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It seems as though the group all had the plan very well thought out. Was it really that easy for them to get away? I can\'t imagine Frieze letting the Prince go that easily, and the icejin had his eyes on Bulma. I believe that he would see that as a double kick in the ass, and wouldn\'t be very happy about it.

So Vegeta chose to live another day. Had to wait for that day to be Ten years later, but he is still alive. I also see that he really isn\'t through the woods yet. Addiction is a bitch. Being addicted to a drug that has similariaties to sex has got to be worse.

I am very interested in seeing how far the war goes. Is there going to be some sort of mirical win, or is it going to get gory?

Any way, on with the adventure please.

One more thing. Does Bardock still have the ability to see into the future? If he does, that may explain part of his decision making, or seeming lack there of.

Amazing as always....

Kakarot had been here when Vegeta was brought here, he had been younger then, much younger, and he had just accepted Vegeta, had been the only one of the slaves that Freiza let near him, the only one allowed to clean him up when the day was done.---so they had spent time with each other in the past... and I can\'t believe that was 10 years of Vegeta\'s life he had to live like ...t...that is so long...now wonder he has to believe certain things....

Wanted to rip away this disguise and reveal what he knew was inside. -- Aww, really loved that line. I take that as physically and mentally...

Her part was done. Finished. Finito. --LoL, well I get the strange feeling that she is done...

“Hey, Chi,” she said--*falls over*...hehe wasn\'t expecting her...but then again I have no idea what to expect.

Vegeta’s name in front of the bitch-princess. --lmao, bitch princess? ^.^

I could be wrong though. He could be going to make popcorn and watch porn.--rofl!!!!

I wonder just how much Bardock didn’t tell his son.--I wonder too. Why didn\'t he tell his son..too horrible? I get the feeling we have just scratched the surfice with this fic. I love it....
Hm...I really wasn\'t sure how I expected Vegeta to react, but I Can say that he seems to be taking it very well, or maybe not...I don\'t want to speak to soon.

Beautifully written as always with much emotion...I love how Goku takes care of the Prince, and I can\'t help but feel sorry for them both. Seeing that they both have been through the same things and now it is like Goku has to relive much of it all over. I always love when someone puts themselves in anothers shoes...in this cas I am talking about Bulma as she thought to herself would she be able to survive under Frieza and she ended up saying she would have slit her wrists...Always gives me some sort of respect for a person when they take time out to look at it from another persons pov.

I do await the day Frieza gets what s coming to him...
Oh and that part of the fic that said she\'s blind...who were you talking about? Bulma? Gosh, I know I am an idiot but I was so confused on that part.

Anyway...lovely chappie....

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hmm... Vegeta chose slavery as a whore over death... he knows his people need him alive and \'eventually\' (gee thanks dad) he would be rescued... A hard decision but one that a pri prince - who is thinking of his people - would make. He survived \"years\" of Freiza\'s torture without being broken - he will recover quickly from this addiction to Frieza\'s implant. Plus he has the assistance of someone who has been through it...

This is a great fic. I love it. I\'ve never read anything like this! Fantastic!

Super just wonderful...

Felt a strange tingling sense that he should have been offended by this. --I love this fic! That makes me sad though...Vegeta feeling that way but it is so real. It\'s kind of like deja vu or trying not to remember something repressed...just love how you have written this.

(We are lying again, aren’t we?)--love the truthful thoughts. So he just pushes these thought away eh? Or just pushes that device in the back of his mouth...

an honest jewel from the dead monarch of Juro, the midgets of the universe—is that Krillen\'s planet..hehe

and Freiza took it, purred and giggled his approval.--I just want to smack him when he does that.

Freiza giggled--*grates teeth then smacks Frieza* He was driving me crazy!!!!! I feel better now...

That maggot bastard had brought them to the same room Goku had been ‘saved’ in.--Oh..wow..that must be emotional. I feel so awful for him.

“You’re going to need to tie him up somehow.”--Vegeta must be very uniterested, unamused, etc...he never even questions them. Not that he is really supposed to because he \'works\' there..but still I just love how you have written this...and how truly void he really seems to be. I can\'t help but wonder what will happen when he does remember. The change from how is he is now to when he remembers should be an ineresting one.

You have to be awake to fight it or its triggered to release toxins.” --very clever...they don\'t make it easy at all.

She flipped her cat ears back,--how kawaii..Bulma with cat ears, me likey...

“Let me go,” Vegeta said. ---So he speaks...why is that? Is he finally \'interested\' suspicious and wondering what exactly they are doing? Or what they want from him...

Knew what it felt like to have that taken away. The sense of pleasure, the ability to not think, not remember but just feel. ---Amazing...the ability not to think just feel...how a sentence can affect a person. How truly sad that is not to remember..not to even think...but just go with the flow...just go through life feeling not applying any thought to it...how utterly depressing that sounds...

Oh, look at that, back to the angst.--you know what? I love angst...I am a sucker for it and I love it more than anything else...Strange b/c I want everyone to be happy. But I just love when the characters have to go through such life altering situations they dont know if they will overcome or maybe they will but everything will be different. I just love the emotion that is poured into this story..I love to be sad with the characters..try to understand how they are feeling...have hope that they will feel better..cry and wonder with them
Also wonder will Vegeta bear the scars and wonder if it is worth it????

Love the end notes...
Bulma: Cool! I’ve got ears!--cool me too! *sarcastically..don\'t we all...j/k I know cat ears...

Alright, please don’t think I’m playing favs here or anything *sobs* you are playing favs!!! j/k I would never think that about you! You are rad!

Excellently written...
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So I was right. I am pleased...now write more. :) Oh...Cool Bulma has cat ears...She\'s even cooler now.

Yeah, it´s getting even better the more you write... one more story I look forward to read (almost) every day... I´m glad, nobody else gets to see Vegeta like that as I don´t like him being \"someone else\" and so \"utterly helpess\"... that´s... uh... just not HIM ;) But you do write them really good...I liow yow you portray Vegeta and Kakarott (but I said that already ^-^) Friendly Greetings, ~kodachi~

To Setharo07.

I\'ve only just now had a chance to come back and see if my review went through okay, and I just noticed your post. I just want to say thank-you for the kind thoughts and plushies (grins). It was very sweet of you. :-)

As you can see, I did keep readiing, because Card mentioned that no one else would be seeing Vegeta in the \'house\' and yeah, that\'s what was truly bothering me. I have this huge hang-up about dignity, and so yeah, I thi thinking that Vegeta is going to have a hell of a hard time coming to terms with what happened to him as it is, but if he\'s contlyntly bumping into people who saw him like that, then he\'ll never be able to move on, regain his dignity (in terms of how he feels) and yeah, it was breaking my heart.

I know there\'ll be more angst, but hopefully I should be okay with that. Vegeta\'s free from Freiza\'s vile ches,hes,t wat was the biggie for me. But yeah, it\'s going to be shattering at times, but as you will no doubt agree, Card\'s stories are too amazing to walk away from, and I would only have done so if I couldn\'t handle anymore of the plotline, I think I can handle the angst, I couldn\'t handle what was happening to Vegeta when he wasn\'t even aware of what he was doing.

Thankfully, that part is now over, so yeah, I think I will be okay with it now, but I do thank you for your crn. rn. Much appreciated :-)

Ummmm... good idea what w/ sticking the device in Vegeta\'s mouth, but... I don\'t see how taking his hand out of his mouth would test his endurance at all. I don\'t even understand why Vegeta needs to use his finger at all! Couldn\'t he just use his tongue...?

I don\'t know... everything else is good, honest! That one little concept was just... irking me. Plothole...? Or you just haven\'t gotten around to explaining yet...?