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You continue to amaze me with this story. They are all sooooo cool!(the exceptions being Frieza, Bardock and Krillin, sorry, but he is such a prude, but I guess you wrote him that way on purpose, huh.)

Hmmm, I smell a partial lemon, I think that I will have to go and investigate. (That\'s right, nothings sacred.)

So, I noticed that Krillin wasn\'t in this chapter. (thinks of reasons)

\"phew,\" Bulma\'s safe. But just because they have her, doesn\'t mean that a device wasn\'t already put on her. And that was very nice of Chi Chi to spin her a web.

I really loved both of these chapters!
But my review kept not going through...so unfortunately this is the abridged version...

I felt deeply sad for Goten and his explanation that he gave to Bulma...
but I was happy Veg Vegeta thought to free him from the Juro gods...I do hope he does.

I am glad that Bulma is back and it seems as though she has some scars of her own now. I was surprised at the conrontation with Frieza...just glad that no one was hurt, to the point of death.

Oh and I loved when ChiChi made the \'kitten\' a web nest...that was really sweet.

Anyway I truly loved it all..and still feel bad for Goku and how he feels about his dad. Howwantwanted the answer if his dad traded him to Frieza....just devastating to find out your parent would do that to you.

Everything is getter deeper...and I am loving it.

^.*
-MB-

Ah, cool fight. Or should I say, lack there of? Lots of blood though!

Krillin, get your head out of your a$$. (Sorry, had to get that off of my chest)

I can\'t wait until after they rescue Bulma, and Vegeta gets to \'get back into shape\'. I don\'t think that I have told you this, but you write some pretty good fighting/sparring sceens.

Vegeta has pride in Trunks, Yes!

I\'m glad to see that \'Ten and Trunks have had previous relations before, but it must\'ve been strange. I really don\'t want to think about Chichi and Trunks together, but I guess that it\'s gonna happen in a while. How cruel of the icejin\'s, to have a Zoo full of humans and other species, especialn con conditions like that. At least the visitors died like they all should. But, it\'shamshame that \'Ten was an idiot, like ks cks called him, and made himself hurt that much more. Ooohh!!! I really like how Trunks turned out in \'the house\'. I rea really cool how he can freeze them, befrore choppig them to pieces. The spider coming out of his back was strange, but ultimately cool beyond belief. *looks between two hands* Symphony and pride; or massacre and disgust? What to choose? Being a Saiyan goddess, I\'d go with the first. I\'m definitely proud of Trunks for dispatching with the evil in the way he did. Poor Kriilin, he\'s gonna have it tough for a while, but I think he\'ll learn to deal. Oh yay!! I wanna see Goku\'s shiny ass!! I\'m sure lots of people wanna see that! \'Specially \'Geta!

I always save this fic for last. Things are finally beginning to make sense. Well, maybe not making sense per se but definately less confusing. I don\'t like the idea of Vegeta being helpless though. He doesn\'t pull it off well.
Krillin just needs to get over himself, embrace his dark side, and deal. There are still no lemons. Then again this fic really doesn\'t need them. The plot line is plenty complex enough to hold its own; which is probably why its my favorite. Are the zoo creatures going to be allies? If so, they\'re slowly forming thier own little army.

-El-

Damn, I\'m going to miss this story when I\'m gone. Trunks is the Kick Ass God of Kick Ass. He is so cool, even with a spider protruding from his back. *Sighs dreamily* I do feel bad for Goten and Krillin. Goten because everytime he does something cool he starts bleeding and Krillin because he is having such a hard time with things.

Oww... and Goku is shiny...hmm...wonder what that means?

Oh great now I\'m even more giddy. *sigh and then goes back to beaming insanely* There\'s going to be fight! I love fights! I\'m so violent...the the tension has been building for a while.

Thanks.

Poor Bulma, think I\'d rather be dead too. Can\'t wait to see Bardock die.

-Hudine-

www.saiysaiyan.com

I love your writings, and I love how fast you post new chapters. Marry me and be my ficcy \'ore! <33

Wonderful,

and the way she had told herself over and over that she would never end up in his house, would never give into that—would die first.--That is horrid!!! To want to die and wake up and realize you hadn\'t trapped by the very thing you swore you would never become a victom of.

She remembered the way he had looked at her, remembered how she had been flattered that he was looking. Remembered she felt sorry that he was a cross-breed had had been ridiculed his whole life. --That is so sad. I felt the same for Gohan and even thought that him and Bulma would end up as a couple. I really love hearing all of this from her pov. To see that she was actually flattered by him, and he turned out to be such a bastard!

Anything, any death but the one that faced her.--Like how she thinks of her life with Frieza as death. I feel so badly for her, and I hope the others can rescue her.

In fact, he cared so much about it he was just going to run right up to Bardock and cut his head off. --LoL, he is very enthusiasctic.

Juro were contradictory like that, but it wasn’t their fault. Their Gods were like that too.--LoL, loved that line.

Oh gods, the spider-Princess was attracted to Trunks.--I kinda thought she might be, I caught hints in earlier chapters...well stuff that seemed like hints. I think that is cute!

(Remember what Freiza’s like. If he can’t kill you with a sword, he’ll kill you with a word.)--True, and I do hope they are all prepared and \'sg\' g\' enough to withstand the attacks of Frieza. I love how united this group is. How they are all willing to go and get Bulma. Especially Vegeta and Goku b/c they don\'t want her going through what they did... This fic reminds me of a rpg final fantasy type game or something. All these people from different walks of life thrown together and having the same goal in bringing down Frieza and Bardock. *sighs* I wish it was a game...that would be so rad.

Goten: I could just sneak into your mind and watch anyway. --rofl, yeah Trunks go screw the spider lady!!!!

^.*
-MB-