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That was the best story I've ever read, ever. It was just so powerful! A real whirlwind adventure, insightful and uplifting. Your writing is just fantastic! Thanks for the great read

Ju xxx

WOW! Hard to believe it's all done! A magnificent story, far above the usual quality of fanfiction. Just as an interesting tidbit, I printed a hard copy of this story, and even after tossing all the pages that don't actually have story on them, it STILL filled two 4-inch ring binders! It's not often a fanfic consisting of several hundred pages manages to keep my attention, but this one sure did! Bravissima!!

I do hope that you will write other stories in this universe you've created. It was a true pleasure to read, with such an excellent grasp of plot, characterization, grammar that NOT ONCE did I have a "huh?" moment. There is so much potential for additional stories that I genuinely hate the thought that you will not play anymore in your world. Please indulge us with more of your work. (big sad puppy eyes in a blatant attempt to encourage more writing)

Oh, and the virtual cabana boys are awaiting you with fruity drinks with little umbrellas, oil for your foot rubs, and many, many bites of your favorite chocolate for you to nibble while you recover. :)

OMG!!! This was AWESOME!!! I love it. You are great writer ^__^ THANKS for this interesting beautiful yaoi story!!!!
ps i loved the lemon scene. i'm still drooling XDD

*drools*
Yes, a wonderful mental image. Bouncing on the bed, even fully clothed in public would be very distracting...

Loved it! Great work! Your writing was excellent. The best one I've read in a long time! ^_^

Wah, can't believe this fic is actually finished... I'll miss it.. >_< Somehow i imagine them getting more attached, hoping to see the sequel soon~! Keep writing more 1x5 ficcies please?? @___@ I love the developement!

this was great. I love the way you illustrate their feelings through body language. It tells alot about their personalities. The ending was sweet in its own way, perfectly fitting their relationship. Best gundam fic i have ever read, hands down. I hope to see more from you. P.S. Ever try writing a screen play? I think you would do well with one.

My passion for Gundam Wing was long gone by the time I saw the link to 'The Ventalilation shaft', where I found this story. I was never really into Wufei or Heero, but I decided to take a chance and I'm so glad that I decided to read this! It refilled my soul with beautiful imagery and now I'm back into Gundam Wing, but now, instead of being into Quatre and 3x4, I'm into Wufei and 1x5! It's so unbelievable now that I think about it.

The Arrangement was realistic, wonderful, and If I could I would print every text in this story and make it into a book like I did with another long story before. You don't make the obvious uke and seme relationship, which is a great to me since I dislike the Uke/Seme idea. Do you know how many wonderful characters they've corrupted with that shit?
:D But enough about my ranting. I really love this. I'm dissapointed to find that it ends and it leaves a strange hole in the deep ends of my mind. Fanfiction like yours are more than extremely hard to come by.

If this was any shorter it would be strange and any longer it would be too dramatic, but as it is it's just PERFECT. At first the dreams that Wufei were dreaming threw me off, and I thought it was some stupid plot to dramaticize things, and it was, but it was a plot that I didn't expect! With most fanfiction I can already tell what's going to happen and all that dumb, unorginal ... stuff.
Down to the last wordings and the descriptions, everything is dto tto the last detail, EVERYTHING. This is perfection.
The ending didn't seem like an ending to me. The worst is over, but theres still so much unsaid and so much that hasn't been done yet..! I've cried, afterwards Heero had loving sex with Wufei when Chang woke up and thought it was a dream, I laughed at parts I thought were funny, but overall this made me experience emotions I normally don't feel in normal fanfiction. But then again this isn't normal, nothing about this is normal. ;D It's way past normal, and it's the best goddamn story I've ever read. EVER.
I especially love the way you put those quotes on top of the chapters. I've saved a couple, just to remind myself of your story. I hope to read your sequel and wish you the best of luck with it.

Oh yeah, this is hilarious. I just remembered, I have a friend that's Chinese with the name Susan Wu with hair that also reaches down to her shoulders. She's a little quiet, but when she's not, she acts JUST like that, minus the not cursing part.
XD PLZ CoNtInEU SoooOOOOSNNN! 1!11111oneoneelleven1
Really. I'll be waiting. x)

OMG, its finally over, I just can't believe it was all in one story, you are such a good writer I am "completly" jealous. Not only did you write something orignal aka a non sap filled love story about to male characters acting like castrated drag queens, you kept my intrests for SIX months, I have never followed a story like I followed yours, and I absoultly loved the way you put little inspirational quotes at the begining of each chapter, I wrote some of them down for my own new fav's, also you are just so good at angst. At first I was so confused and I absolutly hated the chapters in which wufie is drugged b/c they didn't make sense, and then when you revealed he was being drugged everything made since and I loved it even more. So I guess I should have gotten off my ass and wrote you a review a lot sooner but I hope this makes up for it. And don't apologize for the grammer it really didn't hinder my reading or enjoying your story at all. Well hope to read more great works like this from you soon. And thank you for posting and writing such a wonderful piece of fiction.

NO!! Its over!! *begins crying* I love it!! Please hurry with the sequel!!