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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Trunks is a sorry ass bitch. Pan is sounding really dumb in this fic. When they get out Pan should beat the shit out him!p wrp writing! :-)
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i luv this story and i cant wait t\' read more. i juss there\'s a happy ending. dussnt have t\' be: and now there in luv.en ten tho those r nice) juss trunks stops being a jackass, or pan realizes the truth and leaves him or sumthin. i hate it wen the girls juss sittin\' in her room cryin\' ova the guy; makes me wanna slap them both.
rose-chan >:3~
rose-chan >:3~
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was really good i wnna no want hapens when pans finds out what trunks did lol
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really loving this story... You just have to update more often. I check my regulars every day sometimes more then once a day to see if they are updated. This is one of them. Please update really soon.
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I been waitin\'. Finally chapter 8! Anyway, this is a good story but Trunks is pissin\' me off. I think when they get out, Pan should train nonstop, turn super saiyan...uh..i don\'t know..4! Then beat the shit outta Trunks and prove he don\'t own her!........ Just a thought.
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
COOL MAN I LIKE IT YOU DID A GREAt job update soon man!!!!!!!!
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April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was really good ive havnt accually read ne fing about trunks and pan but yea its good
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy Fucking Shite, te, that was an AWESOME story/lemon!!!!! Please do consider writing more !!!!!!!!!! Specially LEMONS!!!!!!!!!!
Belive me , I\'ve read lemons\' before , but this has to be the best of all!!!!!!!!
Belive me , I\'ve read lemons\' before , but this has to be the best of all!!!!!!!!
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good, good, good, good! I really like your story. As I think I already told you on AIM. Anyway! I can\'t wait till the last few chapters come out! I mean Bulma had to know what would happen between them sooner or later right?
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First fic I read featuring this pairing. I like it, the concept and interaction more than the lemon to tell you the truth, you\'re doing a great job, but I don\'t understand why wouldn\'t you want to have people give you advice? You should re-read your typing if you have no beta, fix it as much as you can before you post. A great fic can be easily ruined by grammar and misspellings. I\'m no expert but that is my humble opinion, take it as you like. Anyways I am looking forward the to the next chapter...keep up the goor work^^