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Oh yes! Yes! *shutters in delight* Bardock must die!

That was so good that I want to cry. It was action packed and dramatic and just wonderful. I am a bit worried about Krillin though.

My thoughts exactly, \"Noooooooo, Vegeta!\"

I am glad that the Sayian Gods saved Goten from the Juro Gods. I feel sorry for Krillin. His Gods are so weird.

Bardock looked just a tad too happy for Vegeta’s liking, but he wasn’t about to ask what the hell was making Bardock grin like that. --Please someone smack that stupid grin off of his face.

The old King looked up and blinked his eyes, slowly as if filled with lead that wore him down to the bone, and then in a voice that was nothing of what he remembered croaked: “Son?” --how sad -_- not!

The words were not in a language he knew, but there was the image of Goten, of his body as it was wrapped up in the bleached-white cloud of the Juro wrath and ripped open.--Oh no! Please let someone save him, he doesn\'t deserve to die!

“Just like a whore belongs,” Bardock snapped, “On his knees.”--for that sentence alone Bardock should suffer tremendously.

“Thought you could come and take what doesn’t belong to you?”-- -_- Ugh! I just want him to die! He is making me so mad. That throne is rightfully Vegeta\'s! *shakes both fists at Bardock* Take that! :)

He tried to figure out how to say that Goten wasn’t him, that his personality was slipping, but there was blood spouting out of his body and without his mind to heal himself, he could die there. --that is so sad. I don\'t want Goten to die and hopefully he won\'t.

I am very glad Goten is ok, but that whole scene had me O_O. I thought it was cool how Trunks knew to put his hand across Goten\'s mouth and make him fight....to live his own life with his own mind.

and they ripped the mark of the Juro from him, wrapped his mind up in their hand and tore away all his powers justtheythey turned to strike at Goten again.--but they did not kill him...and I have a feeling he isn\'t going to die. I do wonder what the Juro Gods have in store for him.

and Goten was there, still bearing the marks of the Juro, but every scar that had once lined his body was gone.--*wipes tears of joy away* Awww that is great! A bit of happiness in the midst of such sorrow and pain.

“Really. Quick, someone fuck me.” He giggled. --LoL

“REALLY!” he yelled, “He’s fucking killing Vegeta!”--O_O! NOOOOOOOOOO! Vegeta must live! He can take my life...

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That glared down at them, and Vegeta (who was also knocked on his ass by the thing that was not a wall)--LoL

She kept the comment of ‘he didn’t do a great job, --hehe...yeah that is what I was thinking. I was surprised to see Nappa myself though.

(Vegeta’s whole body was like the size of this guys hand) --awww Ve is is so cute! He is so little!

“Obviously he exaggerates.”--he is so cool!

*gasp* Vegeta\'s mind is unprotected! I am worried!

Goten smirk and he was starting to think he might have just fallen a wee bit in love with the Prince.--hehe, and who wouldn\'t.

ntinnting so long and with such great focus that it was very possible he missed the carnage and chaos around him. --wow I am impressed amazamazed. He missed everything going on around him.

He deserved tel tel the pain of it, the shame of it forever and ever until he got so sick from it he couldn’t breath. --I agree and that almost seems like a harsh punishment...but it is enough to upset you to see the very person that murdered his own son remorsing...a person who has brought an onslaught of pain to all of these ppl...has done it for years. You don\'t want to see him cry you want to see him suffer.

and Goten would have kicked him, but he was just a shadow in this world.--LoL

and his picture would be taken off the wall of the Juro palace. He would be forgotten as if he never lived.--that is so.
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And what is happening with Goten?! Why is he seeing the stuff he is seeing...*is worried*
I love this chapter it was awesome!

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What a sick mind Bardock has, to regret having killed his son, only to have him living agian and gain Goku\'s forgiveness, just to start trying to kill him all over again. I had almost felt sorry for him, and then he goes and does that in Goten\'s mind trap.

I am surprised that Bulma didn\'t think to maktra tra dampeners as a just in case. So now I have to ask, \"What WAS Veget thinking?\"

So even Trunks has limits on who not to kill. Nice to know. I mean, I kind of gathered that already, but it was good to see it in practice.

Spiders’ bodies realized the limits of their powers, naturally, and shut down the mind as soon as they felt it had been reached. --that is very interesting, and mixed with him being saiyajin sounds complicated. Part of him wanting to shut down the other half wanting to fight to the death.

One day they would lose..... “Not today,” he whispered. --I really admire Goten and how he always seems to encourage ppl when he has been through so much pain physically and mentally and continues to endure pain. But he amazes me.
If I went through what he went through I would be bitching all the time all day long.

“Go already. It’s pretty much a fucking worthless day if your ass dies.”--Spoken like a true brother...lol I loved that line.

Felt his mind getting tighter around Bardock as that disgusting thing he called a mind replayed the vision. --Loved this!

and he felt a sense of deep dread that he might not make it out of this fight without having to take their life. And he knew that somehow it was his father’s fault that this was the case, and he hated him more and more.--that is sad...and too bad this is how he has to feel about his father. So sad to think he thought for so long his father was the one who saved him, but that was a lie...instead his father is on the the most evil men I know...and a traitor of his own son.

Then he turned his back again, raised the sword that hummed with power in the frozen massacre.--beautfiul, I loved that.

Watched it burn the blood into the floor and etch the shadows of the dead into the walls.--wow...very pwerful, very cool.
and Trunks sounds pretty damn amazing also!

This chapter was so awesome! and I am so excited to read more...but then again I am always excited to reore.ore.

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“So what happens after this, Vege Aft After you’re the King?”--What a great question. I have been waiting for that question to be asked.


But tonight, there would be words, he guess, because eventually everyone had to speak.--I love that...and they have gone a long while w/o speaking, at least speaking like this.

“But there was never a choice.”--that is so horrible...
this chap is so good! I loved the whole conversation between Vegeta and Goku...and it is so strange to hear Vegeta say that name (Goku). But wow such emotion, I loved it so much.

Didn’t want anything but to know that he hadn’t destroyed the Prince, and Vegeta finally spoke again, all he said was: “Death is not good enough for that fuck.”--beatiful, and I agree death is not good enough...

*sighs * But the Saiyan Prince out-uked him. … … … Now that’s a contest I’d like to see.--lmao!!! I\'d love to see that contest any day!

This chap was excellent!

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Bowed his head to the piousness of the young Prince and advised him that too much praying was as horrible a sin as too little. --WHAT!!! That is so insane. If I was born into that race of ppl I jus just die. I am so in shock about that, geez I would REALLY REALLY hate to be Krillen.

Like a leech, she said, sucking her away into nothing and perverting her body beyond even her ability to forgive.”--how truly sad that is, that is a strong hate.

And she had kept me only to fatten me up and eat me. She ate my mother. --@_@! That is disgusting! Gotens life is insane yet sad.

Then he raised his hand. “A mistake that I can unmake.” --These dreams are very good! And Bardock is very cruel.
Poor Goten for having to have these dreams...

WOO HOO THE PALACE!!!! I can\'t wait!

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Ah, gore! I loved it.

Dammit I\'m gonna have to wait to see what happens. *is sad and pouting* Oh... and poor Gohan. :(