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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My bad...
\"...loved Vegeta\'s thoughts as he slowly moved his hands up Bilma\'s sides,\"
Oh Dammut! I know her name\'s not Bilma, ut\'s jist that the \'I\' is next to the \'U\' on the sully keyboard. :-D
\"...loved Vegeta\'s thoughts as he slowly moved his hands up Bilma\'s sides,\"
Oh Dammut! I know her name\'s not Bilma, ut\'s jist that the \'I\' is next to the \'U\' on the sully keyboard. :-D
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice how Bulma and Vegeta are both realizing how much power they have over each other.
she was good with the foreplay but he was better with the sex - Ah yes, the Vegeta ego we know and love.
Of course, her parents might be a bit disturbed by this method. But she was sure she would like the results.
I can just see Bulma deliberately moaning his name to get him to do what she wants. And Vegeta smirking because he knows exactly what she\'s doing.
Oh look - Card reviewed one of my stories! (Food Fetish)
she was good with the foreplay but he was better with the sex - Ah yes, the Vegeta ego we know and love.
Of course, her parents might be a bit disturbed by this method. But she was sure she would like the results.
I can just see Bulma deliberately moaning his name to get him to do what she wants. And Vegeta smirking because he knows exactly what she\'s doing.
Oh look - Card reviewed one of my stories! (Food Fetish)
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A nice little chappie. Lacking in the bagging department, but nice. Soooo....hmmm....will there be banging in the next chappie?
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved Bulma\'s thoughts on, ChiChi\'s high-strung bitching, Bulma\'s hope that Goku\'s return involves a conjugal visit for her friend, Chi Chi\'s obsession\'s about education, and the frustrations involved with being married to Goku. You really do portray Bulma, very well :-)
\"...(promptly as in he waited for her to fall asleep and then left while she wasn’t looking.)\"
LOL! Also love her thoughts about her wayward lover. Can just imagine him lying there willing her to go to sleep, so he can take off into the night. :-D
\"She said “Thanks Chichi, I promise I’ll send him straight home after he fixes this bent…thing for me.” She tried to remember what the excuse was why she wanted to see Goku.\"
ROTFL! Oh Gods, I loved this! If ChiChi was a bit sharper on the update, she\'d be having some pretty strong suspicions about these two by now...she\'d be wrong, but it still would be a fair enough misconception. :-)
\"He looked sheepish (as sheepish as a Saiyan could while their eyes were glued to your breasts)\"
ROTFL! Simply loved this! Oh, and btw, I love that that you used the image that I had of him in this, I certainly don\'t mind at all :-)
Love the way Bulma crosses her arms across her chest, to get Goku to pay more attention to what she is saying...you know, I always thought it was an action she picked up off of Vegeta, but now we know the reason why. ;-)
\"...Wasn’t that just PEACHY?! Now she was a single mom living in a post-apocalyptic world. Great!\"
Really love her sarcasm, she\'s such a good match for Vegeta. I totally loved the way Goku responded after she asked him what happens between her and Vegeta...
“Well, didn’t Piccolo already tell you, Bulma? You were there. Vegeta dies in,” he paused here to think for a few seconds, “Two years.”
LOL! Not exactly grief-counsellor material is he? :-D
Loved Bulma\'s insight into how Vegeta might react to knowing that the mysterious Super Saiyan , is in fact his own half-breed son. Particularly loved her loss of patience with Goku...
\"...She was so sure that was going to make him feel tons and bet better. “Oh, go home to Chichi,”\"
LOL! Not exactly Goku\'s fault that she\'s pregnant, but love the fact that she\'s experiencing a pre-emptive mood swing anyway :-D
\"She couldn’t be someone’s mother. She couldn’t even take care of her shoe collection.\"
ROTFL! Oh Gods, this chapter is very funny. You do the best Bulma I\'ve ever seen. :-D
Ahh, I totally loved the way Vegeta reacted to the information that he overheard. Your entire description of him and his thoughts were beautifully done, could easily imagine that this is how he actually took the news in the show. Loved this:
\"He briefly wondered if it would be okay for him to hyperventilate if nobody was around to see it happen. Because, technically, if no one ever saw it, it didn’t happen.\"
*chuckles* Vegeta logic! Love it. :-)
Totally cracked up at this:
\"Felt the need to have a little talk with his nether parts about how they were not supposed to just randomly assist in producing drendren without his expressed permission.\"
This nearly brought tears to my eyes, you don\'t even want to know the mental picture I got from this :-D
\"Thought back fondly to his brief intention to hyperventilate. That was a good plan.\"
LOL! God I love the way you describe Vegeta and his thoughts. :-)
\"Would be prepared as soon as he got the woman—should he call her that now that she was carrying his son around?—to fix the damn GR so he could go back to training.\"
Love the way that he broke into his own \'chest-thumping\' thoughts, to wonder if he should still be calling Bulma, \'woman\', before continuing on with his inner tirade.
Love Vegeta\'s thoughts re: mirai Trunks, and his sudden realisation that if his son could go Super Saiyan, then that trait is definitely in him as well. Happy thoughts :-)
Loved end end bit between Bulma and Vegeta, cause yeah, Vegeta definitely strikes me as the jealous sort. Which would make him slightly insecure in the early stages.
This was a very enjoyable chapter. Looking forward to the next. :-)
Loved the end dialogue :-D
\"Sheesh, everyone who reads anything of mine should have realized that the chance this would stay just one chapter was slim to non-existent.\"
LOL! Yeah, I sort of had my hopes...but I didn\'t want to pressure you, you\'re writing so many other stories. But yeah, love that you are continuing this :-)
\"I get really bad headaches a lot too. (So much that I’m generally more disturbed when I don’t have one.)\"
Oh, that\'s not good. Maybe you should see a doctor? Could be you need reading glasses or something though, with all the writing you do?
\"Hope your head feels better.\"
Thanks. Actually, it\'s still there. Look at me, offering advice about doctors, but refusing to go myself...I\'m a bit like Goku in that sense. Can just see the two of us in line for an injection...pushing everyone else in front of us and then struggling with each other as we become the last two...LOL!
\"...(promptly as in he waited for her to fall asleep and then left while she wasn’t looking.)\"
LOL! Also love her thoughts about her wayward lover. Can just imagine him lying there willing her to go to sleep, so he can take off into the night. :-D
\"She said “Thanks Chichi, I promise I’ll send him straight home after he fixes this bent…thing for me.” She tried to remember what the excuse was why she wanted to see Goku.\"
ROTFL! Oh Gods, I loved this! If ChiChi was a bit sharper on the update, she\'d be having some pretty strong suspicions about these two by now...she\'d be wrong, but it still would be a fair enough misconception. :-)
\"He looked sheepish (as sheepish as a Saiyan could while their eyes were glued to your breasts)\"
ROTFL! Simply loved this! Oh, and btw, I love that that you used the image that I had of him in this, I certainly don\'t mind at all :-)
Love the way Bulma crosses her arms across her chest, to get Goku to pay more attention to what she is saying...you know, I always thought it was an action she picked up off of Vegeta, but now we know the reason why. ;-)
\"...Wasn’t that just PEACHY?! Now she was a single mom living in a post-apocalyptic world. Great!\"
Really love her sarcasm, she\'s such a good match for Vegeta. I totally loved the way Goku responded after she asked him what happens between her and Vegeta...
“Well, didn’t Piccolo already tell you, Bulma? You were there. Vegeta dies in,” he paused here to think for a few seconds, “Two years.”
LOL! Not exactly grief-counsellor material is he? :-D
Loved Bulma\'s insight into how Vegeta might react to knowing that the mysterious Super Saiyan , is in fact his own half-breed son. Particularly loved her loss of patience with Goku...
\"...She was so sure that was going to make him feel tons and bet better. “Oh, go home to Chichi,”\"
LOL! Not exactly Goku\'s fault that she\'s pregnant, but love the fact that she\'s experiencing a pre-emptive mood swing anyway :-D
\"She couldn’t be someone’s mother. She couldn’t even take care of her shoe collection.\"
ROTFL! Oh Gods, this chapter is very funny. You do the best Bulma I\'ve ever seen. :-D
Ahh, I totally loved the way Vegeta reacted to the information that he overheard. Your entire description of him and his thoughts were beautifully done, could easily imagine that this is how he actually took the news in the show. Loved this:
\"He briefly wondered if it would be okay for him to hyperventilate if nobody was around to see it happen. Because, technically, if no one ever saw it, it didn’t happen.\"
*chuckles* Vegeta logic! Love it. :-)
Totally cracked up at this:
\"Felt the need to have a little talk with his nether parts about how they were not supposed to just randomly assist in producing drendren without his expressed permission.\"
This nearly brought tears to my eyes, you don\'t even want to know the mental picture I got from this :-D
\"Thought back fondly to his brief intention to hyperventilate. That was a good plan.\"
LOL! God I love the way you describe Vegeta and his thoughts. :-)
\"Would be prepared as soon as he got the woman—should he call her that now that she was carrying his son around?—to fix the damn GR so he could go back to training.\"
Love the way that he broke into his own \'chest-thumping\' thoughts, to wonder if he should still be calling Bulma, \'woman\', before continuing on with his inner tirade.
Love Vegeta\'s thoughts re: mirai Trunks, and his sudden realisation that if his son could go Super Saiyan, then that trait is definitely in him as well. Happy thoughts :-)
Loved end end bit between Bulma and Vegeta, cause yeah, Vegeta definitely strikes me as the jealous sort. Which would make him slightly insecure in the early stages.
This was a very enjoyable chapter. Looking forward to the next. :-)
Loved the end dialogue :-D
\"Sheesh, everyone who reads anything of mine should have realized that the chance this would stay just one chapter was slim to non-existent.\"
LOL! Yeah, I sort of had my hopes...but I didn\'t want to pressure you, you\'re writing so many other stories. But yeah, love that you are continuing this :-)
\"I get really bad headaches a lot too. (So much that I’m generally more disturbed when I don’t have one.)\"
Oh, that\'s not good. Maybe you should see a doctor? Could be you need reading glasses or something though, with all the writing you do?
\"Hope your head feels better.\"
Thanks. Actually, it\'s still there. Look at me, offering advice about doctors, but refusing to go myself...I\'m a bit like Goku in that sense. Can just see the two of us in line for an injection...pushing everyone else in front of us and then struggling with each other as we become the last two...LOL!
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I am really looking forward to the next chapter!
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
don\'t leave it there. we want more. i like this story alot, please update soon.
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You update quickly. I like that in authors, especially when the dish out such high quality work. It\'s been awhile since I\'ve read a good BulmaxVegeta fic where both characters are \'in\' character. The way you write Bulma is something I can appreciate; she\'s a strong woman.
Kudos to you.
And Goku *sigh* He is quite the dummy isn\'t he? But a lovable one even if he does stares at people\'s boobs, lol. I wonder if he would do that to men as well? Some fat old bald man. Goku: \"Wow you have huge jubblies, can I touch them?...Hey why are you calling the cops?\" I know, I\'m sad and wrong, but well entertained. Great job!
Kudos to you.
And Goku *sigh* He is quite the dummy isn\'t he? But a lovable one even if he does stares at people\'s boobs, lol. I wonder if he would do that to men as well? Some fat old bald man. Goku: \"Wow you have huge jubblies, can I touch them?...Hey why are you calling the cops?\" I know, I\'m sad and wrong, but well entertained. Great job!
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More mayhem! Great writing. Great sex. More I beg...more!
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Besides the half-breed, and why hadn’t it occurred to him then that Trunks could have been his child?)- O.O Oh yeah...Now I really feel stupid.
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent fic! I\'m a sucker for VegetaxBulma fics, even though I only write yaoi. *sigh*
I like how you\'ve given Bulma a nice set of brass balls, perhaps she can clock Vegeta with them if hees hes her any lip.
You\'re too damn good, I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
Bravo!
I like how you\'ve given Bulma a nice set of brass balls, perhaps she can clock Vegeta with them if hees hes her any lip.
You\'re too damn good, I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
Bravo!