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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
Lemonade anyone?!
Screw lemonade, I am going to go hunt down my husband!!!!!! ^_^
Fantastic work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
Lemonade anyone?!
Screw lemonade, I am going to go hunt down my husband!!!!!! ^_^
Fantastic work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really loved the way Bulma watched Vegeta sleeping, studying him (probably the only time she could do this, without him demanding to know what she found so fascinating) ;-)
Loved her thoughts. Got a really good mental image of her pulling him along by his good arm and he quietly following along without a peep. Totally love the idea of him allowing her to tuck him in bed. He can be so damn adorable sometimes. :-)
\"He wasn’t exactly committed to her in any way. (Other than, she thought with a smirk, he was very fond of her breasts.)\"
LOL! Love her smirking thoughts. Go get him Bulma, thrust those breasts :-D
\"(Again, she thought of poor Chichi, and wondered why that woman didn’t just move away while her husband was gone...\"
ROTFL! Played a little scene out in my head as I read this, ChiChi waving bye-bye to Goku, watching him fly away and then quickly running into her house gathering up her possessions and taking off into parts unknown, chuckling maniacally. Goku returning later, finding different people in his home, grinning at them before sitting down at the table, eating all of their dinner, and then shouting see-ya before taking off to the woods again. :-D
\"She couldn’t remember any specific time when Goku had actually be around long enough to be doing…er…Chichi.)\"
LOL! I love the way that Bulma gets sort of embarrassed when she thinks about Goku and ChiChi going at it. :-D
\"Those thoughts (thankfully) were interrupted when Vegeta’s hand brushed her knee, and she looked at him and found that he was watching her.\"
Oh, so hot! I love the imagery I got from this. Those dark sultry eyes...Mmmm.
\"“And what else should I do?” He said this with a bedroom type of voice (er, duh, they were in the bedroom.)\"
LOL!
\"Full of sultry promises and rumbling with the last dredges of sleep.\"
Whoo, you do have a way with words. So sensual.
“Oh, no, buddy. You can shower in my bathroom. I told you last night I was not going to let you out of my sight.”
\"So he shrugged. Like he didn’t give a damn, and went into her bathroom.\"
I truly love the way you have these two interacting with each other. It\'s so easy to visualise the couple we see on t.v. being like this with each other. :-)
\"(Was already nicely n, an, and all his skin was sleep warm as she touched him in passing.)\"
Mmmm, nicely naked Vegeta...
\"Then, almost without her even realizing it, she watched him as his hand dropped down to his erection (LIKE IT WAS SO NORMAL) and he stood there, in her shower, and stroked himself like she wasn’t standing there watching him.\"
Holy shit! This scene is so amazingly erotic. You use just the right words, and the imagery is astounding. Love this. :-)
\"So she kindly stepped into the shower with him. Saw that he was grinning—bastard—and she put her hand over his.\"
Oh yeah, he knew exactly what he was doing...sexy little bastard. ;-)
“Now, Vegeta,” she said, “I told you not to use your shoulder for anything strenuous.”
Ah, that was so kind of Bulma to help Vegeta out like that...what a good samaritan. :-D
“Maybe I’d been willing to accept some of your help.”
Ooo, she\'s definitely got to him. Love how he fought over what he was going to say, so as to not scare her off. I can just see him, mentally throwing away a shit-load of \'Vegeta\' remarks and frantically searching for something that will ensure he gets some nookie. :-D
Loved the shower scene. Particularly loved this:
\"Then he stopped, tightened his hand over hers and she felt him shiver a little as he came.\"
Stunning description. I almost feel like a voyeur when I read your lemons, so damn real.
From this:
\"“Did you really think that was the whole show?” he asked. Made her shiver.\"
To this:
“Enjoy the show?”
Was simply amazing, loved it all! You make the best lemonade of all, I drink it all in and always want more, Well done :-)
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Loved the end dialogue :-)
\"*Giggling still * I read the addendum review and I was like o.O er? Then I read it again and I started to laugh. Very clever. Very clever indeed.\"
*Huge grin* Thank-you. Really happy that you enjoyed it. :-)
\on’ton’t think I could write that many lemons. (Not straight ones, anyway.)\"
LOL!
\"*Grabs writing pad and grabs Goku as he IT’s away to find Vegeta. *\"
Yeah! Go get him Card...gotta love that IT.)
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Loved her thoughts. Got a really good mental image of her pulling him along by his good arm and he quietly following along without a peep. Totally love the idea of him allowing her to tuck him in bed. He can be so damn adorable sometimes. :-)
\"He wasn’t exactly committed to her in any way. (Other than, she thought with a smirk, he was very fond of her breasts.)\"
LOL! Love her smirking thoughts. Go get him Bulma, thrust those breasts :-D
\"(Again, she thought of poor Chichi, and wondered why that woman didn’t just move away while her husband was gone...\"
ROTFL! Played a little scene out in my head as I read this, ChiChi waving bye-bye to Goku, watching him fly away and then quickly running into her house gathering up her possessions and taking off into parts unknown, chuckling maniacally. Goku returning later, finding different people in his home, grinning at them before sitting down at the table, eating all of their dinner, and then shouting see-ya before taking off to the woods again. :-D
\"She couldn’t remember any specific time when Goku had actually be around long enough to be doing…er…Chichi.)\"
LOL! I love the way that Bulma gets sort of embarrassed when she thinks about Goku and ChiChi going at it. :-D
\"Those thoughts (thankfully) were interrupted when Vegeta’s hand brushed her knee, and she looked at him and found that he was watching her.\"
Oh, so hot! I love the imagery I got from this. Those dark sultry eyes...Mmmm.
\"“And what else should I do?” He said this with a bedroom type of voice (er, duh, they were in the bedroom.)\"
LOL!
\"Full of sultry promises and rumbling with the last dredges of sleep.\"
Whoo, you do have a way with words. So sensual.
“Oh, no, buddy. You can shower in my bathroom. I told you last night I was not going to let you out of my sight.”
\"So he shrugged. Like he didn’t give a damn, and went into her bathroom.\"
I truly love the way you have these two interacting with each other. It\'s so easy to visualise the couple we see on t.v. being like this with each other. :-)
\"(Was already nicely n, an, and all his skin was sleep warm as she touched him in passing.)\"
Mmmm, nicely naked Vegeta...
\"Then, almost without her even realizing it, she watched him as his hand dropped down to his erection (LIKE IT WAS SO NORMAL) and he stood there, in her shower, and stroked himself like she wasn’t standing there watching him.\"
Holy shit! This scene is so amazingly erotic. You use just the right words, and the imagery is astounding. Love this. :-)
\"So she kindly stepped into the shower with him. Saw that he was grinning—bastard—and she put her hand over his.\"
Oh yeah, he knew exactly what he was doing...sexy little bastard. ;-)
“Now, Vegeta,” she said, “I told you not to use your shoulder for anything strenuous.”
Ah, that was so kind of Bulma to help Vegeta out like that...what a good samaritan. :-D
“Maybe I’d been willing to accept some of your help.”
Ooo, she\'s definitely got to him. Love how he fought over what he was going to say, so as to not scare her off. I can just see him, mentally throwing away a shit-load of \'Vegeta\' remarks and frantically searching for something that will ensure he gets some nookie. :-D
Loved the shower scene. Particularly loved this:
\"Then he stopped, tightened his hand over hers and she felt him shiver a little as he came.\"
Stunning description. I almost feel like a voyeur when I read your lemons, so damn real.
From this:
\"“Did you really think that was the whole show?” he asked. Made her shiver.\"
To this:
“Enjoy the show?”
Was simply amazing, loved it all! You make the best lemonade of all, I drink it all in and always want more, Well done :-)
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Loved the end dialogue :-)
\"*Giggling still * I read the addendum review and I was like o.O er? Then I read it again and I started to laugh. Very clever. Very clever indeed.\"
*Huge grin* Thank-you. Really happy that you enjoyed it. :-)
\on’ton’t think I could write that many lemons. (Not straight ones, anyway.)\"
LOL!
\"*Grabs writing pad and grabs Goku as he IT’s away to find Vegeta. *\"
Yeah! Go get him Card...gotta love that IT.)
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*drools* Whoa, that was hot!!
Jeeze, but you have a sex-driven mind.
I salute you!
So when are they going to bring in the \'toys\'? --Not that they need them, but handcuffs are awlays fun--
Jeeze, but you have a sex-driven mind.
I salute you!
So when are they going to bring in the \'toys\'? --Not that they need them, but handcuffs are awlays fun--
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it. can\'t wait for more. good job btw,good job.
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just when I have escaped you pull me back in. I am a slash fan girl not a hete! *Sigh* But I feel myself being silently converted. Alas, whatever shall I do? I never liked Bulma and Vegeta together, but now it seems so right. I am so confused! I miss Goku, I\'m going to read Group Therapy...
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing wonderful smut like you do, and you will be forgiven for not having time to review... You write so much I can\'t keep up with all of your stories to keep reviewing either.
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just recently found the all mighty adultfanfic *bows and worships n shit* and I love your story ^___^...I\'m a sucky reviewer...la la tacos and beans....AHHHHHH .........random...lovely work doll...simply lovely!!!!! Veggie is so fiiiine *dances about*
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter. Loved this:
\"But this woman—really, would it kill you to call her by her name?—before him, she, at least, he could understand.\"
Just loved the way he cut in on his own thoughts, to reprimand himself. :-D
\"Knew the effect she had on him, and was just enjoying it.\"
LOL! Indeed. Who wouldn\'t? :-)
Oh, deeply loved the scene, where Bulma asked: “So you admit there are things I know more about than you.” and then Vegeta gets up, makes his way over to her, presses against her and says: “I said there were some things you did better than me.” This moment played out very well in my head. Could even hear his voice...okay, don\'t get scared...it was a background thing...I\'m not actually hearing voices...oh God, sometimes I think I should just stick to saying. \"Good fic, want more!\" LOL!
Really enjoyed the way they played with each other, loved Vegeta\'s thoughts as he slowly moved his hands up Bilma\'s sides, to move on to her breasts. Really loved this:
\"If fighting yielded sex all the time, he would happily supply the topics to fight over.\"
LOL! See...this is why he was such a seemingly arrogant bastard...really he was a sweetheart, but he just got more sex as a bastard. :-D
\"Dropped his head down to her perfect chest and closed his mouth over her nipple, ed oed on her, and felt her hands in his hair.\"
Oh Gods, you write the best lemons. This was completely amazing, both Vegeta and Bulma\'s reactions, Bulma\'s thoughts...Everything was amazing...too much to highlight. But I do feel the need to highlight this, \'cause it was funny...
\"Wondered if moaning his name would always work to her advantage. Because if it would make him pliable as putty, she would just start moaning his name every time he started to argue. Bring every argument to a quick end, she was sure. Just tip her head back, thrust her breast in hirectrection and moan out his name in ecstasy.\"
LOL! So if Vegeta puts his plan into action and Bulmplemplements hers, then they should both be dead before the androids arrive. :-D
\"Picked her skirt up and pulled it back on—because the rest of the Z-fighters were known for their great timing.\"
LOL! So true. Can\'t afford Goku to be popping up while Bulma\'s sans shirt. :-D
Totally loved the end \'conversation\' between Bulma and Vegeta. Extemely well done. I can easily picture this in their early days. She seems to read him pretty well though...which is just as well, \'cause he\'s not exactly \'vocal boy\' is he? :-D
Really loved this chapter. Looking forward to the next.
Loved the chatty tone in the end dialogue :-)
\"*Vegeta hides in all of Card’s other fics resolute to ignore his ‘mate’ or ‘the 3rd class moron’ or the ‘faceless it’ until Getarian’s insane plan is ignored and he does not have to suffer through yea more delicious lemons.* I like that plan. *marches off to implement said plan*\"
Noooo! I\'m sorry Vegeta, don\'t hide. Ya know...Goku can sense your ki...and he has...da, da-da, da...Instant Transmission! Go get him Goku!
\"That’s right Getarian! You let Goku know which one of you is smarter. Instant Transmission away PUNK! You’re still going first. *Goku looks slightly disturbed, as do onlookers.* Heh? o.O. I’ll go away now…\"
ROTFL! You know, I pondered for a long while before deciding to leave that bit on my review, I thought, oh Gods, they\'re all going to think I\'m a nut...then I thought...eh, what the hell. Loved your response. :-D
Well, I\'m going to have to leave it here for the moment, as I am well overdue for some sleep. Longing to read your other four, but if I did that, then I wouldn\'t get any sleepall.all. Will read and review, before your next post though. Lots of reading still, to look forward to. :-)
\"But this woman—really, would it kill you to call her by her name?—before him, she, at least, he could understand.\"
Just loved the way he cut in on his own thoughts, to reprimand himself. :-D
\"Knew the effect she had on him, and was just enjoying it.\"
LOL! Indeed. Who wouldn\'t? :-)
Oh, deeply loved the scene, where Bulma asked: “So you admit there are things I know more about than you.” and then Vegeta gets up, makes his way over to her, presses against her and says: “I said there were some things you did better than me.” This moment played out very well in my head. Could even hear his voice...okay, don\'t get scared...it was a background thing...I\'m not actually hearing voices...oh God, sometimes I think I should just stick to saying. \"Good fic, want more!\" LOL!
Really enjoyed the way they played with each other, loved Vegeta\'s thoughts as he slowly moved his hands up Bilma\'s sides, to move on to her breasts. Really loved this:
\"If fighting yielded sex all the time, he would happily supply the topics to fight over.\"
LOL! See...this is why he was such a seemingly arrogant bastard...really he was a sweetheart, but he just got more sex as a bastard. :-D
\"Dropped his head down to her perfect chest and closed his mouth over her nipple, ed oed on her, and felt her hands in his hair.\"
Oh Gods, you write the best lemons. This was completely amazing, both Vegeta and Bulma\'s reactions, Bulma\'s thoughts...Everything was amazing...too much to highlight. But I do feel the need to highlight this, \'cause it was funny...
\"Wondered if moaning his name would always work to her advantage. Because if it would make him pliable as putty, she would just start moaning his name every time he started to argue. Bring every argument to a quick end, she was sure. Just tip her head back, thrust her breast in hirectrection and moan out his name in ecstasy.\"
LOL! So if Vegeta puts his plan into action and Bulmplemplements hers, then they should both be dead before the androids arrive. :-D
\"Picked her skirt up and pulled it back on—because the rest of the Z-fighters were known for their great timing.\"
LOL! So true. Can\'t afford Goku to be popping up while Bulma\'s sans shirt. :-D
Totally loved the end \'conversation\' between Bulma and Vegeta. Extemely well done. I can easily picture this in their early days. She seems to read him pretty well though...which is just as well, \'cause he\'s not exactly \'vocal boy\' is he? :-D
Really loved this chapter. Looking forward to the next.
Loved the chatty tone in the end dialogue :-)
\"*Vegeta hides in all of Card’s other fics resolute to ignore his ‘mate’ or ‘the 3rd class moron’ or the ‘faceless it’ until Getarian’s insane plan is ignored and he does not have to suffer through yea more delicious lemons.* I like that plan. *marches off to implement said plan*\"
Noooo! I\'m sorry Vegeta, don\'t hide. Ya know...Goku can sense your ki...and he has...da, da-da, da...Instant Transmission! Go get him Goku!
\"That’s right Getarian! You let Goku know which one of you is smarter. Instant Transmission away PUNK! You’re still going first. *Goku looks slightly disturbed, as do onlookers.* Heh? o.O. I’ll go away now…\"
ROTFL! You know, I pondered for a long while before deciding to leave that bit on my review, I thought, oh Gods, they\'re all going to think I\'m a nut...then I thought...eh, what the hell. Loved your response. :-D
Well, I\'m going to have to leave it here for the moment, as I am well overdue for some sleep. Longing to read your other four, but if I did that, then I wouldn\'t get any sleepall.all. Will read and review, before your next post though. Lots of reading still, to look forward to. :-)
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Re lov loved Bulma\'s hurt and anger-filled thoughts about stupid aliens, both the married and the insanely questful variety, (but mainly the insanely questful one) :-D
You keep her beautifully in character, I really could hear and see her saying these things and acting in such a manner. Really loveis pis part at the end of her rant...
\"Wondered if the asshole was already back in the GR.\"
\"Probably.\"
\"Not that she cared one damn bit.\"
LOL! She\'s so Vegeta, she cares, but damned if she\'s going to display that fact anytime soon. :-)
Loved Vegeta\'s thoughts when he noticed that the GR was back on. Love how he gave a mental wince at the \'clear cut message\' which was followed by a mental shrug. Signifying that he wasn\'t going to let \'the woman\' or anyone else come between him and his quest for Super Saiyandom.
Definitely somewhat single-minded at this point. Loved this:
\"In fact, if not for the fact that the large idiot was intolerably loud and the woman was too he probably would never have noticed he had a son until it had come up to him and asked him to train it.\"
LOL! Very funny. :-D (I know that you know, that I would defend to the death that Vegeta and Trunks had a wonderful father/son relationship after that first year, and I also know that you think he was a good father too. But yeah, in the initial stages...) That\'s what makes this so funny, Vegeta to a \'tee\' at this point in his life, coupled with Vegeta sarcasm. Quality stuff :-)
Love Vegeta\'s thoughts on Bulma just before he uses the GR. Totally love the fact that he tries to justify to himself what he said to her, was not what she implied, that he was just using \'proper English\' LOL! Typical male, never admit that they fucked up, it\'s always \'the woman overreacted\' :-D
\"feltfelt very calm. Reached forward and jabbed his bad shoulder with one finger. Watched him wince, and then raised her eyebrows and said: “I don’t know, Vegeta. I am just a dumb woman after all.”\"
LOL! Yeah! Gotta love Bulma. This is why they are so good together. Brave, she doesn\'t take any of his shit, and she\'s very loyal and caring...and I\'m getting all mushy now, so I\'ll quit while I\'m ahead. :-)
Love the \'frozen peas\' scene, so normal, so everydayish, that it adds to the reality of this story. :-)
Oh, I totally loved Bulma\'s thoughts as she tended to Vegeta, the way she sympathized with him, and I loved the way he kept looking at her, as if he was seeing her for the first time. Totally loved the way they slowly shifted from almost friendly little jabs at each other into Bulma shifting into flirst mode, and Vegeta ultimately responding to it...loved this:
\"There was a smirk on his face, a real expression bes tes that stony non-expression, and he said: “Some things.”\"
Hate that you ended it there...love that I only have to wait one day. :-)
More! Love this!
Loved the end dialogue :-D
I\'m glad that you\'re enjoying writing this, and it definitely shows...this is wonderful stuff. You know me, I pretty much stopped reading B/V\'s \'cause they were so boring, predictable or just plain annoying. I now only read a select few. This one, is the best I have ever read when it comes to them getting together, and you have them so wonderfully in character. :-)
Poor Goku, you\'re just going to have to give him more nookie in one of your other fics. *evil grin* Poor Vegeta is going to be one sore puppy ais ris rate :-D
Glad that it\'s only tension headaches rather than something else (touchwood) but, tension headaches can be scream-worthy stuff. Totally sympathise...literally :-)
\"*In minds eye, sees Getarian shoving Goku in front of the line and taking momentary triumph in delaying her turn.*\"
LOL! Yeah, the bastard used instant transmission at one point, but when he vanished, I took a few hasty backward steps and he still ended up in front of me...he was not happy :-D
You keep her beautifully in character, I really could hear and see her saying these things and acting in such a manner. Really loveis pis part at the end of her rant...
\"Wondered if the asshole was already back in the GR.\"
\"Probably.\"
\"Not that she cared one damn bit.\"
LOL! She\'s so Vegeta, she cares, but damned if she\'s going to display that fact anytime soon. :-)
Loved Vegeta\'s thoughts when he noticed that the GR was back on. Love how he gave a mental wince at the \'clear cut message\' which was followed by a mental shrug. Signifying that he wasn\'t going to let \'the woman\' or anyone else come between him and his quest for Super Saiyandom.
Definitely somewhat single-minded at this point. Loved this:
\"In fact, if not for the fact that the large idiot was intolerably loud and the woman was too he probably would never have noticed he had a son until it had come up to him and asked him to train it.\"
LOL! Very funny. :-D (I know that you know, that I would defend to the death that Vegeta and Trunks had a wonderful father/son relationship after that first year, and I also know that you think he was a good father too. But yeah, in the initial stages...) That\'s what makes this so funny, Vegeta to a \'tee\' at this point in his life, coupled with Vegeta sarcasm. Quality stuff :-)
Love Vegeta\'s thoughts on Bulma just before he uses the GR. Totally love the fact that he tries to justify to himself what he said to her, was not what she implied, that he was just using \'proper English\' LOL! Typical male, never admit that they fucked up, it\'s always \'the woman overreacted\' :-D
\"feltfelt very calm. Reached forward and jabbed his bad shoulder with one finger. Watched him wince, and then raised her eyebrows and said: “I don’t know, Vegeta. I am just a dumb woman after all.”\"
LOL! Yeah! Gotta love Bulma. This is why they are so good together. Brave, she doesn\'t take any of his shit, and she\'s very loyal and caring...and I\'m getting all mushy now, so I\'ll quit while I\'m ahead. :-)
Love the \'frozen peas\' scene, so normal, so everydayish, that it adds to the reality of this story. :-)
Oh, I totally loved Bulma\'s thoughts as she tended to Vegeta, the way she sympathized with him, and I loved the way he kept looking at her, as if he was seeing her for the first time. Totally loved the way they slowly shifted from almost friendly little jabs at each other into Bulma shifting into flirst mode, and Vegeta ultimately responding to it...loved this:
\"There was a smirk on his face, a real expression bes tes that stony non-expression, and he said: “Some things.”\"
Hate that you ended it there...love that I only have to wait one day. :-)
More! Love this!
Loved the end dialogue :-D
I\'m glad that you\'re enjoying writing this, and it definitely shows...this is wonderful stuff. You know me, I pretty much stopped reading B/V\'s \'cause they were so boring, predictable or just plain annoying. I now only read a select few. This one, is the best I have ever read when it comes to them getting together, and you have them so wonderfully in character. :-)
Poor Goku, you\'re just going to have to give him more nookie in one of your other fics. *evil grin* Poor Vegeta is going to be one sore puppy ais ris rate :-D
Glad that it\'s only tension headaches rather than something else (touchwood) but, tension headaches can be scream-worthy stuff. Totally sympathise...literally :-)
\"*In minds eye, sees Getarian shoving Goku in front of the line and taking momentary triumph in delaying her turn.*\"
LOL! Yeah, the bastard used instant transmission at one point, but when he vanished, I took a few hasty backward steps and he still ended up in front of me...he was not happy :-D
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Banging! I know what was I thinking! Yay for Lemon Action! I am really digging Bulma in this fic. Well, I usually always like Bulma. I can see how she and Veggie ended up together. but I do miss Goku just a little, not that I think that he and Geta should get together in this fic. Because this one ofcourse is all about the hete...OMG! I can\'t believe I just typed that!