rate_review Reviews

Oooowww! That was very good. I must say that I have never read a Goku/ChiChi lemon. So this is a first for me. It was so cute though. I still don\'t like them together though. Your Goku is definetly a bit slower than mine, but I find that utterly irresistable. I really loved this chapter. I liked being able to get into Goku\'s head for once, very good. And the breast fascination is hilarious. It was so loverly.

Actually, I\'m glad you did a Goku/Chichi lemon. It was a nice change of pace. Not to mention that you managed to keep him simple and still make him sexual(I am impressed!). Usually you have to give his character a little more brains in order to make him appear sexual. I look forward to your next chapter! ^_^

Yay, you updated! Joy! It\'s been a long torcherous day and a little Bulma/Vegeta banging goes a long way! I think that its cute the way those two interact. I can not see Vegeta a doctor\'s office with the blue haired onna though. Hmm...A Goku and ChiChi lemon...as much as I hate those two together I can\'t help but find the prospect interesting.

You probaby won\'t believe this, but I started writing the The History of Kalika only after playing my brother\'s DBZ Bodukai game over last Christmas Break, I hadn\'t seen not one show. It was wierd. I knew nothing about the show but even then it seemed that Vegeta kicked ass and he soo belonged with Goku. But now of course I by and watch anything Dragonball related I can get my hands on...its research people. ;)

thats funny, bulma manages to give ve a p a piece of her mind while still getting some. thats my girl. good job, can\'t wait for more. i really love ur story

I am so happy your computer likes you again. I actually feel really bad. I have been tearing through your fics like a bag of Hershey\'s miniatures and this is the first time I\'ve reviewed. I get on line and read them daily, faithfully and religiously. Please forgive me for not reviewing sooner. I feel so ashamed. I\'m normally not this irresponsible.

I\'m not going to be the one to slap youakarakarrot may be clueless but he is still a saiyan. A rather good looking one too. With two rather good looking boys. It would be a shame to take one of them out of the gene pool.......... I\'m sorry where was I again?... Oh yes writing a review.

This is a really good fic. I love the way you are writing Vegeta. He is so clear. He almost steps right off the page. (Now if he\'d only step off that page and into my shower.)

Thank you for writing and especially updaupdating every day. That is sooooo nice of you. Oh and just in case you\'ve missed it. you are the ONLY writer I\'ve compared to chocolate so far.

First - a non review... Card my sweet have you noticed that on several of your current fics you are chapter number challenged? *snicker* Go check the numbers on your current fics. Now I will read your wonderful chapter!

OK - now that I\'ve read the chapter... *reaches out and gently taps Card on each cheek* A ChichiXGoku is not what you want to do unless you really LIKE Chichi with Goku... I did that once and even though it came out HOT - it still gives me nightmares.

Another great chapter - having Vegeta say she wasn\'t showing yet is exactly what would make her smile! Been there - hated that. How come my hubby couldn\'t figure out what Vegeta did so easily?

Caralin Fury is a very jealous girl...jealous of this author\'s wonderful talent in writing lemons (she very much prefers the non/slash lemons and these are very ggod), jealous of what must be a very active sex life (you are writing from experience...I can tell...sigh I\'ve been married for 11 years and have three children...spontaneous sex is a thing of the past) and of an amazing ability to update so frequently (wow...most days I barely have enough energy to climb into bed...or out of bed!)

Great writing...serious talent...even better sense of humor...I love a story with good V/B sex and humor...there is not enough laughter in this world.

Gah! I have to go watch my son\'s soccer tournament...otherwise Ms. Fury would be attempting to write a new chappie on her own fic. Alas...not until the kids are in bed!

That last line with Goku at the end was hilarious. Poor Chi Chi, having all that beautiful Saiyan for a husband and never getting any. I would just die.

Really loved the opening scene with Bulma and her mother. :-)

Definitely loved the follow up scenes with Bulma and Vegeta. The atmosphere in the room was almost cozy...in a sexually charged kind of way...LOL!

Loved this:
“My parents are home.”
\"So? He didn’t particularly care.\"

LOL! Don\'t you just love a man who doesn\'t panic at the sight of the olds. :-D

I think you\'re probably the first author I\'ve come across who doesn\'t have Bulma as a lousy cook. It\'s very refreshing. :-)

\"And she sighed at him. “You’re always going to be an ass, aren’t you?”\"

LOL! \'Fraid so m\'dear. No not really, he getsh beh better later on. But I so love this...it\'s so very Vegeta at this point. :-D

Totally loved the bit with the shorts and their individual thoughts on each other having worn them. ;-)

Love how Bulma knows exactly how to get the Prince aroused and totally loved his reaction. As always I completely love your lemons, and this was certainly no exception. The chemistry between these two is incredible. :-)

Loved the bit at the end when Bulma\'s mum came to the door and asked if everything was okay, her long pause after Bulma informed her that Vegeta was with her was hilarious. Could see her mind processing that, and realising that her daughter had snagged the Prince before she could :-D

This was an enjoyable chapter. Love the sense of closeness that seems to be developing between Vegeta and Bulma. :-)

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hope your computer troubles are not that bad. Damn things can be so expensive to fix sometimes.

Really loved this:

\"Gk: See? Chichi does the same thing. Every time she sees me, she gets pissed off!\"

\"Bulma *mumbling * well maybe if you tied her to the headboard and fucked her unconscious once in a while she wouldn’t be so pissed…\"

\"Gk: O.O!!!!!! BULMA! I can’t do that! She’s…she’s… MY WIFE!

ROTFL!