters are reaic aic and likeable and you as an author... well, I find you intriguing just for the fact that you\'ve gone that extra mile. Its captivating to be honest. And the whole idea of ACTUALLY learning about another tradition or religion.. well, I think thats something that every person should do at some point in our lives. I mean, lets face it.. from our births we\'re all brainwashed in a sense by the religious choice or preference that our parents took... Is it a betrayal to Go we we explore possibilities that contradict those we\'ve been taught? I dont think so and you\'ve shown a great deal of this in your own writing.. (or perhaps I\'m being presumptuous)

Either way, I agreed somewhat with Goten when he remarked about the hypocracy of it all. Very true. I mean, honestly.. what religion doesn\'t at some point base its own roots on a seperation from another belief? And dont they all to some extent bring themselves up by degrading another religion? Showing ITS \"faults\" in comparison to their own?

Anyways, I\'m rambling. But thats good see! Because if people like ME are brought to the point of being blubbering fools on a topic, it means you\'ve got me thinking. And thats the whole goal of writing as I see it. To make people think and expand their minds. This is an amazing fic so far. I\'m truly captured both by the storyline, the characters, the underlyning topics.. and you of course. Keep writing, and I\'ll keep reading.

Love
Camaro

I thought that this chapter was quite brave. I don\'t know if i would have had the nerve to go there. I live in Mississippi and my friends all are \"religious\" I am not of course and enjoy challenging them constantly. If they knew that there was something like this out there they probably would be horrified. But me on the other hand enjoy it emensely. And once again my interest is peaked. Yamcha eh...I think you made the right choice. Though it is hard to shallow (I was not trying to be funny). You got me all geared up for the next chapter. What\'s up with Vegeta and Bulma anyway.

I have been tossing around the idea of taking a religion course. I really think I will now though.

Owww...that was really good. Poor Goten, being forced to watch all the beautiful boy on boy action and not being able to do a thing about it. Lucky for him Trunks came to save the day. I love the way the religions are handled in this fic. I learn something new everyday. :)

I really find this interesting, I like these kinds of fanfictions. I am not on the level to write such a fanfiction that this one promises to be but this will help me along. I beg of you to write chapter 2 soon!!.
Anyhow I was suprised that 17 could ever be a teacher and I didn\'t know there where religion classes in Japan.
And dodn\'t ever know if that would be legal here in America but I could imagine if the had it in my school it would be like letting Binladin represent Afganistan in the U.N. With that aside I tihnk this is a very well written fic.

UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! ALL YOUR FICS R GOOD, INCLUDING THIS ONE! Y DOESN\'T IT GET ANY ATTENTION!? >_< ARRG!

I could soo see Seventeen as a teacher and Goten as a no a count lazy ass student. I can\'t wait to see how this fic is going to turn out.