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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chi-Chi and Trunks are spiders... I HATE SPIDERS! I catch em and feed them to my fish for some extra nuterants *laughs evily and watches little spider swim for cover as a big fish swims toward surface*
Ok serously though I do love this, was wondering when Goten was going to show up, can\'t have one without the other. Poor Bulma though, and evil Gohan didn\'t see that comming :D
It\'s good to read and take a break, been working on my new website. Just got an archive script working for it. Anyone that reads this feel free to test it for me, it\'s at www.darksaiyan.com/eFiction/index.php Ok I\'ll stop advertising now before I get hit with something large andvey.vey.
Can\'t wait to read the next part.
-Hudine-
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Ok serously though I do love this, was wondering when Goten was going to show up, can\'t have one without the other. Poor Bulma though, and evil Gohan didn\'t see that comming :D
It\'s good to read and take a break, been working on my new website. Just got an archive script working for it. Anyone that reads this feel free to test it for me, it\'s at www.darksaiyan.com/eFiction/index.php Ok I\'ll stop advertising now before I get hit with something large andvey.vey.
Can\'t wait to read the next part.
-Hudine-
www.darksaiyan.com
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love this story. Very original. God that sounds like a very lame review :D
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Goten is awesome. It\'s a toss up between him and Trunks now. So is it Goten Can\'t touch, or Won\'t touch anybody? It\'s going to be very difficult to write lemons with him in them if he Can\'t touch.
Ah, the exploding Gohan. That was a shocker, and then to find out that it hadn\'t really happened was even more of a shocker.
I liked the \'Washing\' technich. Interesting.
Ah, the exploding Gohan. That was a shocker, and then to find out that it hadn\'t really happened was even more of a shocker.
I liked the \'Washing\' technich. Interesting.
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*(in very high pitched, hyperactive voice) YAY- GOHAN WENT BOOOOOOOM OOM Organ explody!
Goten equivilent is very cool (as was Bulma, almost, but she\'s dead), but can Krillin die soon (he\'s slightly annoying, though nowhere near as bad in the show- why is he there, he does nuffing at all, except die) Will anyones organs (like brains or lungs) be yanked out and used as bag pipes? >:)
won\'t the \'ploding hurt?!
Goten equivilent is very cool (as was Bulma, almost, but she\'s dead), but can Krillin die soon (he\'s slightly annoying, though nowhere near as bad in the show- why is he there, he does nuffing at all, except die) Will anyones organs (like brains or lungs) be yanked out and used as bag pipes? >:)
won\'t the \'ploding hurt?!
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*(in very high pitched, hyperactive voice) YAY- GOHAN WENT BOOOOOOOOOOOM Organ explody!
Goten equivilent is very cool (as was Bulma, almost, but she\'s dead), but can Krillin die soon (he\'s slightly annoying, though nowhere near as bad in the show- why is he there, he does nuffing at all, except die) Will anyones organs (like brains or lungs) be yanked out and used as bag pipes? >:)
won\'t the \'ploding hurt?!
Goten equivilent is very cool (as was Bulma, almost, but she\'s dead), but can Krillin die soon (he\'s slightly annoying, though nowhere near as bad in the show- why is he there, he does nuffing at all, except die) Will anyones organs (like brains or lungs) be yanked out and used as bag pipes? >:)
won\'t the \'ploding hurt?!
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, Goten is here and he kicks so much ass. *Sigh* I suppose I\'ll have to deliver \'something\' now. Next, chapter...wI exI explain the ChiChi/Goku incident. And I have a big surprise in store...I can\'t wait to shock you all...you know how I love it!
Hey, you didn\'t say what Gohan was mixed with and now he dead...well of course that is a good thing...but hey...they took Bulma\'s body! Bastards!
Oh and Trunks is still kick ass. Chichi? Hmm...interesting couple
Hey, you didn\'t say what Gohan was mixed with and now he dead...well of course that is a good thing...but hey...they took Bulma\'s body! Bastards!
Oh and Trunks is still kick ass. Chichi? Hmm...interesting couple
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*falls off the chair* You have started yet ANOTHER story?!?! When?!? Why didn\'t I notice?! ............wow......O_o
I know this is my first review but I\'ve been peeking on your stories for a quite some time. They all are amaizing and even more so considering the speed I\'ve seen you type them. I also love the way you descripe things and those funny notes....they aren\'t just funny....they are hilarious. :) \'Will reviewe again when I\'m finished catching up on this one, so keep it up and thank you for all these stories.
I know this is my first review but I\'ve been peeking on your stories for a quite some time. They all are amaizing and even more so considering the speed I\'ve seen you type them. I also love the way you descripe things and those funny notes....they aren\'t just funny....they are hilarious. :) \'Will reviewe again when I\'m finished catching up on this one, so keep it up and thank you for all these stories.
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Things that have been tickling my thoughts...
Back when Bardock \'rescued\' Goku from Frieza - he was humming. After the fire started in the engine room and we see Goku - he is alone, seemingly out of it and humming.
While on the ship (and even earlier) those \'thoughts\' were present, at least in Goku and Vegeta\'s mind before anyone else felt them. I had thought that perhaps something within Goku was what was \'ing ing and ticking\' - until they left the ship and seemingly left those thoughts behind as well.
The something that is giving off the thoughts also seems to be responsible for the intensity of what Vegeta was experiencing.
...so many odd things....
Back when Bardock \'rescued\' Goku from Frieza - he was humming. After the fire started in the engine room and we see Goku - he is alone, seemingly out of it and humming.
While on the ship (and even earlier) those \'thoughts\' were present, at least in Goku and Vegeta\'s mind before anyone else felt them. I had thought that perhaps something within Goku was what was \'ing ing and ticking\' - until they left the ship and seemingly left those thoughts behind as well.
The something that is giving off the thoughts also seems to be responsible for the intensity of what Vegeta was experiencing.
...so many odd things....
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAAAAAAAAAAA....No, no, no! Bulma\'s dead! Why! I loved her...she was so cool. I got a little teary eyed there and my roommate was looking at me like I was crazy. *Sigh* I really don\'t know what to make of it. Anyway...I\'m a bit depressed now...
Now on to the matter of Trunks\' coolness (he is amazingly cool, *Sighs*) ...Gohan\'s betrayal (I really hate him in this fic now, he killed Bulma...well not really, but he did...sort of...) and where the hell is Goten!
I suppose I deserve to wait, I\'m making you guys wait with THOK. Hmm...How many more chapter should I write with Goku and Vegeta not getting together...MUHAHAHAHAAAA!
Now on to the matter of Trunks\' coolness (he is amazingly cool, *Sighs*) ...Gohan\'s betrayal (I really hate him in this fic now, he killed Bulma...well not really, but he did...sort of...) and where the hell is Goten!
I suppose I deserve to wait, I\'m making you guys wait with THOK. Hmm...How many more chapter should I write with Goku and Vegeta not getting together...MUHAHAHAHAAAA!
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I am sad now. Bulma\'s dead. No, really, I am. I liked her as a very vain cat, the personality suited her well. At least she didn\'t go back on her promise to herself.
I wanted to see Gohan dead after what he did. Stupid f*@?er, thinking he could come back and no one would know what he had done? I guess they really do need what ever kind of information he might have, so best no to kill him right away.
I liked it when Chi Chi said, \"He killed our kitten.\" That\'s mos most affectionate she\'s been yet. Did I really read what I thought I read when it looked as though Chi Chi might be interested in Trunks?
You did a very good job of discribing what Trunks did to Gohan\'s hand. It was very graphic and detailed, and I liked it.
Can\'t wait for the blood letting. That is what you said wasn\'t it, that there was going to be blood next chapter? Blood is a very poor substitue for lemons, but this story is good enough to read for a couple of chapters without lemons.
I wanted to see Gohan dead after what he did. Stupid f*@?er, thinking he could come back and no one would know what he had done? I guess they really do need what ever kind of information he might have, so best no to kill him right away.
I liked it when Chi Chi said, \"He killed our kitten.\" That\'s mos most affectionate she\'s been yet. Did I really read what I thought I read when it looked as though Chi Chi might be interested in Trunks?
You did a very good job of discribing what Trunks did to Gohan\'s hand. It was very graphic and detailed, and I liked it.
Can\'t wait for the blood letting. That is what you said wasn\'t it, that there was going to be blood next chapter? Blood is a very poor substitue for lemons, but this story is good enough to read for a couple of chapters without lemons.