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schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...Finally, I get off my lazy bum (or on it really) to read this chappie.

Bardock? *squeal* I love Bardock and King Vegeta and Claiming and it's all so great! *more squealing* Poor King Vegeta, they didn't tell him that his son was alive? weirdo.

Now, lets go back to the Saiyans and see how they are doing. Bra, Pan? Okay...*whimper* what about the boy saiyans?

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person chayron
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked the chapter. Cha! Bulma will teach the prince some manners. Women power! Who I am kidding...if she didn\'t manage to do that in all these years...
person chayron
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, that\'s a very good idea with that \"until death do you part\". I liked that very much ;)
person chayron
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Goku! But when Vegeta is besides him it can\'t be very bad, can it? I loved this chapter!
person chayron
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So, Goku/Kakarot is a prince..? Hmm...that\'s a good one ;) That was hilarious when Vegeta leapt on Appuru! Update soon!
person Card
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*growl*

Erg! Idiot site.

As for chapchapter. That was just mean to leave it there with me wantio kno know more! Waaaah! *sob * *sniffle * But at least there is that little bit o\'preview at the end. *sniffle * Still not as good as a whole new chapter.

Oh, especially good was the descriptions of the books. I loved the way you described the scenes on the covers.

(Sorry for noviewviewing earlier, and thank you for telling me about the update.)

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person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a great 2 chapters!
I loved the whole scene with the book kocking Goku out, thought that was described wonderfully.
I am very curious to know what Goku knows that Vegeta doesn\'t.
This fic is so great. And Vegeta punching Appuru in the gut was funny.
So now the Prince is in heat...this should prove to be very interesting.
And I think you should keep the previews at the end of the chaps I thiney aey are rad.
Anywho I am loving the fic.
^.*
-MB-
person Twilight-Abyss
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok..I started chapter 1 at a little after 2am or so. It\'s almost 4 am now and I\'m caught up to your most recent chapter. I just couldn\'t stop reading. It\'s very well written and very imaginitive. Love the Sugar high chapters...thwerewere too funny. I felt a little guilty for laughing at the crash of flight 242. All I could think was, \"Bye Bye Chichi,\" -insert explosion sound effects here- As for your preview for the next chapter, it\'s a bit like torture. Teasing me with tidbits for the next chapter and now I have to wait? *cries* haha...that\'s ok though, because when the next chapter does come I will only be more enthusiastic to read it. Keep the previews I say. Update soon!

~Kira~
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schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah!~ No fair you just tease like that. *glrare* No, its good. I liked the little heads up on the next chappie. Gives me something specific to look forward too.

Now. I was wondering who (or what) Tony was. Good to know. ;) I love that the ship is named Solaris. *nods * Ah, but what is the cycle? What is the node? WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN?!

*grabs nearby person and starts shaking them for answers *

*cough* No. Really. I can wait.

Oh, almost forgot about the Bra thing. Goodness. Tossing people in bodies of water. Getting letters and pictures. Whats a saiyan to do? Or think? Hope it works out for her.

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person jaygoose
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been slacking on my reading and reviewing...I know. But you have been busy while I was away. Bra in the fic. I love her she reminds me so much of Bulma. Poor...*cough*...Chichi...uh yeah. Anyway, so Goku is after Vegeta, eh? I hope he gets him. I love the details...details are gat kat keeping me hooked. I will be waiting for more. I promise to review.

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