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for The Conception of Goten?

by Bardockgurl

person Anon
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just had to pop in and praise you for such a well written lemon! It\'s so refreshing to find an NC-17 story that isn\'t written in a trashy sort of way.
Keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just wrote the above review.
I forgot to mention that I love how Chi Chi reacts to his SuperSayajin form. She seems to love Goku for who he truly is. Also, if I remember correctly, she wasn\'t too happy when Goten revealed to her during a sparring session that he was able to become SSJ. I suppose she senses more than just a physical change when they go SSJ (which also backs up the comment made about Chi Chi\'s love for Goku)

Thanks Again and I hope you continue your story.
person CWolf
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was really hot. It was well writen as well, good work.
person AphroditeMe
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
L it! it! Although you should do one were Super Saiyan Goku and Chi-Chi do that. . . I\'d love to see a fic like that.

Very, very good job.
person Sageling
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! Just wanted to tell you... great story! Are you planning any others ^_^
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That\'s a nice lemon, you really think she hates his supersayin form? I really love a good Goku/Chichi lemon, if it\'s done romantic, and you sure succeeded in making one ;)
I\'m making a G/CC lemon too right now, don\'t know if you read it already...
person Nekoyoukai
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh thats not fair!! hurry yup with the next chapter or what ever! e-mail me when it\'s up!

-love always,
Nekoyoukai-

person LC
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O______O

oh please PLEASE tell me there will be a SECOND chapter to this!!! *SQUEE* GAH now I must have chocolate cake. I also agree with you about it being hNOT NOT to go into that happy place in the mind when it comes to adult male saiyajins......*drools*

Anyway, good story and WRITE A SECOND CHAPPIE!!!!!!!!! ^_______^
person AnimeFetish19
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jeez, that was kinda short, but better writen then a lot of stories I\'ve read. Good job!!

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