rate_review Reviews

I was deeply offended by FF.net\'s decision to delete your wonderful stories. However, I must say, it gave me the impetus to read your \"enhanced\" version and it was so good I\'m ready to forgive them. The dynamic between WuFei and Heero is dang *hot*. I admire how you keep both so much in character and so true to their strong natures.
And the lemon... woooo hoo!!! ::fans self:; very nice. Very, very nice. ohhh, yes.

This story is a pleasure to read, I\'m glad you are updating as frequently as you are. I think your strongest writing is at the end of each chapter, you tend to... I don\'t know if \'pay attention to the words\' is more appropriate than \'get poetic\', but the writing kicks up a notch near the end. Your phrasing becomes stronger. \"A smear of fire and sirens lingered on the night behind them...\" \"...the way his subconscious mind occasionally dropped things like that upon the rails of his normally rigind thoughts...when it did it had a distinct American accent.\" *sigh* Exquisite. And that\'s just two of the more stunning ones from the last two chapters. The only thing I would mention as a (very) minor criticisim is that I think you went on a bit too long describing the hideout. Realistic details are good, but I found it went on a bit too long. I love this story, and can hardly wait to see what happens next.
Thank you for sharing

wow....I LOVED IT! continue!

Yaaay my Wu-man escaped! Is Duo going to find out about Heero and Wu-mans arrangement? LOl i liked that you made Wufei give Heero a massage!! It was great! And Quatre is soo cute! Yah know you should make Trowa speak more often lol. He is so quite!

Omg this story is so good! Lol Wufei is something else! I just love the way you make Heero act!

Lol Duo is funny here. I just love him!! I cant blame him for trying to get Herro and Wu-man!

Heero acts totally like a robot. You are sooo evil. Why wont you show his pov! Ne way I wonder who is going to start to like who first. This fic is so amazing and orginal. You have to keep up the good work.

Im so glad you made this fic. 1/5 are so hard to find! Plus im kinda tired of 1/2 even though I love Duo and Heero so much! Anyway update!!!

Omg this story has to be one of the best 1X5 ones out there. You keep them in character so well that it\'s almost scary to think that there could be people like that around. The relationship that they share has to be one of the oddest ones i have ever read about. The story isn\'t just full of fluff too. Your story has a sence of realisim that makes it easier to see also, and your description is just beatiful. you give them missions as well and actually go into detail what the missions are. The limes could be lemons, but that is just me<< Love it anyway. I like Duo in this fic too he just there for comedic releif... well for now anyway. Quatre and Trowa are...um..not there<< oh well Love the fic! Just sitting here till you write more! ( I rambled, but i like your story) ^___^

Chapter 4 was very intense, i 1x5 1x5 stories very much and your story has me coming back to the site everyday to check if you\'ve updated and i usually only come here once a month.
Please write more, you make my day.