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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am only on chapter 2 but I had to stop there cause I\'ve got to be up pretty early tomorrow.
I actually feel really sorry for Bulma and Chi-chi, eemseems sad that they are getting old and the marriges are failing. *sniffles*
I like the way you have portrayed the characters, makes the fic really interesting, and I also like the way you leave a bit of a info each chap (well in the two chaps I\'ve read so far *grins*)
I am looking forward to reading more of this! ^_^
I actually feel really sorry for Bulma and Chi-chi, eemseems sad that they are getting old and the marriges are failing. *sniffles*
I like the way you have portrayed the characters, makes the fic really interesting, and I also like the way you leave a bit of a info each chap (well in the two chaps I\'ve read so far *grins*)
I am looking forward to reading more of this! ^_^
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, what up with the side plot with King Vegeta...I am so confused...I suppose that was you intent thouI amI am interested to say the least. but are Goku and Vegeta going to get some more story time soon?
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story. I see you have a plot in mind, and I don\'t mind saying that I have no idea what it is. I guess I will have to keep reading to find out, won\'t I.
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^__^
Vegeta would deny it, but he did have a slight sweet tooth.--I think it soo cute when ppl make the Prince have a secret sweet tooth.
Goku would have dashed out of there as fast as he could, --lmao!!!
\"I know you do, but you love Vegeta more.\" Goku fell out of his chair at his ex-wife\'s words. --hehe I would have fallen out of my chair too if I was Goku. But I thought that was a very creative idea with the whole Shenron thing and til death do you part...I liked that.
Then I start screeching at myself about what I could have done differently in my life. --lol she even screeches at herself..while by herself. This is either very disturbing or nice to know that she is always like that...Im not sure which yet...hehe
He was naked lying on his bed jerking off to a picture of me! And was moaning \'Oh Trunks I love you!\' I was stunned.--LMAO!!!!! I\'m feel sorry for Trunks...I really do...ok I don\'t ! I find that completely hilarious!! He knows he loves Goten too!
Another great and very funny chap except the parts for Goku being sad, which I hope he gets better soon. I was very proud of Vegeta for not saying anything cruel or belittling to Goku when he was crying and I loved when Goku said thank you...wonderful
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Vegeta would deny it, but he did have a slight sweet tooth.--I think it soo cute when ppl make the Prince have a secret sweet tooth.
Goku would have dashed out of there as fast as he could, --lmao!!!
\"I know you do, but you love Vegeta more.\" Goku fell out of his chair at his ex-wife\'s words. --hehe I would have fallen out of my chair too if I was Goku. But I thought that was a very creative idea with the whole Shenron thing and til death do you part...I liked that.
Then I start screeching at myself about what I could have done differently in my life. --lol she even screeches at herself..while by herself. This is either very disturbing or nice to know that she is always like that...Im not sure which yet...hehe
He was naked lying on his bed jerking off to a picture of me! And was moaning \'Oh Trunks I love you!\' I was stunned.--LMAO!!!!! I\'m feel sorry for Trunks...I really do...ok I don\'t ! I find that completely hilarious!! He knows he loves Goten too!
Another great and very funny chap except the parts for Goku being sad, which I hope he gets better soon. I was very proud of Vegeta for not saying anything cruel or belittling to Goku when he was crying and I loved when Goku said thank you...wonderful
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good job, interesting story.
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting ficcy...I am waiting impatiently to find out what ChiChi has to talk to Goku about. And what\'s up with Trunks? I can\'t wait to find out.
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...so that was what was wrong with Trunks. In a way its funny, but when poor Goten finds out...it going to be quite embarassing.
I had a feeling that was what was going to happen with ChiChi and Goku...good now we can get on with the Vegeta/Kaki loving.
I had a feeling that was what was going to happen with ChiChi and Goku...good now we can get on with the Vegeta/Kaki loving.
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw, Goku fell off his chair. *picks Goku up and dusts him off * Wow, I actually don\'t hate Chichi. *is very shocked * She seemed slightly rational. *scared *
Yeah! Our favorite Saiyans are thinking of one another!! Yeah! *shoves Goku and Vegeta together * I do feel bad for poor Goku crying, though.
And... So *thats* why Trunks is being mean to Goten. (Or else ignoring him. ) Poor dear, his little virgin senses have been offended. *pats Trunks, hands him a picture of Goten and locks him in a room filled with aphrodisacs * Yep, a few weeks in there ought to straighten him out.
Now, back to the seriousness. \"Tip of the iceberg\" o.O? Oh no! What\'s this secret that Vegeta doesn\'t know about the Saiyan\'s history? And the hooded people? And when are we going to see the rest of the iceberg? *looks pitiful * You\'ll update soon, right? *more pitiful *
Alright, I\'ll leave you alone. (But only because you just updated. )
~Card!~
Yeah! Our favorite Saiyans are thinking of one another!! Yeah! *shoves Goku and Vegeta together * I do feel bad for poor Goku crying, though.
And... So *thats* why Trunks is being mean to Goten. (Or else ignoring him. ) Poor dear, his little virgin senses have been offended. *pats Trunks, hands him a picture of Goten and locks him in a room filled with aphrodisacs * Yep, a few weeks in there ought to straighten him out.
Now, back to the seriousness. \"Tip of the iceberg\" o.O? Oh no! What\'s this secret that Vegeta doesn\'t know about the Saiyan\'s history? And the hooded people? And when are we going to see the rest of the iceberg? *looks pitiful * You\'ll update soon, right? *more pitiful *
Alright, I\'ll leave you alone. (But only because you just updated. )
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April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn\'t review...*feels very bad*
I didn\'t notice that you had updated or I definately would have reviewed.
I am reminded of the grip of his Royal Assness, the one that has his scaly hands wrapped around the very foundations of my kingdom.--while I found the royal assness part to be very funny. I really liked this line and thought it to be full of depth, just the very thought of that thing ruling the saiyajin kingdom is disturbing.
Yes fate does seem to be fairly cruel. That is horrible that Seika went into labor at that time. I have very bad feeling about this.
Right in front of the Lizard Prince.--like that...lizard prince...
\'One day\' she thought. \'You will die by your own pride.\' --oh wow, really loved that. And it is so true well at least it is on dbz...as for how he dies in this fic I have no clue. Either way this line was very powerful.
Two hooded figures appeared in the hall and put a small device on the King\'s brain dead body, surrounding it with a thin barrier of energy, and the three of them vanished jewels and all.--hm...who are they and what is that about...*is very very interested*
I really hate Frieza, but then again I always have.
Great fic! Update soon! ^.^
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I didn\'t notice that you had updated or I definately would have reviewed.
I am reminded of the grip of his Royal Assness, the one that has his scaly hands wrapped around the very foundations of my kingdom.--while I found the royal assness part to be very funny. I really liked this line and thought it to be full of depth, just the very thought of that thing ruling the saiyajin kingdom is disturbing.
Yes fate does seem to be fairly cruel. That is horrible that Seika went into labor at that time. I have very bad feeling about this.
Right in front of the Lizard Prince.--like that...lizard prince...
\'One day\' she thought. \'You will die by your own pride.\' --oh wow, really loved that. And it is so true well at least it is on dbz...as for how he dies in this fic I have no clue. Either way this line was very powerful.
Two hooded figures appeared in the hall and put a small device on the King\'s brain dead body, surrounding it with a thin barrier of energy, and the three of them vanished jewels and all.--hm...who are they and what is that about...*is very very interested*
I really hate Frieza, but then again I always have.
Great fic! Update soon! ^.^
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April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just read your fic and I love it. Seems like some exciting stuay bay be happening next. I hate Frieza. But I do wonder who those two people were in the cloaks at the end and how theyjust disappeared. Time traavelers maybe. Now I will be wondering.