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WOW!!!!
*sobs* I missed so much!!!! I am truly sad...I hate my comp sometimes -_- but I am happy now that I am reading this!!!!
I am loving how Goten can heal minds, and I love the process of it all and how he can possible become possessed. That is scary!
Wow Frieza\'s death took a long time it was just like really watching DBZ ^_^ hehe...
But so excellently written and filled with so much turmoil and grand emotion, really had me on the edge of my seat, even though I knew he would die. Frieza said some really nasty stuff and even I wanted to rip off his tail and feed it to him hoping he might choke on it.
And I am so glad Goten healed Goku\'s mind and glad Goku felt something lifted off of him and felt as though he was feeling freedom for the first time. That was great.
I feel so badly for Vegeta that he feels weak and that he couldn\'t beat Frieza.
But I totally love that ChiChi brought Frieza\'s head to him she kind of reminds me of Illryia (from Angel) and *sobs* today was the last episode of Angel!!!!!!!!!!!! *sighs* I miss Spike already...anyway sorry for the lapse in thought.

Oh wow yeah!!! goku got to be on top! That was great!!!! *dies* and there was end notes somewhere where Goku says why is this creepy kid thinking about my sex life..oh that had me rofl!!!!

The visions Bardock had were very disturbing. Especially about Vegeta...I hope that doesn\'t come true or that would be very bad. And I was so sad when Goten said Bardock really doove ove his son but he hates him enough to kill him with his bare hands...that is so intense. This whole fic is intense and it seems to be getting deeper. But at least we now now exactly why Goku was left with Frieza he was supposed to be killed but wasn\'t...just, wow you are good!
End notes freaking hilarious!

^.*
-MB-

\"We should go back.\" -- Such a mood killer. LOL

Bardock ans dumb as a sod house. -- LOL

I guess I can let Krillin off the hook...for now. He\'s torturing himself pretty good anyway. Oh my gosh, Gohan doesn\'t ever get any in your fics does him...well you learn something new everyday.

I do not really understand why it is that you listen to my ramblings, especially since my brain does not seem to work the way everybody else’s\' does, but thank you for the theology lesson.

This was a really satisfying chapter. Krillin’s motivations got explained and he grew back that nice new spine he lost in the last chapter. (Even though I feel sorry for him now because he has to let Goten get the credit for what little he is able to contribute.) We got an interesting theology lesson. Bulma is getting to be smart. Chi Chi is making beautiful references to blood. What did you say earlier? Something about spiders being lethal but liking long slow deaths. Purrrrrrrrrrr. And Goku is wrong, this story does not need a lot more sex. While lemons are nice and fun diversions to lighten up the dark moods, especially since you are so good at writing them, the story carries its own weight quite nicely. (Although I believe I have told you this once.)

I also learned that you do like your reviewers even when they are being annoying pains in the ass. Something I promise to not be again.

May Midoriirochi-zu (My name for the Saiyan goddess of the moon, Translates from Japanese to English as Green Cheese) continue to look over your fics.

-El-

Zombified? LMAO at that word.

Anyway it keeps getting more and more exciting.

Count Fudgular- Blewh, I vant to suck your fudge! (Hmm- I can see were this could go) Lemon Fudge?

Ok I so guessed (but didn\'t say anything) that Gohan was part Ice-jin GO ME :) any who I brought that up to bring this up. If you can;t figure something out (in the case of the kitten hehe) Blame Gohan. Yeah that\'s it Just blame Gohan. Bradock (SP) hired his Grandson to build that thing with the help of a ummm errr CAT and they used Let me see here hmmm *scratches head* OH OH They used Ice-jin material and it was uhhh ommm ehhh Designed by a Juro and ahhhh the placement in ship was uhhh errr BY THE SPIDERS! ok probably not but hey you never know hehe well you most likly do I just don\'t. HEHE

~*Noel*~

I still love this fic. But then again I happen to really like darker fics.

At least the little wimp was honest. (At this point, his only good trait.) ----- Just when I thought he was getting a spine too. He really needs to come up with something else to do. As it is he’s just wasting air. I know, I know, you’ve got something planned and I should just be patient.

I think it’s cool that Chi Chi has a maternal instinct and is taking care of Bulma, especially s she she couldn’t care less about anybody else. It’s always fun when you find such behaviors in the most unexpected places.

Yeah!!!! Bardock’s motives are made clear, mostly at least. I’m sure your plot monster is still keeping stuff hidden but … “Bardock really does love Goku. And he really hates him. It’s the most stunning paradox I have ever seen.” ----- That’s just a cool statement. Why doesn’t Bardock see Trunks or Goten. If the visions were gifts from the Saiyan gods, then that would mean that either the gods don’t find them important, which is hard to believe since the Juro Gods seem to take great pleasure in torturing Goten (Which in itself almost makes you wonder if Saiyan gods are mad at the Juro Gods for messing with their subject and are helping keep Goten alive just to piss their counterparts off. After all, which sets of gods are the demis responsible to anyway? The theology is just mind-boggling.), they are being shielded, or Bardock is not paying enough attention to all his visions (although why he would trust visions he can easily change I don’t know). I’ll shut upon this subject now before I give myself a headache.

ing ing forward to reading more tomorrow.

-El

That was a sad and scary tale that Goten told to Trunks. The gist of it being, Bardock, trying to prevent the futuresaw,saw, ended up making it happen. I guess even foreseers have their downfalls, ne?

Ah, to have the abilities of a telekanetic lover. That would be wonderful.

I can see/feel how Bulma is reacting to having Chi Chi babysit her. She is a grown cat woman after all. I am glad she is using her idel time with thinking about the voice on the ship.

Yah, I missed Vegeta and Goku, but this was still a very good chapter, as always.

Oww...pieces of the puzzle. Cool...it had almost forgotten that this story actually had a plot. That a good thing when you don\'t even miss the plot. Because when there is a plot that means that the story will end...and i don\'t want it to end...its too good.

What\'s up with Chi and Bulma anyway? *grins evilly*