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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! lol. Update soon. :X [Pan's worse the Vegeta, for goodness sake!]
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September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG Trunks is such an freken ass in your story , I almost hate him lol , GREAT WORK and keep on writting!! ^.^
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September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Goten finally got the best of Trunks!! I'm soooo happy!! Oh I can't wait to see what Pan has in store for Marron and Trunks. And what are the parents going to think of of this all out war? Please update soon and great job!!!!!
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September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! i have to know what pan does!!!! lol at goten and trunks, i hope trunks gets his just deserts!!!
plz hurry with the next chapter!!!
plz hurry with the next chapter!!!
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September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!!!!!! BUT UPDATE SOON OF I WILL KILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have done it before (I'm in the military) I'M NOT HESITANT TO DO IT AGAIN!!!!!!!!! But great story. And that wole Pan being pregnant thing isn't as common as everynoe thinks. This is on of the first stories I've read that pan becomes pgenant while hardly even dating trunks. BUT UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OR YOUR DEATH WILL COME SOONER THAN WRITTEN
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW THAT CHAPTER WAS NICE I CANT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT ONE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! you made trunks so horriable in thins chapter, oh well I loved it anyway. Umm when is Pan gonna tell trunks that she's pragnet?
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September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow i expected that, yet didnt.....Poor pan and Trunks does seem like an arsehole lol
well done
and marron she got her just deserts!!!!!!!
well done
and marron she got her just deserts!!!!!!!
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September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you forgot to add the next chapter to this site 'its over between you and me' Its on fanfiction.net. Its a good chap. Marron gets a surprise.
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September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?