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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoo-hooo..that was 7 good chapter. Can\'t wait for the next one.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god your awsome! I love this. I soooo cant wait for your next fanfic. I hope its another of Pan and Truncks. I give you a 20 out of 10!!! you have to email me at DeadlyTemper666@netscape.com Or my AIM sn is Deadly Temper666. I love your work e-mail me!!! -Love always, Nekoyoukai-
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ewww that gave me goose bumps, god i dream of being ravaged by my bf like that all the time, hey maybe if i tell him to read it i\'ll be as happi as those two. good job keep it up!
Lilly
Lilly
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GOOOOODDAMN that was a good lemon. **whipes forehead** it got really hot up in there, and boy oh boy did I love it. lol
I can\'t wait for that next chapter to come out. I know it\'s going to be smokin.
I can\'t wait for that next chapter to come out. I know it\'s going to be smokin.
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice song, nice fic. yay the steamy lems r up, and it looks like there r gonna b more. good! *^___^= keep it comein\'. post more soon plz! (by the way r they always gonna hate eachother, or is it gonna be love/hate?)
ryoko-chan
ryoko-chan
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story was good, but I think you should have moved Pan\'s age up a bit. When you make you next story make it about Bra somehow finding out what happened