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I think it is funny how you have Bulma pitying Chichi for being married to Goku. He tends to be way too clueless for words - and their wedding night had to be scary. \'No Goku, you put this in here, good, now quit scratching the back of your head and move damn it!\' I\'ve got a love-hate relationship with him, a gro growing regard for Chichi. It has to be tough, after all - and he hasn\'t even committed his seven year vanishing act yet. Poor Vegeta - he wants to hyperventilate and can\'t. Yeah, Bulma and Vegeta were the closest to a believable couple in the show.

Card darling - I\'m not making fun of you! Just teasing a bit because I\'m jealous. You have such an amazing talent that can turn any one shot idea into a wonderful fic with a detailed and tight plot. And I Gok Goku\'s 8 ball message holds true. I wrote a Chichi/Goku interlude... and after all this time it still gives me nightmares. I just don\'t like Chichi in ANY sexual situation - well at least one that dosen\'t include Pixesgoddess\' Rezu.

Ha! I knew you couldn\'t resist a challenge. Anyway, I find it interesting that you think that Vegeta is a \"Breast Boy\". Hmm...I always figured him for an \"Ass Man\" myself. Hmm...interesting. It is good that not every writer has the same theories about every thing. It make fan fic that much more fun to read.

Very pleased to see another chapter up. :-)

You\'ll have to forgive my rather crappy reviews this night, but I\'ve been fighting a three day old headache, which has only had breaks as long as the panadol allowed and now my eyes are beginning to ache, and my thought processes are a bit frayed.

But I really wanted to review this as well as your others, because I love your stuff so much.

I really loved the idea that Vegeta stayed up and watched Bulma sleeping after they coupled. The image was so wonderfully presented. I also loved Vegeta\'s thoughts as he realised that he was not going to be able to walk away from this, untouched by it all.

Unbelievable, I don\'t know how you do it, but I found the shower scene with Vegeta to be very erotic...and he was masturbating, but in the most sensual manner possible...incredible :-)

Loved Bulma\'s thoughts as she realised that Vegeta a bra breast man. Gotta love manipulative Bulma :-)

Enjoyed her thoughts about Goku staring at her breasts and he didn\'t even realise he was doing it. Loved the image I got of Goku grinning, scratching the of of his head and staring point blank at her breasts...LOL!

Truly loved the lemon! I deeply love the way you have these two interacting with each other. I would have loved to have seen this on the show. Considering that this side to them was never shown, you have extrapolated the whey hey would possibly be with each other, very well in my opinion.

Loved this alot! Definitely hoping for more :-)

Really enjoyed the end disalogue :-)

*snicker* Is your drabble fic going to stay a one shot? I could have sworn you said this one was a one shot... Oh, and for the record you have NO problem exchanging het for yaoi in the quality of your lemons. Nope none at all... Tomorrow is Monday... I wonder if I\'ll survive the long hours until your update - or IF you will be updating this one tomorrow?

Vegeta. He who kills first, kills more and then after everyone was dust decides that no questions needed to be asked.

That is a classic, perfect line and I love it.

I\'m not a fan of het myself, but damn, this was good. I never cease to be amazed at how much you can keep everyone so much in character. (And I promise to review more of your work - you write so much it is overwhelming, but I haven\'t read a thing of yours I don\'t like.)

omg, that was incredible. please write more.i\'m hooked, it is getting very hot in this room. hope u update soon.

Hah - Knew you couldn\'t resist. Sure, go ahead - turn me into a Vegeta/Bulma believer...I\'ll let you.

Well done and you are gonna write more.

Mmmmm ... don\'t think you have any problems with het. lemons. That was terrific! If you did decide to do a Bulma/Vegeta fic with a plot, I would definitely read it. So anyway, that was fun, thank you.