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Guilt! Guilt have I!

I haI had seen this chapter was up and I did not review! *sobs brokenly over this depressing development.* I am sorry.

Onto the review!~

Er. Freeza\'s a bastard. (Hate him!~) Poor Queen. Gasp, Vegeta had an older sister? Poor Queen again. Poor female Saiyans... *sigh* Who were the hooded folks? What happened to them. Where did they disappear?!

(I hate Zarbon, he just...makes me all *Blech*) Oooo~ No fair you just left it there like that. I want another chapter. Right now!

Now!

Riiiiiiiiight.... Okay, I guess I\'ll wait. But only because I\'m such a nice per


Keep up the good work.
~Card!~

Curiousity not satisfied. More curious now.

Poor Goku and his poor neglected erection. *pats Goku on the back as he gobbles down pancakes, unaware that his wife is FINALLY going to tell him its over. *

Why is Trunks giving Goten the silent treatment?

New Hampshire, never been there. Went tstonston once. Didn\'t understand much of what they said, and that was fine because they didn\'t understand me either. Got to love those accents.

Anyway! I need more now. Go forth and write. *sits patiently and taps fingers against computer desk waiting for more to be delivered. * I\'m waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaiting.

Finally!!! I have been trying to post this review for like 20 minutes...kept saying too many connections on line 11 or something...
Anyway..here I am to review!!! YAY!!!!

\'Why do I let myself be so affected by him?\' I ask myself in my mind, with a frown on my face. \'Even in my sleep.\' I push the annoying thoughts aside, rinsing my hair.--Because Goku, you love him silly...or at least I hope thats what it is!

He bent down, picked up the cold bar and pressed it against his member, drawing out another gasp. It worked. No more erection. --LoL...aww as soon as he thinks of Vegeta he will just have another one...^.^

(she considered herself the \'proper\' one and thus slept in them.) ---uh..proper..replace proper with bitch then that sentence will be right..hehe now Vegeta he is proper. j/k I don\'t really hate ChiChi I just find her very annoying in the show, in this fic she is perfectly fine...

I open the freezer, the cold air chilling --I liked that chilling air for chilling thoughts...very nice..

Well it is nice to see..that so far your ChiChi character is normal and not a crazy screaming biotch...but I may have spoke to soon I am not to sure...
Anyway that was a great chap and I enjoyed it very much. Loved your pov changes...

yeah I do want to know how Bra was concieved but I Am a patient gal...I cant wait...
^.*
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Hey you are doing a good job so far keep up the good work ok ^_^ !

That\'s right, \'Geta; think of Kakarot~! Think of him all the time!

Okay, now that that is out of my system. *cough * Interesting... don\'t like that substitute feller. Like Bra though. Hope she beats the crap out of that kid that said that very rude thing about giving him her tail. As if buddy.

Anywho. I liked it. Hope to see more of it. As soon as writerly possible.

Want to know why Vegeta was thinking of my favorite Saiyan.

*sits and waits patiently for next chappie *

Great start...
and a very interesting POV, I don\'t think I have read a fic w/ a pov quite like this in a while.

Rinsing off the the body wash she realized that there was no mark from Vegeta in the conception of Bra.--hm? I wonder why that is?

Bra\'s teacher definately posed a lovely question. I can\'t help but wonder if that was just for humor b/c she knows what it is like to have a tail, or is that a forshadowing of somekind...or maybe both.

But just as quickly as it came, he squashed it ---*gasp* No...Vegeta don\'t squash! You MUST think of Kakarott...*whispers to Vegeta* you must have hot sex with Kakarott...

Anywho I will be waiting for your update....

^.*

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