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September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It was frightening and very strange. And extremely violent. The story was very descriptive, well written. I didn\'t read the rest. I literally had nightmares. Continue?
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June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please Please PLaese finIsh thIs! I\'ve readyour other story and both this one and the other are good! Both of them are incomplete. I hope you finish this one quicker bcause u had this 1 out longer and so you can have more time to think ofbetta chapters for PLs.
Tanasha.
PS Love yworkwork ;p
Tanasha.
PS Love yworkwork ;p
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February 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow...The second chapter is really good especially because of the drowning part! Keep on writing! P.S thank u for not kil lac lace that was a close one. :)
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February 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I realy love the story.. The first chapter reminds me of a long time ago but i took a deep breath and i read it.....
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February 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, really bloody. This looks like it could be a real great story. It's refreshing to see something different, too, all I ever see if Goku crap. Well, I'm definitely looking forward to your next chapter! Take as much time as you need to though, sometimes rushing things is a mistake. You could end up having a great idea and then you already posted it.
Keep up the great job! ^_~
Keep up the great job! ^_~
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February 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was dark. And it was only a flashback too....... I wonder what happened to Bulma and Lacr evr even that bastard of a father.
Please continue this fic, I just need to read more!
Please continue this fic, I just need to read more!
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February 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
its really good especially because its different write second part u left me hanging at the end!