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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its kissing not killing
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh face it you know your a wonder at writing these fantastic stories. I must say though you have made pan and trunks\' Attitudes very differnt from many other stories I have read. I love your work and I want to thank you for e-mailing me the link to the rest of the story, I also incourage you to continue your works of writing For I feel it would be a great loss to amny if you stopped.
Ashes
Ashes
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Just stopping in to do another review after a read a bit more on your story. I love the way you made pants Natural saiyajin/saiyan instincts come out. She really did a number on marron, Which she deserved. It would be kind of nice for Trunks to get a bit of what he deserves, Once again skillful writing I love this story and I cant wait for you to post up what happens next. Thank you for your time
Ashes
Ashes
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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update...it\'s been forever.
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January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Out of mannerism I write this review in gratitude for stories such as yours that are available. You have amazing talent in capturing a lot of aspects when it comes to writting and I only hope you continue on with not just this story but many others. I have to admit I\'m a big fan of your stories and I just wanted to make you feel special for the two little seconds it takes to read this but its two seconds added to the rest of the reviews. *smiles*
-Jessica \"Ichigo\"
-Jessica \"Ichigo\"
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December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update....love it so far...thanks!
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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Well, I rea both of the chapters and they were pretty good. Keep writing!
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey nice story so far but isnt pan supposed to be pregnat u havent even mentioned it yet in the past chapters but anyway keep up the goos wotrk and update soon
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story keeps getting better and better, good jog Marron (I) got what she what coming to her. You know you are good at what you do and you are specal to me because of your ablity to present yourself creativly.
*AnimeMonkey19*
*AnimeMonkey19*
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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Pan is evil ^-^ I like this new development. Please update soon I am dying to know what happens next!