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December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The situations in this story are the most embarrassing ive ever read... lol i love it ^_^
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i loved the chapter i just can't wait for the nexxt one.
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It has been a while, but please write the 23rd Chapter
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Helping Hand:
I didn\'t change anything. Planet Vegita was destroyed when Prince Vegeta was five.
I didn\'t change anything. Planet Vegita was destroyed when Prince Vegeta was five.
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you wrote that king Vegeta\'s wife died when Prince Vegeta was five then changed it last chapter to when the panatew was distoryed don\'t do that it\'s anoining.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed reading this. I do hope that you update: soon. thanks for your efforts so far!
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just noticed that the chapter numbers on my reviews dont mach up oops my bad.
19 ~Chapt 18
*sinckers* I like thier style of punishment.
Dont get in between a pregnant man/saiyan and his food ...might just bite your finger off.
Goku .. tail ...yay ... shots .. ouch
20 ~Chapt 19
Enter the snake music and dum dum dum...
A more mature Goku with the same stomache *sncickers*
21 ~Chapt 20
Nice way to transition the time. Alot can happen in five years.
Klutz\'s Saiyan Biology for Dummies *snickers*
*Huggles* Yay, and thanks so much for sharing.
Looks like your wrapping up loose ends getting ready for the big finish. Ive enjoyed reading it so far, thanks again.
19 ~Chapt 18
*sinckers* I like thier style of punishment.
Dont get in between a pregnant man/saiyan and his food ...might just bite your finger off.
Goku .. tail ...yay ... shots .. ouch
20 ~Chapt 19
Enter the snake music and dum dum dum...
A more mature Goku with the same stomache *sncickers*
21 ~Chapt 20
Nice way to transition the time. Alot can happen in five years.
Klutz\'s Saiyan Biology for Dummies *snickers*
*Huggles* Yay, and thanks so much for sharing.
Looks like your wrapping up loose ends getting ready for the big finish. Ive enjoyed reading it so far, thanks again.
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter it has been so long since you updated but im glad you could update today.
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter16
LOL poor Vegeta, at least he has escaped his heat for the moment.
Chapter17
Uh-oh someone is in trouble...
*Snickers* At least Appuru waited till someone was finished before intruding.
Well guess the pilot found out the hard way.
Chapter18
LOL I love your use of food in your story.
Whoa *snickers* Goten and Trunks dropped a bomb shell LOL.
*Snickers* Vegeta isnt too happy, and is looking at Goku like it is all his fault.
I\'ll have to finish the rest later. Thank you so much for sharing. Cant wait to read the rest.
*huggles* ja ne.
LOL poor Vegeta, at least he has escaped his heat for the moment.
Chapter17
Uh-oh someone is in trouble...
*Snickers* At least Appuru waited till someone was finished before intruding.
Well guess the pilot found out the hard way.
Chapter18
LOL I love your use of food in your story.
Whoa *snickers* Goten and Trunks dropped a bomb shell LOL.
*Snickers* Vegeta isnt too happy, and is looking at Goku like it is all his fault.
I\'ll have to finish the rest later. Thank you so much for sharing. Cant wait to read the rest.
*huggles* ja ne.
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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it\'s been a long while since the last time I reviewed on this story. I kinda fell off the face of the planet for a while and never caught up til now. Ok...I\'m a little dazed from plowing through from the chapter just after delivery to the current one. Man what a rush! I am so psyched for the next chapter. Squee! I can\'t wait for the Bardock\'s vision of Vegeta and Goku to come true. And I was floored right along with Bulma when Goku spouted the technological terms at her. Update again soon, please!
~Yuurei~
~Yuurei~