rate_review Reviews

I\'m really getting into this story. You keep both Heero and WuFei in character very well.

I hope to read more soon!

I really enjoy this story so far. When I read the summary, I was afraid the situation would end up feeling contrived, but you\'ve managed to make me believe this could really happen. I love the battle/storm analogy. You have a nice way with words, some of the phrases you\'ve used are very poetic. One of my favorite scenes is when they return from the initial encounter, and the reactions of everyone else in the room. I\'m interested in seeing where this story is going. I don\'t usually enjoy massively multi-part stories, but in this case the time spent simply adds realism. I especially enjoy Wufei acknowledging his willing participation in the arrangement. Sometimes even self-introspective people like Wufei can fool themselves too, and you had him wait just long enough, any more would have seemed unrealistic, any less and it wouldn\'t have been effective. I look forward to reading the rest of this, thank you for sharing.