rate_review Reviews

Very riveting. Thanks for giving Goku a spine and melting that frying pan. He finally let Chi know she hadn\'t fooled him one bit! I have read all 19 chapters in one sitting. This is the most fascinating chronicle I\'ve read to date. Update soon. Love all the intropersonal relationships. Very well written.

haha those poor stayains having to do chores and fight until exushation that will teach them to go for a joyride. anyway can\'t i wait for the next chapter.

i like this story i feel so bad for them guys punishments will be handled by goku. anyway i wondering if i could expect for goku to get pregnant by the end of the story since you have goten and trunks pregnant.

this is a fantastek story.can you list all of the pairing to date so its esear to keep track?

Gasp! Bardock?

...Bardock?!

*runs away to read*

I agree with the people staring at Goku strangely. I would definitely need a moment or two to get used to the new outfit. *is worried*

Next chappie now!~~

*whimper* does this mean they're all going to Earth (chapter 15)? ...must go find out now.

Chap 16

Meep. What's the alert for?

I see that everyone is noticing the taillessness, does thaan tan they're going to do something about that? *evil grin* Saiyans deserve their taifterfter all. And the gis! Those sound very (for lack of a better word) cool. And useful.

I'm all caught up now. Sorry for not reading before. *turns into adorable chibi* Fowgive me?

chapter 14

wow, wonderful addition! The girls are back, and Vegeta got Bra's picture! ^__^ Lucky for Bra The others had arrive. I can't wait til you update! It will be awsome to see the family reunion. So many things are gonna happen!!! What will the Vegeta and Gokuu's fathers say to their sons after all these years? How will trunk, Gohan and Goten be affected by their grandfather showing up? This is gonna drive me crazy...the wait...to find out what will happen.. (and what will happen with Bra and Pan and the two guys they love too)

I really love your work, you have great style in your writing, and your fic got everything, mystery, action, romance....etc. Please write more soon. I will wait patiently.

Sincerely, your fan YYY

this is quite interesting, different but interesting.
what i really don't get is Chi chi? she knows Goku loves Vegeta right? but she's been having an affair? as well and also the fact they have died and the marriage thing non-exists.
I really don't get why she started crying and saying Goku broke up with her, when they clearly agreed, there was no love, there was no marriage.
i have to admit, i find it funny when chi chi dies O.o
But then i also love the new twists you have going in your story, hee hee with Goku turning out to be a prince.
Well please e-mail me when you update...and also if you can or anyone explain the whole Chi chi thing...because i am clearly confused ?_?