schedule
August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. A few mistypes, but no big. Can you please please email me when it's updated?
schedule
August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I Love this fic, I just read it and I think it's great. I really don't like to review but I did anyways. I like Maron and all but I hope there is a little Maron bashing a least!
schedule
August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really enjoy this fic. I was waiting for you to update. The last few chapters have been just dandy! Keep up the good work. I want to hear an ending to this fic. (I mean I don't want it to end, I just want something to happen so I can keep reading.) I also love that you name everything after songs. Creative. I love all the bands. Write more please. I'm dying to hear the rest.
schedule
August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
schedule
July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was kool u gota update more
schedule
July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i would love to read more! So please continue! * do you think you could e-mail me to let me know when you have new chapters up?*
schedule
July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey I love the story so far, there are so many stories out there about how trunks and pan hate each other and then love but I cant get enough of them i love these sorts of stories and was wondering if you could email me when you update because unlike fanfiction.net, adultfanfiction.net doesn\'t have author alerts.
Thanks!
~ Deceptive_Innocence ~
Thanks!
~ Deceptive_Innocence ~
schedule
July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story there are some spots that need some work but that is another story
i hope that you keep up withthe story because i will be checking evryday for adatedate
thankyou and keep writing
i hope that you keep up withthe story because i will be checking evryday for adatedate
thankyou and keep writing
schedule
July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. It\'s not too often that you read a DragonBall Z story that is lemony and funny at the same time. I laughed out loud during the first few chapters. Please update again soon and keep up the fantasic work!!
schedule
May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
he is very much out of character