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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And we\'re back to the evil Gohan. His mom wasn\'t an Ice-jin was she? It would explaine the things; especially why he was helping kidnap Bulma. (I can’t believe you killed her. *pout*) He was actually trying to protect that thing on the ship wasn’t he? Are they gonna torture him? They’re gonna torture him aren’t they? You know how I like my dark Saiyans and they don’t get much darker than when they’re torturing somebody. *zones off with stars in her eyes*
“Perhaps we should placate her with some lemonade?” Where are you going to manage to squeeze lemons during this fic. I realize it’s set up, and I wouldn’t mind, but… *cursing your plot monster*
Sorry I wasn\'t able to review yesterday. I had to write a paper then go to sleep when it was done.
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“Perhaps we should placate her with some lemonade?” Where are you going to manage to squeeze lemons during this fic. I realize it’s set up, and I wouldn’t mind, but… *cursing your plot monster*
Sorry I wasn\'t able to review yesterday. I had to write a paper then go to sleep when it was done.
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So can Krillin tell they are upstahavihaving sex with his little mind reading ability?.........If I were him I would be abusing it right now, he already said he couldn\'t go back home :)
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very awesome chapter!
Bulma woke up the next morning to the smell of fire and meat and had to blink and grab her boobs—had the feeling that they were uncovered, and upon looking, found that she was correct in this thought--@_@ lmao!!!! Uh...that is an interesting start to a new day.
(yes, she had paws for feet, after all she was a fucking cat)--o.O rofl....I was wondering if she had any other cat-like body parts.
She stared down at Gohan who was smiling in his sleep and she kicked him in the stomach. He laughed then--*dies of laughter* Gohan is sooo bad!!!!!! Pretending to be sleep!!!!
It was gone. Vegeta didn’t want ell ell Goku that—not right away anyway—but the feeling that he had to touch something or someone or die was gone.
because Juro did not ‘outcast’ its people, but he could never return home because he believed himself to have committed crimes.--oh so he is choosing himself not to go back then...b/c he believes he committed crimes.
He had no ability, no special power level or half-breed abilities. No tail. No fucking muscles anymore. --oh no he is feeling inferior to these ppl and all of their different abilties. That is so sad. Now that he doesn\'t have the itching feeling propelling most of his thoughts he has really seeto cto come down on himself and how \'useless\' he thinks he is...oh but he isn\'t useless! *sobs* that is so sad.
And how the fuck did his father—the King—miss that Bardock was a psychotic bastard that was torturing his youngest son? --yes wouldnt we all like to know the answer to this and so many other questions like why doesn\'t Vegeta want to tell Goku the the feeling had subsided...what is the deal with that...?
“Do we have a plan or are we just supposed to sit here and wait for Bardock to try and kill us again?” Gohan asked. --lmao..smartass..hehe, I like Gohan in this fic.
“Yes,” Chichi said, curled her long fingers up and smirked just a little. “One of us lies.”--oh *gasp* oh no!!!!!! Someone is lying!!! Lying leads to very bad things!!!! That is why Trunks unsheathed his sword! Oh I know I said I love Chi in this fic..but I must say it again...she is so cool! I love how she talks...This fic rox so much!!!!!!
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Bulma woke up the next morning to the smell of fire and meat and had to blink and grab her boobs—had the feeling that they were uncovered, and upon looking, found that she was correct in this thought--@_@ lmao!!!! Uh...that is an interesting start to a new day.
(yes, she had paws for feet, after all she was a fucking cat)--o.O rofl....I was wondering if she had any other cat-like body parts.
She stared down at Gohan who was smiling in his sleep and she kicked him in the stomach. He laughed then--*dies of laughter* Gohan is sooo bad!!!!!! Pretending to be sleep!!!!
It was gone. Vegeta didn’t want ell ell Goku that—not right away anyway—but the feeling that he had to touch something or someone or die was gone.
because Juro did not ‘outcast’ its people, but he could never return home because he believed himself to have committed crimes.--oh so he is choosing himself not to go back then...b/c he believes he committed crimes.
He had no ability, no special power level or half-breed abilities. No tail. No fucking muscles anymore. --oh no he is feeling inferior to these ppl and all of their different abilties. That is so sad. Now that he doesn\'t have the itching feeling propelling most of his thoughts he has really seeto cto come down on himself and how \'useless\' he thinks he is...oh but he isn\'t useless! *sobs* that is so sad.
And how the fuck did his father—the King—miss that Bardock was a psychotic bastard that was torturing his youngest son? --yes wouldnt we all like to know the answer to this and so many other questions like why doesn\'t Vegeta want to tell Goku the the feeling had subsided...what is the deal with that...?
“Do we have a plan or are we just supposed to sit here and wait for Bardock to try and kill us again?” Gohan asked. --lmao..smartass..hehe, I like Gohan in this fic.
“Yes,” Chichi said, curled her long fingers up and smirked just a little. “One of us lies.”--oh *gasp* oh no!!!!!! Someone is lying!!! Lying leads to very bad things!!!! That is why Trunks unsheathed his sword! Oh I know I said I love Chi in this fic..but I must say it again...she is so cool! I love how she talks...This fic rox so much!!!!!!
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...you\'re teasing me...no fair! I am sort of sad that Vegeta\'s feeling is gone. Does this mean no more Goku/Geta intimacy. I think not. It will just be a lot better without the mindlessness anyway...Hmm...
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What, no finishing of the lemon you left us with? Ah well.
You are doing a great job in keeping everyone in the personality you have given them, Chi Chi\'s bitchiness, Bulma\'s vanity, so on and so forth.
Rubs hands in eagerness, \"who is it?\" (pertaining to the someone coming)
I guess I will just have to keep reading to find out who the liar is. Does the liar even know they are the liar?
You are doing a great job in keeping everyone in the personality you have given them, Chi Chi\'s bitchiness, Bulma\'s vanity, so on and so forth.
Rubs hands in eagerness, \"who is it?\" (pertaining to the someone coming)
I guess I will just have to keep reading to find out who the liar is. Does the liar even know they are the liar?
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! No more addiction for Vegeta!! No more thoughts!, or are there? The beginning with Bulma was funny, and also the part with her kicking Gohan. Well, duh, of course it\'s a cave, what\'d she expect, a palace full of servants. I loved the little trick Trunks did with the meat. Just makes him even cooler, and it makes me want to steal him all for myself even more. I wonder who\'s coming(there), who\'s lying? Of course, Bulma\'s gonna try and blame the spiders, and since they don\'t trust one another, everyone\'s going to blame the other for the most part. Oh, evil cliffies!! Love \'em, and hate \'em.
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
at first, I was going to ask who the sectond level was originally made for, but then I read your response to Jaygoose, and realized, \'Duh! You can\'t have Trunks in a story without Goten being there.\' Can\'t wait to see him. At least they got out of the ship in time, even if Krillen had to put Bulma and Gohan asleep. At least he isn\'t suffering anymore. And slowly Vegeta is regaining more of himself, thanks especially to Goku. Can\'t wait for more!!!
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yep, Ind bnd by my first reaction, Trunks is cool. I seem not to have the same prejudices as the people on the ship. Maybe if he had killed my own father in front of me I would feel like Gohan does, but that hasn\'t happened.
Yeah, a planet where they can all be \'okay\'. \"Hurry up people, get off of the f*****g ship.\" *thinks for a moment* Well, it may would be a good idea to find out what is in the engine room first or it may follow.
Well, DON\'T tell Bardock this, but overconfidence is one good way to end up dead. *Smirks* I\'m glad he feels the way he does.
As for the dialog afterward, looks at Goku, \"Hey, why IS he holding nothing?\" *hands him a tube of lube, points discretely at Vegeta* \"Well? Don\'t wait for the story. I am certain that at some point the story will catch up to you!\"
Yeah, a planet where they can all be \'okay\'. \"Hurry up people, get off of the f*****g ship.\" *thinks for a moment* Well, it may would be a good idea to find out what is in the engine room first or it may follow.
Well, DON\'T tell Bardock this, but overconfidence is one good way to end up dead. *Smirks* I\'m glad he feels the way he does.
As for the dialog afterward, looks at Goku, \"Hey, why IS he holding nothing?\" *hands him a tube of lube, points discretely at Vegeta* \"Well? Don\'t wait for the story. I am certain that at some point the story will catch up to you!\"
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am wondering about that room upstairs myself. Does it have something to do with Goten...oh please say it does. You got me hooked on all these characters with cool powers and I need to know what Goten can do...Okay so I don\'t need, but I would like very much...
Going to go write now. I love free time.
Going to go write now. I love free time.
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another very wonderful chapter,
He felt the bond on his hands snapping as a sort of deep irony that would kill him with laughter later on. Because they broke away, and he was free—bloody wrists and all—I am happy that he is free. Sad b/c they still have so much to go through...and Vegeas tas to deal with all of this. Just really loved that line and the symbolism of it.
“If that time comes,” Trunks red. -d. --he doesn\'t play around. I can understand the worries that Bulma has.
“I know that Bardock is evil. That Vegeta is the Prince. What else is relevant?”--sheesh this guy is cold...I like him..a lot! ^.~ But to say what else is relevent that carries a lot of weight. He is very determined...but I saw that a long time ago.
“You don’t just waltz in here say say you’re going to help us out and expect that we’re going to believe a murderer like you.”--I would believe just about anythif itf it was going to get me out of a wrecked ship.
“It’s the engine room,” Gohan said again, “It’s going to melt. I told you that. And now were fucked.”--Oh Gohan, get a grip! I mean it\'s not like it\'s going to blow up...or maybe it is! *scs* ss* someone save Vegeta!!!!! Why are they all even standing there talking to Trunks I would have been trying to figure a way to get myself off of that ship before it is too late.
Then he crossed the room—every single step a fight with himself to keep from grabbing the nearest warmth and giving into that urge to do as the drugs commanded. --*feels very bad for Geta* That would be so horrible and that is a struggle. That is a insanely hard struggle to deal with, and I would probago cgo crazy. Vegeta seems to be doing pretty good. I hope he continues to get better.
Raz—hez—he thought that was his name—*sobs for a few seconds* He killed Radditz!!!!
Shifting just a little, and his hand was near his mouth, hovering there. (Nervous reaction, Goku still stroked that scar on his leg when he didn’t pay attention.) --that was so sad. This is hard to deal with...freedom... I wonder if Vegeta realizes he is even doing that, or is he just concentrating on trying to be in control of himself and his mind. To know that it even effects you years lats its it has Goku who still rubs his leg is troubling, yet interesting. To know you never quite get over it...never forget really.
Except, did you know that Anne Rice didn’t want Tom to play Lestat? --yeah I did know that. I remember when he was interviewed on Oprah they talked about that and they kept asking him if him and Louis were supposed to be gay. It was funny...and yes Anne Rice wery ery wrong abdout Tom Cruise b/c when I read any of the Vampire Chronicle books is is exactly how I picture Lestat...
played FF10. (Almost, not finished with it.)--rofl...well I played that one and 10-2 but my fave would be 7 then 8 (love Zell) and I wasn\'t to fond of 9. I am actually not to fond of 10 or 10-2 either but they are pretty good. I alway sthought 7 had the best storyline. *sighs* I wish they would remake that one...have you ever played Kingdom Hearts? Squall is in that...but he changes his name to Leon.
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He felt the bond on his hands snapping as a sort of deep irony that would kill him with laughter later on. Because they broke away, and he was free—bloody wrists and all—I am happy that he is free. Sad b/c they still have so much to go through...and Vegeas tas to deal with all of this. Just really loved that line and the symbolism of it.
“If that time comes,” Trunks red. -d. --he doesn\'t play around. I can understand the worries that Bulma has.
“I know that Bardock is evil. That Vegeta is the Prince. What else is relevant?”--sheesh this guy is cold...I like him..a lot! ^.~ But to say what else is relevent that carries a lot of weight. He is very determined...but I saw that a long time ago.
“You don’t just waltz in here say say you’re going to help us out and expect that we’re going to believe a murderer like you.”--I would believe just about anythif itf it was going to get me out of a wrecked ship.
“It’s the engine room,” Gohan said again, “It’s going to melt. I told you that. And now were fucked.”--Oh Gohan, get a grip! I mean it\'s not like it\'s going to blow up...or maybe it is! *scs* ss* someone save Vegeta!!!!! Why are they all even standing there talking to Trunks I would have been trying to figure a way to get myself off of that ship before it is too late.
Then he crossed the room—every single step a fight with himself to keep from grabbing the nearest warmth and giving into that urge to do as the drugs commanded. --*feels very bad for Geta* That would be so horrible and that is a struggle. That is a insanely hard struggle to deal with, and I would probago cgo crazy. Vegeta seems to be doing pretty good. I hope he continues to get better.
Raz—hez—he thought that was his name—*sobs for a few seconds* He killed Radditz!!!!
Shifting just a little, and his hand was near his mouth, hovering there. (Nervous reaction, Goku still stroked that scar on his leg when he didn’t pay attention.) --that was so sad. This is hard to deal with...freedom... I wonder if Vegeta realizes he is even doing that, or is he just concentrating on trying to be in control of himself and his mind. To know that it even effects you years lats its it has Goku who still rubs his leg is troubling, yet interesting. To know you never quite get over it...never forget really.
Except, did you know that Anne Rice didn’t want Tom to play Lestat? --yeah I did know that. I remember when he was interviewed on Oprah they talked about that and they kept asking him if him and Louis were supposed to be gay. It was funny...and yes Anne Rice wery ery wrong abdout Tom Cruise b/c when I read any of the Vampire Chronicle books is is exactly how I picture Lestat...
played FF10. (Almost, not finished with it.)--rofl...well I played that one and 10-2 but my fave would be 7 then 8 (love Zell) and I wasn\'t to fond of 9. I am actually not to fond of 10 or 10-2 either but they are pretty good. I alway sthought 7 had the best storyline. *sighs* I wish they would remake that one...have you ever played Kingdom Hearts? Squall is in that...but he changes his name to Leon.
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